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The Roommates Finale: Chapter 37
Previously~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
They had spent weeks together hanging in an emotional limbo where their love was taboo and unrequited. Despite these limitations, their connection had continued to grow and intensify. In the past weeks, Bette had known when Tina needed her voice, her touch, her smile, her wisdom. Tina had known when Bette needed her.
Bette and Tina really were like Yin and Yang. When one was yin, dark, cold, weak, the other was yang, bright, active, strong. They were strengthened by each other. Their individual synergies meshing to balance out their union
Yepits just you and me. You really do belong in my arms. Tina leaned in and kissed Bettes lips lightly. She started to pull away and Bette deepened the kiss, running her tongue along Tinas bottom lip. Tinas mouth opened slightly, welcoming the feel of her lovers tongue.
And so the dance began. The soft, sensual dance of love that started in their lips, traveled down and directed the motion of their fingertips, ultimately ending in the juncture between their hips. This kiss was passionate and loving; symbolic of Bette letting Tina behind her emotional wall. The couple had not been intimate since Tuesday evening and Tina wanted to make up for lost time. Her slender hands continued the dance, exploring Bettes curves, resting above her lovers center, pleading for entry.
Bette pulled away, struggling to catch her breath. T.please, lets stop. We talked about this.
Tina let out a frustrated sigh. This was one of the few things they had discussed. Bette, this is going to kill me. I cant go two weeks without touching you.
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In the three weeks following their heart-to-heart, Tina had been witness to the slow reemergence of the real Bette Porter. Bettes confidence, energy, smile, and inner sparkle had finally returned. The dark-haired beauty was now living in a world where she could follow her heart and trust Tina with her love.
In this time period, almost all barriers to their love-making had been removed. Tinas pregnancy blood test and STD screen had come back negative; as had Bettes STD screen and HIV results. The young couple was all ready to engage in their much needed toe-curling and mind-blowing sexual release when they hit another snag. Tinas long lost period finally made an appearance. Bringing with it Bettes own monthly visitor and putting their sexual union on hold once more.
Despite the setback, relief was on the horizon. Bettes father was going to be out of town on business, starting the week Bette was supposed to return home for winter break. After much begging, pleading, praying, and promising, Tina had convinced her parents to let her stay with Bette during this week before flying home for the holidays. As it was, their bags were already packed and the two women were wrapped up in each others embrace, sleeping softly, resting up for the mornings drive to San Diego.
One thing they had perfected in the past few weeks was coordinating things so that they slept in the bed nearest the earliest sounding alarm. When she heard the all too familiar buzzing at 10am, Bette rolled over and shut off her alarm. She and Tina had decided to sleep in before leaving for San Diego. Final exams had thoroughly exhausted them both. Bette wrapped her arms around Tina and held her tightly.
Good morning, baby., said Tina, her eyes still closed, her head resting on Bettes chest.
Morning, T., said Bette before kissing Tinas forehead.
Im still so tired, Bette.
You can sleep in the car on the way to the house. Ill let you rest., said Bette.
Tina smiled at her girlfriends thoughtfulness. And what about you? Whos going to watch out and make sure you dont fall asleep behind the wheel? I know youre exhausted.
T, lets sleep for one more hour. We dont have any reason to rush.
Sounds great.
Bette reached over and reset the alarm before drifting back to sleep with Tina in her arms.
Hours later, Bette was pulling up at her house in San Diego. Tina was in awe of the large two-story dwelling. Her eyes rolled over the luscious palm trees and foliage skirting the large, meticulously manicured front lawn. They pulled into a spacious garage and Bette popped the trunk of the car.
Welcome to my humble abode, T. ,she said with a smile, before planting a light kiss on Tinas lips.
They grabbed their bags and walked in through the kitchen and made it upstairs to Bettes room.
So, this is the princess lair?, asked Tina.
This room represented a side of Bette that Tina had never seen. The carpet was thick and inviting; a sea of snow white against the rooms cream colored walls. As her eyes roamed this large living space, Tina noticed that everything was extremely immaculate. Bettes mahogany four-post bed was made with military-style precision. There were light cream-colored sashes hanging down from the posts, enveloping the bed with sheer cloak of privacy. Tina again noticed the absence of photos adorning Bettes inner sanctum and her eyes were drawn to the one photo present in the room. It was a framed 8×10 resting on Bettes dresser.
