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    Bette and Tina….The First Year of the Rest of Their Life….ch.47

    Hello everyonebefore you start reading this chapter there is something I must sayI know you all dont know me and I really dont know all of you.but ever since the first post I added to this site back on April 30, 2004 I was hookedI loved reading and then I loved writing on this site.now I know Im not the best and I never said I was but then again I dont think Im the worst eitherwe are all great in our own Fan Fiction World.

    Now I know we are just writing for fun and our own therapy until the Real Show comes back.I truly enjoy all of the comments and the e mails and I especially love the fact that I have made so many great friends hereand also starting to meet some of you

    As I am sure all of the writers here do .we go back and check out the last story that we posted .I know I love to read and reread all of the comments.so yesterday after I finished writing my next chapter I went back . I couldnt believe what I saw.now I know we say the ratings dont mean a thing its the comments and e mailsand yes that is truebut deep down we all want that 5 star rating for our own ego .well I have been very proud of my self with my current seriesthey have all been 5 star chapters.so imagine my surprise when I went back yesterday and went back to the very first post and saw what were 5 star stories now more then half of the chapters that I have wrote were now 4 star and some were 3 starnow they werent like that the day before because like I said I always go back and checkSomeone had to sign on to another computer and another name and go one by one and low ball each and every chapter

    Now I was so upset last night over this I was ready to hang it upand call it a day.so I vented to Angie(see thank God for the friends on this site) and its funny I also received 2 E Mails from people who never e mailed me before telling me how they enjoyed my storiesVeronica and Mel.you two have no idea how much it meant getting those e mails yesterday. And then Angieshe also wrote me …well in other words I think she would have found me and kicked my ***** if I stopped so Angie. THANKS

    To the person who went through each and everyone of my stories and low balled them.I hope you got offI hope you are feeling real good about yourselfbecause you see no matter how hard you try you cant take away the comments or the e mails I receive

    I am sorry to have to vent here like this but you see I wasnt the only one who this ***** hit.I noticed it on other writers.writers who had only received 5 star rating now have 4 star ratings.now I havent checked everybody’s but someone is definitely working over time on this

    I think I said enough.I just had to vent. I cant say it enough…How much I love this show and how much I love to read and write about them.

    Thanks for reading and listening
    Love
    Amanda

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    Now on to chapter 47


    Starting the shower they get in Tina remembering Lisa was their so they both just washed

    Lisa heard them she just smiled got up and dressed.
    15 minutes later

    Tina: Walking into the kitchenOh your up

    Lisa: Yeahyou two were too quiet this morning

    Tina: Well(blushing)Well be out in a little while

    Lisa: Take your time

    On the way to The Planet Lisa rode with Tinathe ride was quietuntil

    Tina: You ok sis

    Lisa: yeah Im fine really

    Tina: You know if you want you could go with Bette to work again todayI could get out of work early and pick you up

    Lisa: You wouldnt mind

    Tina: No …you could come to work with me the next time you visit

    Lisa: Bette wouldnt mind

    Tina: Please no she wouldnt mind

    At The Planet

    All get their breakfast

    Tina: Hey babe Lisa is going to go with you to work today

    Bette: smilinggreat

    Tina: I am going to try to get off early and then Ill pick up and go shoppingwe are all going to Milk tonight

    Lisa: WOW I forgot about thatI get to meet Kit

    Alice: So where are you two going to take Lisa tomorrow night

    Bette: Well now I dont think thats an issue anymore

    Alice: I knew it you two werent going to go to a straight bar

    Tina: Your wrong Alice

    Bette: Yes Alice your slippingyou dont have all of the details this timeLets go ladies

    Alice: hey dont leave me like this.

    Tina: Good-bye Alicetalk to you later

    Alice: well so do any of you guys know whats going on?

    Shane: Alicethis is killing you isnt it

    Dana: For once the mighty Alice doesnt know whats going to happen before the world does

    Shane: Should be a very interesting weekend.see you later

    All leave

    Lisa: Thanks Bette for letting me go with you again today

    Bette: its not a problemactually I think you two look so cute together

    Lisa: You dothanks.how long have you known James?

    Bette: well he started working here when he was in college.so about 2 years nowhe is really a nice guy

    As Bette pulls in and they are walking into the CACJames sees Lisa and gets up and walks over to them

    James: Morning LisaKissing her on the cheek.how are you todayMorning Bette

    Bette: Morning Jamesany messages

    James: Yes on your desk

    Bette: Thanks walking into her office

    Lisa: Morning JamesI had a great time last night

    James: Me tooI thought you were going to Tinas todays?

    Lisa: I was but she had a very busy morning planned so Bette suggested I come with her

    James: Well I am so glad you didI would love to go out with you again tonightthats if your free

    Lisa: Im sorry Jamesbut all week we have been planning to go to MilkI am going to meet Kit PorterBettes sister

    James: Oh hey I understand

    Lisa: But I would love to hang out with you all day on Saturday.my last day here on this visit that is

    James: I would love thatwe could go to the beach

    Lisa: Yes I would love to go the beachI love the beach

    James: Greatoh and lunch later

    Lisa: I was hoping you were going to ask

    James: Ok I have a ton of work to do

    Lisa: ok you get to itIll just bother Betteand Ill be ready when ever you are

    In Bettes office

    Lisa: He asked me to go to lunch with him…I said yes

    Bette: oh thats good.Bettes phone.looking at the caller IDHello *****

    Tina: And what if it wasnt me

    Bette: Oh hi Tina.

