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Bette and Tina….The First Year of the Rest of Their Life….ch.47
Hello everyonebefore you start reading this chapter there is something I must sayI know you all dont know me and I really dont know all of you.but ever since the first post I added to this site back on April 30, 2004 I was hookedI loved reading and then I loved writing on this site.now I know Im not the best and I never said I was but then again I dont think Im the worst eitherwe are all great in our own Fan Fiction World.
Now I know we are just writing for fun and our own therapy until the Real Show comes back.I truly enjoy all of the comments and the e mails and I especially love the fact that I have made so many great friends hereand also starting to meet some of you
As I am sure all of the writers here do .we go back and check out the last story that we posted .I know I love to read and reread all of the comments.so yesterday after I finished writing my next chapter I went back . I couldnt believe what I saw.now I know we say the ratings dont mean a thing its the comments and e mailsand yes that is truebut deep down we all want that 5 star rating for our own ego .well I have been very proud of my self with my current seriesthey have all been 5 star chapters.so imagine my surprise when I went back yesterday and went back to the very first post and saw what were 5 star stories now more then half of the chapters that I have wrote were now 4 star and some were 3 starnow they werent like that the day before because like I said I always go back and checkSomeone had to sign on to another computer and another name and go one by one and low ball each and every chapter
Now I was so upset last night over this I was ready to hang it upand call it a day.so I vented to Angie(see thank God for the friends on this site) and its funny I also received 2 E Mails from people who never e mailed me before telling me how they enjoyed my storiesVeronica and Mel.you two have no idea how much it meant getting those e mails yesterday. And then Angieshe also wrote me …well in other words I think she would have found me and kicked my ***** if I stopped so Angie. THANKS
To the person who went through each and everyone of my stories and low balled them.I hope you got offI hope you are feeling real good about yourselfbecause you see no matter how hard you try you cant take away the comments or the e mails I receive
I am sorry to have to vent here like this but you see I wasnt the only one who this ***** hit.I noticed it on other writers.writers who had only received 5 star rating now have 4 star ratings.now I havent checked everybody’s but someone is definitely working over time on this
I think I said enough.I just had to vent. I cant say it enough…How much I love this show and how much I love to read and write about them.
Thanks for reading and listening
Love
Amanda
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Now on to chapter 47
Starting the shower they get in Tina remembering Lisa was their so they both just washed
Lisa heard them she just smiled got up and dressed.
15 minutes later
Tina: Walking into the kitchenOh your up
Lisa: Yeahyou two were too quiet this morning
Tina: Well(blushing)Well be out in a little while
Lisa: Take your time
On the way to The Planet Lisa rode with Tinathe ride was quietuntil
Tina: You ok sis
Lisa: yeah Im fine really
Tina: You know if you want you could go with Bette to work again todayI could get out of work early and pick you up
Lisa: You wouldnt mind
Tina: No …you could come to work with me the next time you visit
Lisa: Bette wouldnt mind
Tina: Please no she wouldnt mind
At The Planet
All get their breakfast
Tina: Hey babe Lisa is going to go with you to work today
Bette: smilinggreat
Tina: I am going to try to get off early and then Ill pick up and go shoppingwe are all going to Milk tonight
Lisa: WOW I forgot about thatI get to meet Kit
Alice: So where are you two going to take Lisa tomorrow night
Bette: Well now I dont think thats an issue anymore
Alice: I knew it you two werent going to go to a straight bar
Tina: Your wrong Alice
Bette: Yes Alice your slippingyou dont have all of the details this timeLets go ladies
Alice: hey dont leave me like this.
Tina: Good-bye Alicetalk to you later
Alice: well so do any of you guys know whats going on?
Shane: Alicethis is killing you isnt it
Dana: For once the mighty Alice doesnt know whats going to happen before the world does
Shane: Should be a very interesting weekend.see you later
All leave
Lisa: Thanks Bette for letting me go with you again today
Bette: its not a problemactually I think you two look so cute together
Lisa: You dothanks.how long have you known James?
