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    Staring Into the Mirror Ch. 16 : Bathrooms, compromises and gum

    ~Las Vegas~

    Carmen ran down the hall in a full on sprint, she glanced back behind her to see Zo coming after her. Zo fell on her face giving Carmen sometime to get further away. She got to Shane and Andies door and began knocking furiously. She looked back again and saw Zo getting back up. Shane answered her door and started to say hello.

    Let me in quick. Theres no time for polite hellos. Carmen pushed her way in and closed the door fast, locking it.

    Wellcome on in. Shane said stepping back as Carmen stood with her hands on her knees trying to catch her breath.

    What the ***** is going on? Shane asked watching her.

    Zo ran past Brody, Tony and Ryan again, almost knocking Ryan over. She didnt stop to apologize she just kept going.

    What the ***** was that all about? Ryan asked staring at Zo as she got down to Shanes room and start hitting her fist on the door.

    I dont know. Brody shrugged. Maybe its a ***** thing.

    Zo screamed. Shane let me in!

    Carmen and Shane jumped at the angry knocking on the door.

    Oh *****! Carmen looked around for a place to hide and then slid into the bathroom before Shane could stop her.

    Hey wait! Shane yelled.

    Carmen closed the door and pressed her head against it taking a big breath.

    Shane stood at the bathroom door with her mouth wide open. The knocking at the other door started again.

    What in ***** name is going on? Shane said when she opened the door for Zo. She came in and stood breathing hard.

    Wheres Carmen? Zo asked between breaths.

    Shes in the bath Shane started and then stopped gaping at Zo with all of the red markings on her. What is all over you?

    One word. Zo made her way to the bathroom. God-damn-mother-*****–*****-tennis-player.

    Shane counted on her fingers. Umm..thats seven words, Z. Dont go in there

    Carmen turned around just as Andie ripped open the shower curtain. Both screamed at the top of their lungs. There stood a soaking wet naked Andie with Carmen gawking at her with wide eyes. Carmen pivoted around quickly as Andie searched for a towel.

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    Comments

    1. i just really like the i’m batman line it’s really cute and sweet….and romantic…great update even do the evil bitch made an appearance…”sigh” …can’t always win! adios y besos

    2. the second dana pulled out that stick of gum, i knew it was on….i thought she was gonna get shane but when she gave a stick to Zoe….man that was great. Oh by the way…don’t forget Batman is also part of the “Justice League”..

    3. HEE HEE… I was laffing like a goon. I too love the batman line. It’s great. *smiles* I hope Tarin gets what is coming to her eventually…. please don’t let her do too many bad things in the process….. PLEASE?

      Great chapter Shy….. Can’t wait for the next one.

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