Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of NC-17. Age verification is required to proceed.
Passive Resistance – Part 5
Thankyou once again for all of your comments! Specifically:
Spaz – Here we go, you nagged me to write it so I have. I hope it doesn’t fail to disappoint.. ;)
Amanda aka Hotpepper – Thankyou for commenting again, it’s an honour..
Windrider – I love your fics, especially the raunchy ones. ;) Thankyou so much for commenting. Truly an honour.
adamant eve – Oh yeah, those bathrooms are the best. Do you like that I kept people guessing? ;)
Suzon – Thankyou for commenting. Here’s the continuation.. :)
cesario21 – Thanks for your continued support and comments.. hope you like this chapter. ;) x
1cutekid – I’m glad you enjoyed Shane’s interruption as much as I liked writing it. Thanks for commenting!
FC – I hope the tease was worth the wait.. if not.. I’ve failed you! And if that happens, I apologise in advance.. :)
Boney – Ah yes, the tension.. assertive Dana is exciting to write. Thankyou for taking the time to comment!
bvhall – I apologise for the recurring cliffhangers! This one wont be. Okay, so it might. I don’t know yet! Thanks for continued comments. :)
Roo – Glad you liked, thankyou for taking time to read and comment, it’s appreciated. :D
btvsfan – Please Sir, can I have some more? Ask and you shall receive..
shaz – Yeah, damn Shane, let’s hope she doesn’t get in the way this time. Thanks for commenting. :)
Debs – Thankyou for your comments. I try to make it as real as possible. :)
Alice looked up at Shane.
“Let me guess. Tonya. Right? Am I right or am I right?” Alice hissed.
Shane peered down at the two. Dana was still sat straddling Alice as if it was the most natural thing in the world.
“‘Fraid so you guys.” Shane raised her eyebrows. “She hasn’t seen me but I thought I’d warn you guys, I’m sorry for.. interrupting..” She broke into a grin again.
Dana looked away in embarassment. Alice noticed Dana’s embarrassment and took her hand.
“It’s ok Dane..” Alice gave Dana’s hand a little reassuring squeeze. “Shane, ***** get rid of her.”
Shane needed no other words, and disappeared from above the stall. Alice bobbed her head down to meet Dana’s eyes.
“Dana..” Alice fixed her eyes on Dana’s mouth. “..I’ve waited too ***** long for this, for this moment to just pass by..” Alice sighed.
Dana turned her head and looked at Alice.
“Me too..” She replied sincerely, and leaned in and gave Alice a sweet but lengthy kiss. “But not here..”
Alice nodded.
“Alright.. yeah..” Alice looked disappointed. She looked at the cubicle floor.
“How about your place?” Dana said boldly.
Alice speedily looked back up at Dana, mouth slightly open. She couldn’t help but start to grin.
“Are you sure?”
“Never been sure-r” Dana said seriously. “Wait..”
Alice’s expression went from happy to worried.
“Did I just make up a word?” Dana said, grinning.
They both exited the bathroom cautiously, Alice touched the small of Dana’s back as Dana left first, causing her to shiver. Alice saw the reaction and smiled. She knew tonight was going to be something special. Shane was leant up against the wall outside the bathroom with some woman she’d found who was devouring her neck.
“Psst! Shane!” Alice tried to get Shane’s attention. She looked about for signs of Tonya before attempting to establish contact with Shane again.
“SHANE!” She said more audibly this time.
Shane’s eyes darted toward Alice and she grinned.
“I got rid of her guys.. you know she’s quite a pushover really.” Shane said calmly whilst her victim was still paying due attention to Shanes neck area. Dana looked at Shane, then back at Alice. Alice looked at Dana.
“Right well! Great! We’ll just be going now. Thanks again Shane!” Alice hurriedly replied and took Dana’s hand leading her out of Milk.
“Phase Two complete.” grinned Shane.
———-
Outside Milk it had begun to rain.