Bette: well he started working here when he was in college.so about 2 years nowhe is really a nice guy
As Bette pulls in and they are walking into the CACJames sees Lisa and gets up and walks over to them
James: Morning LisaKissing her on the cheek.how are you todayMorning Bette
Bette: Morning Jamesany messages
James: Yes on your desk
Bette: Thanks walking into her office
Lisa: Morning JamesI had a great time last night
James: Me tooI thought you were going to Tinas todays?
Lisa: I was but she had a very busy morning planned so Bette suggested I come with her
James: Well I am so glad you didI would love to go out with you again tonightthats if your free
Lisa: Im sorry Jamesbut all week we have been planning to go to MilkI am going to meet Kit PorterBettes sister
James: Oh hey I understand
Lisa: But I would love to hang out with you all day on Saturday.my last day here on this visit that is
James: I would love thatwe could go to the beach
Lisa: Yes I would love to go the beachI love the beach
James: Greatoh and lunch later
Lisa: I was hoping you were going to ask
James: Ok I have a ton of work to do
Lisa: ok you get to itIll just bother Betteand Ill be ready when ever you are
In Bettes office
Lisa: He asked me to go to lunch with him…I said yes
Bette: oh thats good.Bettes phone.looking at the caller IDHello *****
Tina: And what if it wasnt me
Bette: Oh hi Tina.
Tina: Cute PorterIll get you for that.can you do me a favor babe
Bette: For you anything
Tina: Could you call ahead to a nice restaurant and pick up the check I want Lisa to take James out to lunch today and Ill pay you back in any method of payment of your choosingwith interest
Bette: I could do that but he already asked her out to lunch and she accepted
Tina: Oh really.he didnt waste any time did hebut I would still like to do that
Bette: Ill take care of it You owe me BIG TIME BABY
Tina: Dont forget the interest babedont forget the interestsee you later
Lisa: So what did Tina want?
Bette: looks like she wants to pick up the check for your lunch with James
Lisa: Why He asked me
Bette: Let me seeshe loves youshe wants to and what she wants she getsso let her do this for you
Lisa: OkIll tell James
Bette: NOIll take care of itdo you like Chinese food
Lisa: Well yeah
Bette: Good just tell him you want to go to Mings Chinese Restaurant And Ill take care of the rest
The rest of the morning went by and they were off to lunch
1:30Low knock on Bettes door
Bette: Reading and not looking up.Come in.give me one minute
Tina: Smiling. Ill give you all the time in the world
Bette: Oh babyshe gets upwalking over to Tinas and wrapping her arms around her and pulling her in for a kiss
Tina: I should come here more oftenis this how you greet all of the people who knock at your door
Bette: Only the ***** ones
Tina: So you think Im *****?
Bette: Do I ever I cant wait to get you home tonight
Tina: You do remember its Friday nightdinner and then we are going out to Milk later
Bette: I rememberso youre early.
Tina: I got off earlythought I would take Lisa out shopping at the mall
Bette: Your going shopping without me.poutingOh by the way Lisa is going out with James all day Saturdayto the beach
Tina: Well I guess we are going to go bathing suit shopping
Bette: Looking at her.really
Tina: Smilingand leaning in and wrapping her arms around Bettes waist not like we go bathing suit shopping babe
Bette: Well I should hope notshe is your sister
Tina: Want to join us
Bette: Maybelet me finish up and well see when they get backso you just sit and be quiet.
Tina decided to look around the Gallery
James and Lisa returned
James: Were back boss
Bette: Ok Hey James Im going to take off early so why dont you plan on leaving yourself
James: Greatthanks Boss
Lisa and James say their goodbyes and the girls all get into Bettes car and off to the Mall
Of course they went straight to that Bathing Suit Shop.Lisa looked and looked and found a few to try on and they all went back to the change roomsBette and Tina waited out side the door as Lisa went in and one by one she modeled for them.as they gave their opinion on each suituntil they all agreed on one
Finished shopping back to get Tinas car and home
They all got ready for Friday night dinner with the girls and then off to Milk
Walking into Milka lot of girls were eying Lisathey went to their tableordered drinks.seeing Kit at the DJ booth
Bette: Come on Lisa let me introduce you to Kit
Kit: Hey Bette hey TinaHow you doing tonightand who is this a younger Tina?