Tina walked slowly to the photo and picked up the frame. The photo had to be several years old because Bette looked to be about 10 years old in the picture. She was seated in between Melvin and woman with long, flowing blond hair and sad blue eyes.
Is this your mom?, asked Tina.
What?, asked Bette, she was moving their bags around in the room, oblivious to Tinas journey.
This picture, is this your mom?, asked Tina.
Bette walked over to her girlfriend. Yeah, thats her. She looked unhappy even then. Bette took the frame from Tina and placed it face down on the dresser.
Lets not think about her, T. Lets relax. You wanna go out to the pool? We have the place totally to ourselves., said Bette.
Tina smiled and leaned in, kissing Bettes lips. Id love to see your body in the pool.
Bette felt her *****-starved body respond to this light touch and pulled Tina to her tightly, crushing her girlfriends lips with her own, her tongue demanding entry into her loves mouth. Tina obliged her request and soon their tongues met, Bette exploring every inch of Tinas mouth. Tina pulled back from their heated kiss and looked into Bettes eyes.
Guess what?, she asked Bette.
Bettes eyes were heavy with lust and she chewed her lower lip, the desire coursing through her veins. What?
My periods over. Im all yours babe. I believe we have a lot to catch up on.
Bette had way too much pent up desire stored in her body. These few words excited her in ways that didnt seem to make any sense. She could feel her wetness begin to pool at her core, her ***** already throbbing at the thought of making love to Tina. Mine is over too. This is going to be a wonderful week., Bette said with a smile.
Tina saw the dark lust in her lovers eyes and felt her heart rate speed up and a lump rise in her throat. In seconds, she was wrapped in Bettes embrace, her hands roaming her lovers body, as Bette placed hungry kisses on her exposed neck. Tinas ***** was aching. Shed waited weeks for this release and she needed it.now. With none of the hesitation that had started their relationship, she grabbed her lovers hand and brought it to her center, signaling her desire.
Bette smiled into Tinas eyes, understanding this message and wanting nothing more than to make her lover scream. Bette walked Tina over to her bed and laid her love down on the soft cream comforter. In moments, they were both naked and Bette moved to straddle Tina. The beautiful blonde could feel her lovers wetness coating her thigh as Bette bent down to devour Tinas *****. Tina held onto Bettes dark tresses as her arousal began to reach a feverish peak. Bettes teeth tugged lightly at her lovers erect nipple, sending chills down Tinas spine and another wave of excitement slipping out of her body. Each tug felt like a stroke of Tinas *****, edging her closer and closer to climax.
Tina licked her lips and reached down to feel Bettes wetness. As Tina teased her lovers *****, Bette stopped moving, resting her head on Tinas chest. The sensation was too much for Bette to handle.
Tina couldnt help herself. She had been waiting too long for this moment. She continued to stroke Bettes ***** with her fingers, drawing moans from her caramel beauty, enjoying the feel of the soft, moist flesh. Tinas voice came out a husky whisper, Bette.you are so wet. You feel so good, baby. Bette trembled at this utterance as a light sweat broke out on her body.
Tina slid two fingers inside of Bette, the silk slipping from her lovers core heightening her arousal. Ahhhhhh!…….Tina., Bette moaned, her eyes rolling into the back of her head.
Tina teased Bettes silky walls and felt her own climax approaching. The beautiful blonde wanted an even stronger connection with her girlfriend. She removed her fingers and flipped them so that Bette was on the bottom and repositioned them so that their ***** would be touching.
As Tina eased down and her center met Bettes, a rush surged through her, driving her need to climax. Her entire body trembled as their ***** met, their wetness mixing as their hips rhythmically built their impending release. They were in a world all their own. The sounds of flesh on flesh, liquid *****, and verbal declarations of arousal filled the room.
Tina reached down and grabbed Bettes hands, holding them down on the bed, their fingers entwined.
Bettes high-pitched, lust-laced voice gave the first warning. Ohhhhh, T.Im cumming.
