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    Story written on January 4, 2005 by Shakennotstirred.
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    3. Oh my dear, dear Olives…how I have missed you. Your writing literally brings me to the edge of my seat, my back straight as a board, my whole upper body leaning towards my computer screen, as I try to remember to breathe. Thank you for this…Happy New Year!!

    7. there is absolutely no question in my mind that this is by far, one of the best stories to be found on this website. it was with your first story, “Umbrella” that i discovered your not hard to find talent, and it is with this story that it continues to evolve and impress.

      as usual, amazing job and as always, will be looking for more. thanks for this!

    9. just three words to describe this story…a may zing. you’ve captured such beautiful intimacy between B&T, I can’t wait till you post again. thank you so much for writing this, it’s sooooo good!

    10. Olives you are toying with us as badly as Tina is with Bette. You cannot be suggesting that this is the last chapter? There must be climax, I mean conclusion here.

    11. Ok, So I was sitting here reading this and I just started thinking. I get bored with the same old fanfic…i still read it because i enjoy the stories but theres only so much about the breakup or the meeting that you can read. Granted all of the authors on the site are very talented, but you just start to take it for granted. Then i read something like this and it just puts the whole relationship of these two characters back into that ‘Wow.’ that i got when i first watched them together…I guess all that really meant was thanks for writing so beautifully and making be believe that love can possibly exist out there.

    16. Olives, you blow my mind and warm my heart. Beautiful scene, simply done, bursting with emotion and desperation of two loves who are joined. I’m glad you’re not ending it yet.

    20. I have missed you. Your writings seemed to inspire others to write as well. It seems that the more chapters you go.. I see all the other writers leaving their comments here.. we all love both of your series.

      HAPPY NEW YEAR to you too. Best wishes to you.

      Such an intimate moment. All your chapters are beautifully and masterfully written. We only have around 6-8 weeks to go for S2.. don’t stop.

    21. Um. Well. Wow, huh? *deep breath* What else is left to say really? You are my literary god, I am but your humble foot washer and dear lord never stop writing. *thinks* Yeah. That probably sums it up. For now. I’m still working hard on my Cantonese courses to compliment you in a different way. Having trouble with the word for incredible. I’ll get back to you soon on that though. :D 5 stars!!!!

    24. I actually came upon this website kind of by accident…this story and your gifted storytelling is what keeps me coming back. Your perspective and development of these characters makes we wonder if the actual series can live up to what you set out here for us… Bravo!

    27. Ebony and Ivory…oh, sorry, just picturing my favorite couple on a piano bench together. I know this story has to end sometime, but hopefully not before 02.20.05.

    33. What can i say, i go away for the holidays and come home to find the greatest gift waiting for me. Another chapter in this wonderful story. Thank you so much it was so beautifully written. Please post soon i can’t stand the wait. O how i love the Chase

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