Bette: Kit this is LisaTinas sisterLisa this is Kit my sister
Kit: Well hello there little sisterpulling her in for a hug
Lisa: Hi …its a pleasure to meet you
Kit: Hey you know I could use some help up here in the DJs booth would you be interested
Lisa: Would IHell yeah I would
Tina: Smiling Thanks Kit
Bette and Tina go back to the table and the drinks are being backed upthey all had a great timedrinking and dancingLisa had a ball in the DJs booth with Kit
2:00amThey were all feeling no painKit would not let Bette drive home so Bette gave Lisa the keys and they were on their way home
Getting into the houseBette just attached Tina as soon as the door closedbefore Lisa could even say a word Tina was and Bette were both topless and their pants were not far behindLisa just went into her room
Bette: Oh babywhat you do to me as she reaches down and enters her with 2 fingers and her thumb was working her *****
Tina: Moaning oh God Bette.thats it babe yeah OOOOHHHHHH MMMMMYYYYY GGGGOOOODDDD.YES ***** ME..
As Bette reaches and curls her fingers Tina was climaxing into Bette.Bette didnt stop and she brought her over again with Tina yelling out her name soon they were silent
Lisa: Oh thank God.their donenow I can get some sleep
Hearing their bedroom door close…
Now it was Bettes turn to moan as Tina was going deep in Bette
Tina: Oh babe you are so wet. Bette was grinding her hips into Tina and Tina was going as deep as she could. sliding down her body she parts her lips and starts sucking on her *****. as it starts to pulsate in her mouth.
Bette cries out to Tina. ***** ME babyyeah right there. as Bette orgasms into Tinanot stopping she takes he over again as Bette arches her back and falls back into the bed Tina slides up and holds on to Bette kissing each other saying I Love Youas they both just collapse in each others arms and fall fast asleep
Again silence
Lisa: Just laying in her bedwith this huge grin on her face WOW what else can I sayrolling over and trying to get some sleepI can only hope I can find a lover like that God I hope so
TBC
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(69 votes, average: 4.26 out of 5)
OMG THAT WAS HOT AND FUNNY!
Amanda I haven’t even read this one yet but I am sure it is 5 stars plus I can’t imagine an asshole would go and do somethinglike that..I can’t always comment beause of work but when I read at home I always omment and your stories are one of my favorites I have been reading since the beinging in April please do not stop.. Sometimes when I try and rate a story it tells me I have already rated this story when I haven’t so I wou;d heck with Jackie and see if she can find out who is doing this…BUT please Amanda don’t stop writing…now I will go and read this chapter..
you have written yet another wonderful chapter. youre an amazing writter and whoever doesnt agree with that can just EAT IT!
Amanda yor storys will alway get 5*
I’m really sorry for you. Your writing is excellent and there are a lot of us that do enjoy it, quite a lot actually…. Keep on going strong…..
Amanda, i love your writing…i read and re-read your stories ritually…please don’t ever stop writing as my little heart would break…
to the person who is messing with the rating of the stories: karma is a bitch asshole…you must have a really pathetic life
I agree with the rest, as you can see there is a lot of support out here and we all love your stories…Please keep going……
Great chapter btw….I’m getting a little warm over here *wiping my brow*.lol:)
Thank you for writing these lovely stories for us to read. To hell with the naysayers.
***** as usual awsome chapter ***** (5 stars!!) LOL … :-D
Don’t let this person get you down. You are a good writer and I always enjoy your stories.. Keep the faith and keep on writing.
Amanda – sorry so sicko was doing it to a lot of others too.. We love your stories! Thank you!
Amanda, i know i may not have commented all the time, But I can guarantee that I have given you 5 stars every time. I love your story, and usually can’t wait to see if you have posted. Don’t let the nasty people stop you from doing what you want to do, because all us people that enjoy reading your story will miss out!!! Keep going, because you are writing a great story!!!! :)
I am with everyone else like this story.
Hey Amanda, just wanted to say that I think you’re one of the bright stars on this board from your stories to all of your encouraging comments to the writer’s. Please don’t let the maliciousness of others taint your view of this site, your writing, or ultimately, your love and our love for Bette, Tina, and the others. You’re like a breath of fresh air and I should’ve written to you before to let you know. I love your exuberance! Don’t go.