“*****..” Alice said “C’mon.” She took Dana’s hand and they paced quickly upto Alice’s Mini. Alice felt a tug on her hand as they reached her car. Alice stopped at the tug and turned round to face Dana. Dana roughly pushed Alice up against the side door of the silver Mini causing it to rock a little as she kissed Alice’s mouth hungrily. Alice was suprised by Dana’s dominant streak but quickly all thoughts of that disappeared. Alice arched her back against the cold, slightly damp Mini as Dana pressed into her body. Dana’s hand made its way up Alice’s left side and into Alice’s hair as she grappled at the back of Alices head to deepen the kiss further. Alice looped her slim fingers through the loops in Dana’s jeans and pulled their hips flush against one another. Alice could feel Dana slowly begin to grind her hips into Alices and she moaned in anticipation. Their tongues danced around one another, tempting each into each others’ mouth and then back again. Realising where they were, Alice halted the kiss.
“***** rain” Alice said as she looked at Dana who was looking puzzled as to why Alice pulled out of their steamy liplock. Alice looked up at the sky and blinked as spots of rain fell at her face. “You gonna give us a chance to get in the car yet?” Alice grinned at Dana who grinned goofily back.
“Depends where we’re going” Dana flirted.
They both jumped enthusiastically into Alice’s car and set off to Alice’s pad.
Once parked in Alice’s driveway there was another awkward silence as they both stared out looking at Alice’s front door. Alice had been biting on her lip most of the journey to her house and whenever she looked over at Dana, Dana would’ve been glancing over at Alice which made them both look away quickly in embarrassment.
“So..” Alice started.
“So..” Dana repeated.
“This is.. where I live.”
“Al, I know it’s where you live. I have been here before.”
“Yeah.. well.. y’know.. *****..” Alice gave up trying to make sense. She opened her car door and got out. It was raining a little heavier now and she ran upto her apartment door. Dana got out of Al’s car and walked as quickly as she could to Alice’s door. She stood inches behind Alice as Alice fiddled with her keys, nervously missing the keyhole everytime.
“*****! Since when did the ***** locks get changed?!” Alice cursed.
Dana peered over Alice’s shoulder allowing her head to rest on it.
“Al, they’ve not changed, you just need to calm down” Dana smiled. She kissed Alice’s neck gently.
“Try again..” Dana breathed onto Alice’s neck. Alice was visibly shaken by the contact on her neck and gave up on the key situation for the time being. Alice took hold of Dana’s hands and wrapped them around her body from behind. Dana tightened the grip on Alice’s body and resumed kissing Alice’s smooth neck. Alice wanted to draw the night out as long as possible and so let Dana continue, whilst she let her head drop back and rest on Dana’s right shoulder. Alice’s hands were placed on top of Dana’s around her waist. The raindrops that graced Alice’s face ran down to her neck and Dana eagerly licked them off Alice’s now pulsing neck.
“I’ve wanted you for so long Al..” Dana whispered into Alices ear sending an electric shiver down Alice’s spine. “Do you want me to show you just how much?”
Alice nodded hastily, not opening her eyes, loving the feel of Dana’s arms around her and words in her ear. Dana slowly took the keys out of Alice’s hand and unlocked the door carefully, slowly, drawing out the process. She still had one arm wrapped around Alice, and she wasn’t about to let go anytime soon. Once the door was opened, Dana walked Alice in, let her go momentarily and shut the door behind them. She took Alice’s hand gently and led Alice up the stairs to her bedroom.
Alice said nothing on the journey up, she couldn’t believe Dana was the one leading her up the stairs to her own bedroom. Alice watched the way Dana’s hips swayed as she scaled each step, she could feel the heat rising in the groin of her jeans. Dana brought Alice into her own bedroom and sat down on the end of Alice’s bed. She looked up at Alice, holding both of her hands. She pulled Alice gently down on top of her on the bed. She cradled Alice’s face and brought her in for a kiss. At first it was slow, lips taking their time to taste the new skin that had been drawn together out of friendship. Alice took Dana’s bottom lip in between her own, sucking on it, and returning again to give the top one the same attention. Dana leant back onto the bed and pulled Alice firmly on top of her, Alice moaning at the contact of their bodies pressed flush together. Dana rolled over so she was on top of Alice and kissed her way across her lips and down the side of her neck until she reached the collar of Alice’s shirt. She looked up, and watched Alice as she began to undo the top button on Alice’s shirt. For every button undone, Dana kissed the newly exposed flesh longingly. She wanted to taste every inch of Alice, not worrying about the consequences of the unfolding relationship. Dana took Alice’s hands and held them above Alice’s head as she kissed her way down the exposed skin.
