Hey, yo, LadyBeige get over here and talk to the good people:

usuallyquiet ~ wow for someone who is usually quiet you say some damn nice things. lol thankyou sooooo much for the comment. what can i say im a fan of action adventure and this is the result.

Incendiary ~ Looks over the offering of M&M’s. I didnt know these came in boxes. lol. the only kind of hurt i have planned for Shane for now is emotional. its ok. I know where Marina is. I just dont feel like sayin. lol ; ) next time the lecturer comes. over just put a paper bag on your head an make siren noises. i guarantee they will try and ignore you (or pull out the tranquilizers)

alexandra ~ by the way i love your name. All the people I know called Alex are just the best people. BnT eh? vie written to certain point yeah, and well now there are two paths i can take. im not sure if you’ll be happy or angry….

Janet MG ~ oh not you again. bloody earthquake plot line stealer. lol. oh i would luv to to put a nice warm bullet into Shane but hey i cant kill off all of the characters too early i mena hey i cant just write about a pavement stained with blood. Though the outrage does sound tempting. Ill leave it for later ; ) have fun at work

msKhaos ~ lol you know im a cheeky *****. Hey i cant help it. lol

Incendiary ~ lol. you should try harder not to get busted. Thankyou for the call for comments. and yes my twisted mind does scare people. its great. I was always one of those kids who mothers would disapprove of their children being friends with. lol. gotta luv it. Yeah i try with the subliminal messaging. ; ) dont step away from the keys. keep hitting them to your hearts content. *tosses you a bottle of riddlein* though im sure you dont need it.

adamant eve ~ Marina is quite simply sitting on an iceberg until i chose to fly her back into the story. lol. Take care of that infection get better soon. *gives you a bowl of chicken noodle soup which is the customary food of the sick* and writing the drama is my pleasure more importantly thankyou for your comment.

gina ~ lol. im kind of trying to be irritating with the showdown to be honest. its like pushing the two north poles of a couple of magnets together. they just wont go, as such Tina and Dana will be dancing around for a little while yet. thanks for the comment. its what makes me write.

windrider ~ ahh on of the legends herself. might i say i absolutely love what your doing with your stuff. Poor Shane indeed. im planing to play a little bit with that one. Marina is just chillin. lol. i put her in the oven in a few chaps. ; ) keep it up mate.

AliC ~ I have a feeling, and you know of all of the people to have a feeling im probably the one to listen to, lol that Bette might be popping up very soon. Im so happy your still loving this story. Thanks for commenting.

nat ~ hey mate, if you get confused then just send me an email. I’ll be happy to eplain. Thanks for writing a comment. You rock!! lol. (I really like comments)

Boney ~ oh no, Tina isnt adequate completion for Dana in fact next chapter Tina falls over hits her head on the kerb and dies. LOL. sorry. my sense of humour is shot. Have fun mate. And thankyou for the comment. If you comment again I swear ill write a better comment reply.

TheRealJLO ~ well i guess i just listened to great music when i was writing it. lol thanks

bvhall ~ Ok i wont hurt Shane just yet *lets out evil cackle* marina is buried under a pile of marshmallows. jenny is a loony tune as in bugs bunny decided to wear her skin. Dana is in a world of ***** because she got flushed down the toilet and ended up in the sewer and Yes you right Tina is after her ***** and what a damn fine ***** it is., lol. im sorry. i think im too tiered/hung-over to write sensible replies to comments. But dont let that be confused with the fact that i am extremely grateful you took the time to comment. THANKYOU!!!!

Ness ~ is ‘Yowza’ an aussie word? Lol. Marina is just being Marina. Glad you felt the ride and the fact you bothered re-reading makes me blush lol. Thanks mate.


Gets up hits lady beige in the head with a bat for being a dumb arse and posts the damn story.

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A millisecond before impact Tina pulled out instead swerving into the park two in front of Danas

Shane had tears in her eyes. Tina! she screamed, shaking uncontrollably. Wow breaking up with Bette had really affected her

What the ***** was that? screamed Shane Tina you nearly killed her. You missed by like 2 inches Shane continued to rant

Yeah too ***** bad Tina muttered under her breath

What!? Shane Shouted still confused and pretty shaken up my nearly seeing Dana turn into a red smear.

