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The Girl Who Changed My Life 17: Our night
“Wait here” Bette told Tina as they entered the house.
She didn’t wait for a reply, and walked into the bedroom leaving Tina waiting in the lounge. After a few minutes Tina was growing impatient, but she knew Bette wouldn’t let her down. There was the click of the stereo being switched on, and sultry chords filled the house.
What’s it gonna be, coz I can’t pretend
Don’t you wanna be more than friends
Hold me tight and don’t let go, don’t let go
You have the right to lose control
Don’t let go
Bette appeared at the bedroom door and held her hand out to Tina, who walked towards her without ever breaking eye contact. Their hands joined and their eyes burned into each other as they moved slowly into the bedroom. Tina gasped when she entered the room – there was a row of candles on the window sill, rose petals scattered over the bed and the music continued to fill the air.
I often tell myself that we could be more than just friends
I know you think that if we move too soon it would all end
I live in misery when you’re not around
I won’t be satisfied til we’re taking those vows
“I love you” was all Tina could manage to say.
Bette pulled her close and their lips met. The kiss was slow and sensual – there was no hurry, they had forever. Tina ran her fingers softly down Bette’s cheeks and throat until they came to rest on the top button of her shirt. Bette’s hands caressed Tina’s waist, easing her top up gradually to expose more bare flesh.
There’ll be some love-making, heart-breaking, soul-shaking love
Love-making, heart-breaking, soul shaking
They broke away from the kiss and stared into each others’ eyes. Bette lifted Tina’s top over her head and cast it aside. Her eyes roamed over Tina’s bra-less chest as Tina slowly unbuttoned her shirt. As Tina pushed the shirt off Bette’s shoulders she moved her mouth to her neck and began licking and sucking. Bette groaned as Tina reached round to her back and unhooked her bra. As it fell to the floor, she pulled Tina into her arms and they held each other tightly.
What’s it gonna be, coz I can’t pretend
Don’t you wanna be more than friends
Hold me tight and don’t let go, don’t let go
You have the right to lose control
Don’t let go
Tina lifted Bette’s head so that their eyes met. From that moment on they could hear nothing but each others’ breathing, see nothing but one another. Bette leant her head into Tina’s chest. She trailed her tongue down Tina’s collarbone until it found her nipple. She flicked her tongue over it lightly before taking it in her mouth and sucking it. Tina moaned and ran her hands through Bette’s hair. As she continued sucking on Tina’s nipple. Bette’s hands roamed down Tina’s stomach to the waistband of her trousers. Without her mouth ever leaving Tina’s breast she pulled down her trousers and gasped.
“No underwear at all?” she groaned.
“I knew I was seeing you” Tina grinned and stepped out of her trousers.
Bette groaned again and guided Tina backwards until she was lying on the bed. Their eyes met as Bette slid off her own trousers and climbed on top of Tina. They kissed hungrily and Tina ran her fingers up Bette’s spine. Bette kissed her way down Tina’s neck and chest until she reached her *****. Her hand started to massage Tina’s left breast as she continued to kiss her way down her stomach.
“God…Bette” Tina breathed.
Bette’s head found its way to between Tina’s thighs. She blew gently and Tina shivered at the sensation. She flattened her tongue and ran it along the full length of Tina. Hearing her moan, she took her ***** in her mouth and sucked on it gently.
“Baby…ohhhh” Tina panted.
Bette climbed her way back up Tina’s body, running her tongue over as much skin as possible. Their faces drew level and they kissed almost desperately. As they continued kissing Tina rolled Bette over and lay on top of her. Their hands gripped together as Tina broke the kiss and stared into Bette’s eyes.
“I can’t wait to marry you” Tina whispered.
“I love you so much” came the raspy reply.
After another kiss Tina moved down Bette’s body until she was running her tongue over her taut stomach. Bette lifted her hips to allow Tina to slowly slide off her thong and throw it to the floor. She groaned as Tina teased her with her fingertips.
“Please…T…” she begged.
Tina slid two fingers inside Bette and pushed her palm hard against her *****. With her fingers thrusting a slow rhythm she kissed her way back up to Bette’s mouth. They kissed deeply until Bette moaned and gasped for air, and so Tina sucked gently on her bottom lip. Bette reached down and pulled Tina’s hand out of her. In one movement she flipped Tina over and pinned her hands either side of her head.
“Come with me” she whispered.
Scissoring her legs with Tina’s, Bette slowly lowered her body until she felt her crotch press against Tina’s. Reaching down, she parted both their lips and both women groaned as their ***** met. Grinding her body against Tina’s, Bette held ehr head so that they were staring into each others’ eyes. Tina’s hips rose to meet Bette’s as their hot bodies pressed together. Without breaking any contact Tina rolled them over so that it was her body pressing down on Bette’s. Feeling Bette’s hips bucking beneath her, Tina increased the pace and gripped their hands together.
They wrapped their legs round each other as orgasms took over them both. They stared into each others’ eyes as their bodies shook in pleasure. As her breathing slowed down Tina leant down and kissed Bette passionately.She rested her head on Bette’s shoulder and played with her hair.
“So what would you have done if I hadn’t said yes?” Tina asked playfully.
“Cried” Bette admitted “a lot”
“Thank you for the surprises” Tina looked round the room “all of them” she kissed Bette’s cheek.
“I wanted to make it special, so you’d never forget it”
“I’d never forget any moment with you”
They kissed slowly and allowed their tongues to brush gently against each other.
“So you didn’t just do this to stop me leaving you?” there was a hint of concern in Tina’s eyes.
“What do you think?” Bette stroked Tina’s hand “I love you and want to spend my life with you”
“Well I want to spend my life with you” Tina smiled.
“I love you” Bette kissed Tina’s forehead.
“I love you too”
Tina nuzzled her head into Bette’s shoulder and soon fell asleep in her arms, exhausted, not just from the ***** but from the heavy emotions that the past two days had incurred.
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(54 votes, average: 3.72 out of 5)
You ladies are great writer, Not only is the story line good You find the song to go with it Thanks
Awesome!
Ahhh. soo romantic. Thanks.
Very beautiful.
great… i love this lovely bette
That was brilliant, finally managed to reviw. It was really sweet.
Great………More, more really soon!!!
That was beautiful….Please continue….
I love this story and this chapter was perfect. What is the song in it?? Does anyone know- it looks awesome I wanna listen to it now!! Post soon!
What a beautiful part and a good song for that moment! Please continue, thank you!
hi LGLB, the song is Don’t Let Go by En Vogue. thanks for your feedback xxx
excellent.. now i’m off reading your other chapters.