Dana let go of one of Alice’s hands and ran a finger down between Alice’s chest and laid her palm on Alice’s stomach. She kissed around Alice’s navel and slid her palm down to the crotch of Alice’s jeans. Alice moaned as she felt the heat of Dana’s hand on her. Dana looked up at Alice to follow her facial expressions as she slid down Al’s zipper and undid her button. Alice gripped Dana’s hand a little harder and arched her back slightly to try and catch more of Dana’s touch.
“Tell me it’s what you want Al..” Dana breathed, her heart skipping a beat as she looked onward at the partially uncovered Alice.
“I want it.. ” Alice managed to verbalise and she ground her hips into Dana’s hand on her crotch.
Dana slid her nimble hand into Alice’s pants and immediately felt Alice’s warmth and noticed her wetness.
“Dane..” Alice panted, her breathing noticably erratic. “*****..”
Dana loved the reaction she was getting from Alice. She had Alice squirming under her, Dana had never been so in control, she relished it.
With eyes fixed on Alice, Dana slid two of her nimble fingers into Alice, causing Alice’s eyes to open sharply, along with a sharp intake of breath. Alice’s face contorted pleasurably as she began grinding onto Dana’s fingers. Dana leant down to kiss Alice’s taut stomach as she thrusted her fingers harder into Alice, feeling Alice begin to contract around her.
“*****.. *****..” Alice could feel the ripple of pleasure about to envelope her.
Dana licked up the beads of sweat that had formed on Alice’s tummy and she used her thumb to tease Alice aswell as the fingers that were already inside her. Alice was now wildly bucking at Dana’s hand, eager to get release, incapable of rational thought. Alice moaned Dana’s name loudly and set off the chain reaction that had been building for the last 30 minutes in her bedroom, in her groin.
With one last thrust, Alice’s body started to shake as the ***** took her. Her back arched up off the bed as she came, gripping Dana’s hand firmly. She moaned Dana’s name one last time before collapsing her back onto the bed and allowing her body to come down from the high. Dana withdrew her fingers and crawled upto Alice, kissing her one last time before laying in Alice’s arms, letting them both drift off to sleep to the sound of rain hitting hard on the roof above the two new lovers.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.



(43 votes, average: 3.40 out of 5)
Well. What can I say? My Dana wanted to just make Alice feel good as soon as possible..
Wow! That was wicked hot! I just don’t understand, why didn’t they get undressed?
Congrats, anyway.
…*thud*…holy crap, that was fantastic!! well done you!! whew, having to wipe the steam off my monitor! brilliant as ever…eagerly awaiting part 6!!! xxx
Ssshhhh, Heartache! Don’t spoil the next chapter :) I also would like to see Dana get some, so it would be equal. Sorry, you totally got my mind going there. When I first read it, I needed to open the window, altough it’s about -2°C outside :P
Tonya was never there.. ;) Shane just wanted Alice and Dana to make it happen somewhere more dignified than a bathroom. :)
What can I say Heartache. You are the bomb! It makes all those cliffhangers totally worthwhile! Just wondering though, how did Shane get rid of Tonya? Another great read, congrats!!! Will we be seeing another chapter? Keep the Danish going!
Hello tr- the next chapter wasn’t going to involve any of those details anyway so I suppose I didn’t communicate that properly in this chapter. I’m glad you liked this one though. :)
Im loving the story Heartache….and just for the record….are ya sure you havent written a fic before? lol…keep up the great work…although im sure ya will….i cant wait for the next part!
Love it that Dana can’t keep her handand lips off Alice. Now to get rid of Tonya. like it.
looooove alice and dana together…..pleaaaaaaase keep going soon!!!
da-da-da-DAMN!!! so hot!!!
Woo Baby!! That was some hot stuff!! Great job Heartache!! Each chapter gets better and better. Can’t wait for the next one!!
So f*cking HOT! DAMN! I love Dana being the one in charge, it made it sooooo much hotter! :D