Tina could feel her own ***** building with Bettes. ***** with me, baby., she moaned, her hips moving, sweat trickling down between her *****.
Bette could feel the beginnings of her explosion, the brilliant waves that started to flow from her core and grew in intensity until she closed her eyes tight, felt her muscles contract, exploded from the inside out, touched the stars, and was left trembling from the experience.
Tina was a few seconds behind, screaming Bettes name and finally collapsing into Bettes arms, her intense climax draining every drop of Tinas energy, leaving her weak and quivering. They held on to each other tightly, both shedding a few tears at the power of this experience. Tears that were borne out of joy and love.not stress or strife. Their love making had served to connect them in ways that were beyond their understanding. However, their emotions understood the intensity of this union and sought to express the wonder of their love through those salty tears.
Bette Porter and Tina Kennard had endured significant trials and triumphs in the past few months. In a span of weeks they had moved from being roommates, to friends, to lovers, to best friends, to girlfriends, and finally through the unique combination of all of these levels of relationships and experiences, they had come to exist in a world beyond walls, rules, and reason where only soul mates could survive.
They lay there in each others arms, getting lost in each others eyes. A slight fear of the intensity in their unique connection slithered around, lurking in both light and dark brown orbs. As their breathing evened out and lust transformed into comfort, it was apparent to both women that their union was deep and soul-stirring. Despite their trepidation, a blonde head rested on a strong caramel shoulder, both understanding that there were many challenges ahead, but nevertheless ready to explore this new dimension in their young lives.
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ls says
Please continue this story..its so good
marsupial says
I CAN’T BELIEVE IT’S OVER. CAN’T WAIT TO READ WHAT IS NEXT IN THAT MIND OF YOURS
christys says
so much for my lunch break reading… guess maybe i’ll actually get work done now!! thanks.. it’s been great, i look forward to the 2nd dimension
Christy says
WOOT, bring on 2nd dimension!!! :D
Erin says
This has been one of the best stories that I have read. I’m sorry to see it end and I hope that you start another soon. Thanks for making my days more enjoyable!!!
niknax71 says
Great story.I think its to have a sequel rather than carry on with the same one. I look forward to it.Thanks
niknax71 says
oops i’ll write my comment again as missed out words.Great story.I think its better to have a sequel rather than carry on with the same one.(i agree with what cohen said)I look forward to it.Thanks
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gia says
Finally get to comment, (reading the story while driving is wrong, but commenting while driving is completely insane)!! Anyway, now that I’m home, I’d like to add to the growing list of people who are enamoured with your writing. This story was absolutely incredible and deserves any and all accolades. Bravo to you, MoreThanSatisfied!
cameroncrazy says
I have really enjoyed this story – very well written & plenty of surprises. How about a story that starts the day B&T graduate?
Portercharm says
I was at a loss when I read finale..but I am glad that you are already thinking sequel!! So many changes happen in college. College parties alone cause drama!! I can’t wait for your next posting. Thanks for entertaining us!
phyl says
That was a lovely, satisfying ending, although I’m sorry it’s over. Thanks
Change says
“liquid sex,”…wow, that was HOT!! I’m sad to see the finale of this portion of their lives, but at the same time, I can’t wait for ‘2nd Dimension.’ It’s been fun reading your story, I loved it…truly! Hope to see the sequel soon. Thank you MTS!!
24betteandtina says
Great job! I can’t wait for the next “chapter” of their lives to begin.
phantomframe says
Awww, I loved this story! Looking forward to the sequel!
MLBFAN says
Wonderful story MTS. Can’t wait to dive into the sequel. Oh, and the last three paragraphs in particular were incredibly well-written.
Revolution says
hotness! yes! loved it! i say bring on the second and the third and the fourth dimension, wowzers Jiminy Christmas! I can’t tell you how much I’ve enjoyed this story. It has a perfect blend of young love, drama, passion, intimacy, it’s just great. I love your writing. really really I do. I hope to read more of your work. Thank you for this.
ChakaSB says
That was 37 amazing chapters! Compelling, tender – very well written. Thank you for sharing you talent with us – the moments of escape were well appreciated.