Both Tina and Shane got out of the car. But not before Shane leaned across and pulled Tinas keys from the ignition.

Its ok Shane Dana stated calmly Im fine. Not even a scratch on me

The last part of the comment was an ever so slight go at Tina.

Tinas eyes widened, the presence of Shane being the only thing that was stopping her smack down the smug ***** in front of her. Wipe the small smile off her face by smashing out her front teeth

I really should get to training Dana stated coolly, glaring at Tina. Be careful Tina she said her sickly sweet voice dripping with venom. You wouldnt want someone to get hurt With that she got into her car leaving Tina to face Shane.

You know Tina, Shane started as the tyres of Danas Subaru squealed around the corner. If I didnt know better Id say you were trying to hit her. Tina desperately wanted to follow Dana. To make sure that she couldnt disappear.

Uh yeah Shane Tina muttered hopping from foot to foot. She looked at her keys dangling from Shanes nimble fingers. Shane caught the look and just as Tina lunged she moved her hand away

Ok Shane said putting Tinas keys into her arse pocket and quickly sitting on the hood of the black mustang Tina was driving for some reason. You are going to tell me what the ***** is going on ad you are going to tell me right now

Shane Tina groaned. Why were her friends always getting in the way? I cant tell you. Its that simple. Im still the person you know its just Im also something extra Tina hoped that Shane would pick up on the notes of sincerity with which she had loaded her voice.

Tina you just tried to kill one of my our, friends. There is nothing in you that I know Shane said her voice cool and even. She wasnt going to accept that bullshit answer from Tina. Shane wondered for a second if this weird behaviour had something to do with the ***** that BnT had gone through.

Tina was hit hard by Shanes words. She wasnt the one who was killing off their friends. Shane could handle her story she was sure. But more importantly Tina wasnt sure if she could handle Shane not knowing. She would only have to tell her a tiny bit to satisfy Shanes natural curiosity get her keys back and get the ***** after Dana.

Shane, she started, allowing her shoulders to visibly drop as if she has resigned herself to giving up the truth. My past is kind of different to what most people would think Tina sighed. The first rule she lived by was to tell no one.

I grew up on the streets Tina continued watching Shane for any reaction When I was about 18 I ended up in witness protection Tina didnt see any reaction from Shane. I was in new York

Shanes eyes widened. Tina had no idea why this little bit of information had Shane looking like she was about to be hit by a freight train.

She decided to try and give a little more personal info to bring Shane back to her My name was

Jasmine they both uttered. The word hung in the air the moment starched for eternity.

Shane started to back peddle in horror shaking her head. No, no you cant be. I would have known you cant be oh ***** oh *****. It was all said in a hurried whisper. Shane felt the anger building in her.

Tina had no idea what was happening. Shane was giving off mixed vibes of anger and fear.

Shane threw Tinas keys at her with all of her force. Tinas reflexes didnt betray her and she caught them easily in her right hand.

MURDERING *****! Shane screamed. Before turning and sprinting across two lanes of traffic. What the ***** was that Tina thought.

Shane stoped. Her body was shaking with anger and sobs. She had put that ***** behind her let go of it all but unfortunately she couldnt out run her past. And now she knew. Tinas past and hers crossed at one pivotal moment. One warm bullet. The man Tina had killed all those years ago had been Shanes father.

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Dana thought as she drove. Tina wasnt going away. Dana didnt want to kill her. Nona had made it quite clear she wanted this mess to be cleaned up. Bringing the wrath of the people Tina worked for down upon their family would hardly be considered cleaning. Dana made a decision she didnt think she had ever even considered before. No more killing. It was time to play smart. An idea slid across her mind. A smile was brought to her lips and she squeezed her foot down on the accelerator. Time to see just how much Tina cared.


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Final note:
Ok there were 15 comments last time. 556 or so readers that is 02.6501766% of people commenting (roughly) Goes off and sits in a corner and cries. Then thinks better of it gets up and does a dance because I GOT 15 COMMENTS!!! lol thanks guys.