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The Promise
Nix- calm down love, take a deep breath…oh youll read what ever I write aye? I feel a little shakespearic verse coming on…j/k but now that I think about it…hmm Ill give you a shout out in the nex chapter if you can find it. ~Wink~
darkpoet9 – thanks..I worry more about characters than the story.
Bvhall-youre the greatest :) Ill keep coming with it. And Ill try to post another after the premi tonight.
Kabby- keep the pressure on or Ill find other things in my life to take priority over writing FF…next thing you know Ill be paying my bills, washing my clothes..it would be a disaster.
Shy- ***** yeah I wanna hear your song challenges IVENTINKLE@comcast.net and its also my AIM name, toss me on the buddy list, when I am online its the best way to get me. And how did I know you were a stalker? I saw you when I was paying my tab and the army navy store.
Lyn – thanks for commenting…any criticism?
Maybeyes – uhm…baby you might want to sit down and drink some chamolie tea before chapter 30…sorry :(
Ange- Genius loves company
M-Rave – how are you doing luv? This is almost mid terms right? Im here when you want to vent…..ps – next fantasy…you come home from break from school and your neighbor youve had a thing for creeps in and you do it in your bunk bed…little sis underneath sleeping. yeah I went there…and what!
Janet Marie – I hope that your reference to Yoda is about yourself…Im sticking with being Luke…Im still new to the force …especially since being dragged kicking and screaming from the closet..Ha! J/k …now to get a real light sabre! ~winks and wiggles her eyebrows~
M & L-wordjunkie – they will find their way…eventually…promise. Im glad you think it gets better every time, I think it gets worse…I thought my writing was getting predictable and my word usage is unimaginative…since I cant spell half the words I want to use.
Chapter 29
I want you by my side, I want you to keep me satisfied cause you know that Night time is the right time to be with the one you love… ~ Night or Day Ray Charles
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(16 votes, average: 4.25 out of 5)
Ok I need to know – What the hell is a wifebeater? JLo love the story as always, post soon as I have to wait till the autumn for season 2 to air in the UK and I need my fix. ;o)
I dont’like chamolie tea and I’m so sorry to love so much your story. You play with my feelings…
This was en excellentchpter I can really picture Bette helping Shane and Dash out..I can’t wait to sse this plan…Pleae continue..Foregt the bills and laundry they will keep…
Me again! Just wondered if the song challenges were open to all? If so try Keane – This Is The Last Time. It is a great track. Not sure if you would of heard of them as they are British but download the whole album it is quality.
Tbis story just keeps getting better and better. I really like Dash’s sense of humor.
Just finish watching first of S2. Thank God for F/F Love Bette in this the old Mother ben. Hope tina likes what she is doing. thanks.
Oh god I really love this Bette and can’t wait to see what a big plan that Bette make for Tina. Post soon, thank you!