Lyn says
Beautiful chapter. I’m sad the story is ending but happy to see the sequel so hope you will give us the next new story soon, thank you so much for sharing this with us. Thank you!
Laurel says
I have read every one of your chapters and have falling in love I adore B & T and them young and in college together has been a great journey. Thank you heaps for the story and I will be hang out for the sequel!!
Wayout says
MTS, I can’t resist saying it: That’s going out with a bang! *groan* I’m so glad Melvin did not come home unexpectedly and that the girls have reconnected. Gonna be an exhausting week ’til Tina needs to go home. See now, I thought they’d have to repeat the semester because of missed classes and the distraction that interfered with studying. The possibilities are endless: Bette and Tina, Freshman Year … Again; TiBette: The Extra Semesters; The Elusive Graduation. I dare not continue!
I think you’ve gotten the point by now (thanks for the mention above, BTW) that I have loved this story. I refuse to become weepy at this being over, especially because I think you’ve reached a logical conclusion. But I hope you won’t make us wait too terribly long to read more of your wonderful prose. Your writing is excellent and I am so grateful that you have shared it with us. My most sincere thanks and gratitude to you.
margot says
again, amazing way to end it. and on an odd note, i just want to say how i appreciate the whole “previously” thing, it really helps tie things together for me and make me remember…not like i forget what happens anyways! but this is a helluva a great series, i’m so so so so so happy to hear you’re continuting it. you write their emotions so well and your descriptive words are great. amazing, amazing beginnig, hey.. are they going to study abroad? :) haha, i love this story, can’t wait for the next installment, don’t keep us waiting too long :)
jo says
Please please contine with this story I think its one of the best the now
betty says
You did a wonderful job…pity to see it end so soon…
zabo says
Finale?!?!?! I like your writing, please write some sequel or another fic… love this and surely will fell for another one…
callmecrazy says
LOVED it… hope you write a sequel or another story! thanks!
Lady_oracle says
The horror I felt when I read the word “finale”…I was not ready to go cold turkey from this wonderful addiction…but then I read on and see where there is a sequel in the works. Whewwwww!(gasp, sigh of relief: insert here). As you can guess, I am very much looking forward to your next offering. Thank you.
rosie says
Thanks for this series, very special. Hope you have another story in your plans.
Z says
This story was fantastic-thank you. Can’t wait for part two.
tidgley says
sorry that I`ve never commented before but I`ve been with ya from the beginning and now all I want to say is Noooooooooo!! It can`t be over!! I absolutely adore reading your fanfic. u r one talented person and so thankyou for every chapter!!! I`m still gutted but can`t wait will for “The Roommates – 2nd Dimension”! I`m dead excited!! bye!!!
BTaddict says
(recovering from the horror in reading the words ‘FINALE’ … whew!) That was kind of mean to torment me so, MTS ~ I was just about ready to cry … and I have a tennis match to focus on and all :) However, since you shall return with a sequel, all is forgiven ~ yeah, even the missing tooth when I fainted and knocked it against the desk, recovering back pain from your many twists & turns, and constant need for asthma inhalers brought on by suspense… I await your next installment. You certainly have a gift with the written word and I thank you for sharing it with us all…as always, I remain a faithful MTS reader. [Oh yeah, prepare that acceptance speech ‘coz this series is most definitely a winner!]
downlow95 says
A perfect end to a wonderful story. I am looking foward to the sequel!
curlywurly says
loved this chapter, can’t wait for the sequel!
paula says
Wow, hate to see this end…what’s next????
Kat says
I have to say I love this story and have read every chapter even though I have not found the time to comment. Glad to see a sequel on its way, no doubt it will meet the same requirements of being amazing and spectacular as this one. thanx k xx
Lwordjunkie says
WOW…woman I am in love with this story of our B&T you have taken me on such a lovely journey..I am so looking forward to the next installment of your story…and yes you do deserve an award for this..its soo beautifully written and the words flow on the pages so freely…AWESOME..can’t wait for the next one..take care
D says
The whole story was beautiful. I’m sad to see it send.
irisheyes says
Great. Thanks a million for entertaining us daily for weeks. Can’t wait to start your new one. I’m not particularly patient BTW…..today maybe?
tamaratag says
I didn’t always comment but always gratefully read thank you for an amazing story your writing is very vivid and emotion filled you’ve left me wanting so much more I’m looking forward to the sequel I simply adored this story from day one. Thanks for sharing your time and talent SUPERB writing and brillant story telling again thank you!!!!