    Tina: Cute PorterIll get you for that.can you do me a favor babe

    Bette: For you anything

    Tina: Could you call ahead to a nice restaurant and pick up the check I want Lisa to take James out to lunch today and Ill pay you back in any method of payment of your choosingwith interest

    Bette: I could do that but he already asked her out to lunch and she accepted

    Tina: Oh really.he didnt waste any time did hebut I would still like to do that

    Bette: Ill take care of it You owe me BIG TIME BABY

    Tina: Dont forget the interest babedont forget the interestsee you later

    Lisa: So what did Tina want?

    Bette: looks like she wants to pick up the check for your lunch with James

    Lisa: Why He asked me

    Bette: Let me seeshe loves youshe wants to and what she wants she getsso let her do this for you

    Lisa: OkIll tell James

    Bette: NOIll take care of itdo you like Chinese food

    Lisa: Well yeah

    Bette: Good just tell him you want to go to Mings Chinese Restaurant And Ill take care of the rest

    The rest of the morning went by and they were off to lunch

    1:30Low knock on Bettes door

    Bette: Reading and not looking up.Come in.give me one minute

    Tina: Smiling. Ill give you all the time in the world

    Bette: Oh babyshe gets upwalking over to Tinas and wrapping her arms around her and pulling her in for a kiss

    Tina: I should come here more oftenis this how you greet all of the people who knock at your door

    Bette: Only the ***** ones

    Tina: So you think Im *****?

    Bette: Do I ever I cant wait to get you home tonight

    Tina: You do remember its Friday nightdinner and then we are going out to Milk later

    Bette: I rememberso youre early.

    Tina: I got off earlythought I would take Lisa out shopping at the mall

    Bette: Your going shopping without me.poutingOh by the way Lisa is going out with James all day Saturdayto the beach

    Tina: Well I guess we are going to go bathing suit shopping

    Bette: Looking at her.really

    Tina: Smilingand leaning in and wrapping her arms around Bettes waist not like we go bathing suit shopping babe

    Bette: Well I should hope notshe is your sister

    Tina: Want to join us

    Bette: Maybelet me finish up and well see when they get backso you just sit and be quiet.

    Tina decided to look around the Gallery

    James and Lisa returned

    James: Were back boss

    Bette: Ok Hey James Im going to take off early so why dont you plan on leaving yourself

    James: Greatthanks Boss

    Lisa and James say their goodbyes and the girls all get into Bettes car and off to the Mall

    Of course they went straight to that Bathing Suit Shop.Lisa looked and looked and found a few to try on and they all went back to the change roomsBette and Tina waited out side the door as Lisa went in and one by one she modeled for them.as they gave their opinion on each suituntil they all agreed on one

    Finished shopping back to get Tinas car and home

    They all got ready for Friday night dinner with the girls and then off to Milk

    Walking into Milka lot of girls were eying Lisathey went to their tableordered drinks.seeing Kit at the DJ booth

    Bette: Come on Lisa let me introduce you to Kit

    Kit: Hey Bette hey TinaHow you doing tonightand who is this a younger Tina?

    Bette: Kit this is LisaTinas sisterLisa this is Kit my sister

    Kit: Well hello there little sisterpulling her in for a hug

    Lisa: Hi …its a pleasure to meet you

    Kit: Hey you know I could use some help up here in the DJs booth would you be interested

    Lisa: Would IHell yeah I would

    Tina: Smiling Thanks Kit

    Bette and Tina go back to the table and the drinks are being backed upthey all had a great timedrinking and dancingLisa had a ball in the DJs booth with Kit

    2:00amThey were all feeling no painKit would not let Bette drive home so Bette gave Lisa the keys and they were on their way home
    Getting into the houseBette just attached Tina as soon as the door closedbefore Lisa could even say a word Tina was and Bette were both topless and their pants were not far behindLisa just went into her room

    Bette: Oh babywhat you do to me as she reaches down and enters her with 2 fingers and her thumb was working her *****

    Tina: Moaning oh God Bette.thats it babe yeah OOOOHHHHHH MMMMMYYYYY GGGGOOOODDDD.YES ***** ME..