Amanada, the first story I read of your was about Melvin and how he had treated Tina. Been faithful,since. Love all of your stories. Don’t stop writing because of some stupid Malicious ,jealous Nut.We have seen you grow from a first timer to a wonderful write. Thanks to you and all the other writer,we the reader have never been bored. Just happy. Thanks again.
ya know truthfully, what you said about us killing time reading fan fiction, until the new season starts, i am not, I enjoy fan fiction, I will watch the new season, but i think we will all be a little dissapointed, if all the hype they have been doing goes true to form. i think you are very good, please dont quit. 5 stars
amazing as always! and hot! i love lisa and james. i can’t wait to see them all at milk and for lisa and james’ day at the beach. thanks for writing! :D …. on a side note, i totally agree with you on the lowballing of the ratings. it is terrible that someone would do such a thing. i give everyone 5’s just for posting cause it takes guts to put yourself out there! all the writers are fantastic and should be commended for their stories!
ya know truthfully, what you said about us killing time reading fan fiction, until the new season starts, i am not, I enjoy fan fiction, I will watch the new season, but i think we will all be a little dissapointed, if all the hype they have been doing goes true to form. i think you are very good, please dont quit. 5 stars
Amanda, I have been reading stories on this site for a long time now, and have never left a comment…. until now… I’ll give you all the stars it takes to keep you writing!
my dear amanda, I, too, have noticed this very same thing on my story…like last night…..my post had 5 stars, and today it has 4….I don’t know who is doing this but I seriously wish they would just dissapear…they make it hard on all of us….makes us feel as if we want to quit…I can’t stand these people…or this person who is doing this….fuck em…that’s what I say…I, for one, love ur stories, and they are all ’10’s……so keep writing and your loyal readers will follow…we love you…..
Hey Amanda…I’m so glad my email made you rethink…pls dont let that sick b***h dampen your spirits…You Know your stories are worth MORE than all the stars these ratings give…so let no one stop your creative flow to this site…Pleasseeee keep going with your wonderful stories…
Amanda,I’m sending over a big hug and 10 stars. Heck I’ll throw in the moon too. Please keep writing, too many people love your stories for you to stop because of one persons maliciousness. Hang in there.
i love your stories so please continue. 5 stars
YOUR ALWAYS 5 STARS!!!!!!
BTW, this is a 5 star story hands down.
Amanda I could read your stories all day. What an afternoon delight this is. I think I need a drink of water…I’m warm and all of a sudden.
I’m stunned. I just started posting a story and have had very friendly comments but your right I do really want them to be postitive. I, like you can handle some criticism but what you discribe is malicious. The spirit of this website is really damaged if someone of your quality and quality writing would be put off by one or two idiot. Thank you so much for your posts. I truly enjoy your update. Please keep going.
Great as usual…..don’t let anyone get to you……More really, really soon
I always like your stories….I just shouldn’t read them at work!!!Keep writing
A BIG FAT 5 STARS TO AMANDA YOU DESERVE NOTHING LESS !!!!
Amanda, I’ve never commented before but your stories ALWAYS make my days. . .lately my nights too! Don’t let that star-banger get you down!
Amanda..Just wanted to give you your props… you are an awesome writer and whom ever is doing the star bashing.. the hell with them.. I have followed your stories from the beginning and you are awesoome gal.. totally awesome.. keep up the good work.and … 5 stars to you!
for those of us who enjoy reading you talented writers but fail to comment, thank-you for sharing your talent with us, and don’t let an idiot speak for the masses.
for those of us who enjoy reading you talented writers but fail to comment, thank-you for sharing your talent with us, and don’t let an idiot speak for the masses.
You are a fantastic and creative writer. I can’t even imagine how you come up with these storylines. By the way, I love when B&T communicate in the third person, I think that is so clever,enjoyable,cute and sometimes so sexy. Also, I know it’s difficult to ignore the rating thing, but you do deserve all 5’s and you would definitely be getting 10’s if 10 was on the rating scale. Please don’t punish us for the ignorance of 1 or 2 people. Love your writing please continue.