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    Capitulation Part III

    Story written on March 4, 2005 by nouvelle.
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    Conversations continue in WeHo

    INT: THE PLANET: DAY
    (Tina and Helena are sitting at a table with cups in front of them. They are looking at Tinas ultrasound pictures. Shane approaches the door of the Planet. She spots Tina and Helena and turns away without even entering. Shane takes only a couple of steps before she encounters Alice and Dana walking toward the Planet. They stop on the sidewalk to talk.)

    Alice
    Hey Shane, you going to the Planet?

    Shane
    Nah, I saw something in there that I dont want to see.

    Dana
    Whats that? A roomful of nuns. (She laughs at her own joke).

    Shane
    That would be better than seeing Tina and her ***** looking at pictures of Bette and Tinas baby.

    Alice
    Its Tinas baby Shane, not Bette and Tinas.

    Shane
    Bullshit Al. Anyway, Im not going in there to pretend that Im happy for those two. I think it is low for Tina to be parading around West Hollywood showing off Bettes replacement.

    Alice
    Bette and Tina broke up, Shane. Theyve accepted it. Why cant you.

    Shane
    Because it isnt right, man, what Tina is doing to Bette.

    Alice
    It wasnt right what Bette did to Tina.

    Shane
    She doesnt deserve this *****. Anyway, I gotta go.
    (Shane turns and walks off down the sidewalk. Alice and Dana enter the Planet).

    INT: BETTES OFFICE: DAY
    (Bette is sitting at her desk working. She looks up when she hears at knock at her door. Tina enters).

    Bette
    (takes off her reading glasses and stands when she sees Tina enter).
    Tina, hi.

    Tina
    I hope its okay that I came by, Im not interrupting anything am I?

    Bette
    Youre welcome to come by anytime, T. Is everything okay?

    Tina
    Yeah, I uh, thought you might, uh, like to see the ultrasound pictures.

    Bette
    (giving her heartbreaking smile)
    Really?

    (Tina hands the pictures to Bette. Her eyes water as she looks at the pictures).

    Tina
    I cant tell much from the pictures, they arent very clear. Doctor Wilson says that everything is great, though.

    Bette
    (hands the pictures back to Tina. She tries to discretely wipe her eyes while Tina is putting the pictures back in her purse).
    Thats great. If you ever need someone to take you to any of your appointments, I will be happy to do so.

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    5. This is fresh. I love the screenplay format. It reads really quickly and clearly.
      Helena is pouring it on, isn’t she?
      Bette seems resigned to her fate. Tina may realized she acted to hastily.
      Thanks for posting another Part in the same day!

    6. please ditto all that Seahurst said. i have just caught up on this and am enjoying it very much. you know, it’s funny in that in just 2 episodes, the writers have made me lose all sympathy for the character of Tina and it is Bette (the character of) that i feel the most sorry for (perhaps that is evident somewhat in what i have written, but this season is merely cementing those sentiments). ok- am rambling, but thanks for this perspective and know that i am really enjoying it.

    7. WOW! Nouvelle…this is incredible…I love the format…I love the storyline…I love the whole thing…now you know you are NOT busy at work, so go ahead and post a few more…help make my Friday night entertaining. GOOD JOB> thank you for the hard work.

    12. Man! Helena’s a real bitch, huh? Seems we’ve got the 2nd season Marina. Can’t they get rid of Helena and bring back Marina? (God, I never thought i’d ever say something like that… lol). Really great chapter, bravo:) I’m really looking forward to the next one.

    16. Nice story you have going… I love the screen play format..I am really feeling for Bette..she really knows she did some damage ..to the relationship..so sad….At least she is talking to Tina….can’t wait for the next chapter..:)

    19. Oh man I don’t like Helena and she is a bitch. This is heartbreaking when Helena tell Bette all about Tina and her together, that just bad man bad, I just feel hurt for Bette when she heard those words coming out of Helena mouth that just killing her man. But glad that Tina come by later and to Bette about and hope next time she and Bette will have a good talk together. Please post soon the next one soon, thank you! Great chapter!

    23. How long will Tina put up with Helena BS. she is still protected of Bette and her feeling. Tina said the baby is her and Bette .Bette said NO. how does this make Tina really feel. Thanks so much love your writing.

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