    As Bette reaches and curls her fingers Tina was climaxing into Bette.Bette didnt stop and she brought her over again with Tina yelling out her name soon they were silent

    Lisa: Oh thank God.their donenow I can get some sleep

    Hearing their bedroom door close…

    Now it was Bettes turn to moan as Tina was going deep in Bette

    Tina: Oh babe you are so wet. Bette was grinding her hips into Tina and Tina was going as deep as she could. sliding down her body she parts her lips and starts sucking on her *****. as it starts to pulsate in her mouth.
    Bette cries out to Tina. ***** ME babyyeah right there. as Bette orgasms into Tinanot stopping she takes he over again as Bette arches her back and falls back into the bed Tina slides up and holds on to Bette kissing each other saying I Love Youas they both just collapse in each others arms and fall fast asleep
    Again silence

    Lisa: Just laying in her bedwith this huge grin on her face WOW what else can I sayrolling over and trying to get some sleepI can only hope I can find a lover like that God I hope so


    TBC



    Comments

    1. Amanda I haven’t even read this one yet but I am sure it is 5 stars plus I can’t imagine an asshole would go and do somethinglike that..I can’t always comment beause of work but when I read at home I always omment and your stories are one of my favorites I have been reading since the beinging in April please do not stop.. Sometimes when I try and rate a story it tells me I have already rated this story when I haven’t so I wou;d heck with Jackie and see if she can find out who is doing this…BUT please Amanda don’t stop writing…now I will go and read this chapter..

    2. Amanda, i love your writing…i read and re-read your stories ritually…please don’t ever stop writing as my little heart would break…

      to the person who is messing with the rating of the stories: karma is a bitch asshole…you must have a really pathetic life

    3. I agree with the rest, as you can see there is a lot of support out here and we all love your stories…Please keep going……

      Great chapter btw….I’m getting a little warm over here *wiping my brow*.lol:)

    4. Amanda, i know i may not have commented all the time, But I can guarantee that I have given you 5 stars every time. I love your story, and usually can’t wait to see if you have posted. Don’t let the nasty people stop you from doing what you want to do, because all us people that enjoy reading your story will miss out!!! Keep going, because you are writing a great story!!!! :)

    5. Hey Amanda, just wanted to say that I think you’re one of the bright stars on this board from your stories to all of your encouraging comments to the writer’s. Please don’t let the maliciousness of others taint your view of this site, your writing, or ultimately, your love and our love for Bette, Tina, and the others. You’re like a breath of fresh air and I should’ve written to you before to let you know. I love your exuberance! Don’t go.

    6. Amanada, the first story I read of your was about Melvin and how he had treated Tina. Been faithful,since. Love all of your stories. Don’t stop writing because of some stupid Malicious ,jealous Nut.We have seen you grow from a first timer to a wonderful write. Thanks to you and all the other writer,we the reader have never been bored. Just happy. Thanks again.

    7. ya know truthfully, what you said about us killing time reading fan fiction, until the new season starts, i am not, I enjoy fan fiction, I will watch the new season, but i think we will all be a little dissapointed, if all the hype they have been doing goes true to form. i think you are very good, please dont quit. 5 stars

    8. amazing as always! and hot! i love lisa and james. i can’t wait to see them all at milk and for lisa and james’ day at the beach. thanks for writing! :D …. on a side note, i totally agree with you on the lowballing of the ratings. it is terrible that someone would do such a thing. i give everyone 5’s just for posting cause it takes guts to put yourself out there! all the writers are fantastic and should be commended for their stories!

    9. ya know truthfully, what you said about us killing time reading fan fiction, until the new season starts, i am not, I enjoy fan fiction, I will watch the new season, but i think we will all be a little dissapointed, if all the hype they have been doing goes true to form. i think you are very good, please dont quit. 5 stars

    10. Amanda, I have been reading stories on this site for a long time now, and have never left a comment…. until now… I’ll give you all the stars it takes to keep you writing!

    11. my dear amanda, I, too, have noticed this very same thing on my story…like last night…..my post had 5 stars, and today it has 4….I don’t know who is doing this but I seriously wish they would just dissapear…they make it hard on all of us….makes us feel as if we want to quit…I can’t stand these people…or this person who is doing this….fuck em…that’s what I say…I, for one, love ur stories, and they are all ’10’s……so keep writing and your loyal readers will follow…we love you…..

    12. Hey Amanda…I’m so glad my email made you rethink…pls dont let that sick b***h dampen your spirits…You Know your stories are worth MORE than all the stars these ratings give…so let no one stop your creative flow to this site…Pleasseeee keep going with your wonderful stories…

    13. Amanda,I’m sending over a big hug and 10 stars. Heck I’ll throw in the moon too. Please keep writing, too many people love your stories for you to stop because of one persons maliciousness. Hang in there.

    14. I’m stunned. I just started posting a story and have had very friendly comments but your right I do really want them to be postitive. I, like you can handle some criticism but what you discribe is malicious. The spirit of this website is really damaged if someone of your quality and quality writing would be put off by one or two idiot. Thank you so much for your posts. I truly enjoy your update. Please keep going.

    15. Amanda..Just wanted to give you your props… you are an awesome writer and whom ever is doing the star bashing.. the hell with them.. I have followed your stories from the beginning and you are awesoome gal.. totally awesome.. keep up the good work.and … 5 stars to you!

    16. You are a fantastic and creative writer. I can’t even imagine how you come up with these storylines. By the way, I love when B&T communicate in the third person, I think that is so clever,enjoyable,cute and sometimes so sexy. Also, I know it’s difficult to ignore the rating thing, but you do deserve all 5’s and you would definitely be getting 10’s if 10 was on the rating scale. Please don’t punish us for the ignorance of 1 or 2 people. Love your writing please continue.

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