B says
Thankyou so much for such a wonderful story and so well written looking forward to your next story oh and before i forget that was very hot!mmmm
Xenite says
Just wanted to say thank you for a great story, I really enjoyed it! Battle on, TiBette fans!!!
ankus says
more…more…i just can’t get enough…yai seguel…
searchin says
my heart sank as i was scrolling thru todays delights as i saw the dreaded word “finale”, but i am looking forward to your next story with great anticipation…thanks for sharing this with us we have so enjoyed roomates
FireCracker1230 says
I dont know what i could posibly say that hasnt been said to you, but I’ll try anyway. You’re a wonderfully talented person and youre a great writer to have on the site. I cant wait to read your next one because Im sure it will be nothing short of spectacular. Great job!
shades says
Thanks for this incredibly amazing story. You have taken us all on such a wonderful emotional journey and such a heartwarming finale. Anxiously awaiting the sequel. You continue writing and we’ll continue reading
slacker says
Very nice. Looking forward to more BabyBette and TinyTina adventures.
lost1 says
this is such a great story thank u so much for it!! Cant wait for the 2nd part please post soon!! im loving ur writing!!:)
rebakathy1 says
Jeez! That was fantastic. Can’t wait for the sequel. Ah gotta love it!
Angelica says
BRAVO!… I have been a silent reader throught this story but i think its time for me to say a few words… this is a wonderful story..totally loved the ending… and loved your writing.. im glad that bette and tina can over come so many things… as they say love can conquer all.and in this case. I say Yes it does… great job!
Nat says
that was awesome. i’m eagerly anticipating the next stage of BnT.
just me says
the whole series was great, beginning to end. i’m glad to see you are planning on a new one and not leaving us hanging. keep going. your writing is great!
Biased says
I am sorry 2 see this story end, but i’m excited that you’ll keep it going in another format. Thank you for sharing your gift… looking forward to more BnT love and drama
Skipton says
great story. easier to take it ending knowing that another one is in the works. thanks for this and for what more is to come.
chazza says
Can’t wait for the sequel. Love this story!
momo says
WOW thank you for this Beautiful story we love it so I’m just wait for one more new story I can’t wait to see it but we love your story so I’m really happy that you have another one to sharing THANK YOU for your AMAZING STORY.
techgal says
I’m glad Melvin didn’t pop in.
That was one heck of a first semester!
I wonder what senior year will bring? Grad school?
Thanks for doing this story. Let’s let them rest for a while and come back next semester, shall we?
trecelovinit says
I’m sad to see it end because this was such a wonderful story. Can’t wait for the sequel!!!
s says
you got on my list. thumbs up.
limegreenant says
and again a great chapter! I’m sad to see it end but looking fwd to reading the sequel. ur story was the first one id check for new chapters when i got home from work and im sure the sequel will b even better.
sunday says
This was truly a beautiful story. I read every chapter and found myself looking every day for the next new chapter. I just would like to say thanks for taking the time to give of yourself in writing these stories…
truBlue says
Looking forward to the sequel. This story was well written and conceived. Thanks so much for this experience.
Mates says
Thank you so much for this story….i have love it every step of the way….Eagerly awaiting the sequel:)
sweetpea says
I was very slack in leaving comments and for that I apologize. I have read and enjoyed this story from the beginning. Thanks for the ride and looking forward to the next chapter is our girl’s lives.
karen says
totally loved it all,thanks.
Journey1962 says
Excellent story. Their emotional highs and lows very well written. If I don’t stop now I’ll never get anything done. Including sleep. :) I’m five years late but glad that I found it :)
SassyGran says
Great Story, glad I found it. Also glad to see there’s a sequel. Journey1962 might be 5 years late but I’m nearly a decade late, oh well, story of my life :)