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Letting Her Have It…Sequel to Now That Was Different
Tina and Helena followed the gazes of the women in front of them and saw what they saw. Tinas mouth dropped open in shock. She opened and closed her mouth to say something as she watched Bette and Carmen pull apart and smile at one another. Taking each others hand they walked off the dance floor to go back to their table presumably.
That was pretty hot, Shane whistled, Woo.
How long has that been going on, Tina asked trying to keep jealousy out of her voice
The girls looked over at her at this and Tina knew that they had detected the jealous note in her voice.
Why does it matter Tina, Shane asked walking toward the exit of the club
I didnt say it mattered, Tina remarked as she and everyone else followed Shane outside, I was just curious is all. If thats been going on for a while I just wonder why Bette didnt say anything to me.
Shane stopped and pivoted around to face Tina, Youre jealous.
I am not, Tina exclaimed
You so are, Alice remarked jumping into the fray
Tina is not jealous of Bette, Helena remarked with some disdain
Stay out of this *****, Shane remarked
Hey, Tina stated, Calm down Shane.
Shane just frowned at this and took a breath, Why does it matter if Bette is seeing someone?
That was a good question and one Tina didnt really have the answer for. Truth be told she was jealous of Bette moving on. Some small part of her thought Bette would hold out a little longer.
Youve got to be ***** kidding me, Shane exclaimed interpreting Tinas silence quite well, You dont think that she has the right to move on, she said her voice starting to rise, Youve got to be ***** kidding, she repeated
What are you on about, Tina asks
Bette was right, Shane declares coming to this particular conclusion
About what, Dana asks curiously
When she told me that she was going out with Carmen I was all like what about Tina and she went off on me how you were allowed to move on but she wasnt and how it was a stupid double standard we had going for us and just how long was she supposed to ***** wait?
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That’s one quick chapter. But I think Shane is a bit out of control there but i still like this story!!! Waiting for more…
Great chapter!!
Interesting they all call Tina out on her stuff it’s hard to hear but I guess it could happen when everyone is involved in your relationship you ask a question you get an answer even if it’s one you don’t want or expect to hear—very interesting. I hate taking sides but I do agree sometimes it’s necessary I mean these are the same people that would have a ‘boring’ intervention I guess this was a ‘toxic’ intervention/ confrontation. Keep up the good work and get back to Bette and Carmen SOON Thanks
I LOVE IT!!! Tina so needs to realize this isn’t just about Bette she is responsible too!!!
Way to go, Shane…’bout time! Loved it!
Da..da..da..dayum. I do think shane was a bit out of control. I mean, a woman like Helena could file suit and have her locked up somewhere. But I understand the frustration. And essentially, it seems like Tina has been controlling the puppet strings of Bette’s relationship with the rest of the gang and the gang is finally fed up. I’m looking forward to Bette having a little fun and finally getting a chance to be happy for at least a little bit. I love this story. Can’t wait for the next LONG chapter (wink, wink).
Wow….drama…..I’m loving it…
Good to see the confrontation between Tina and the gang..People always blame the cheater but it always take two to break a relationship and two to make it work…
I’ll be waiting for your next chapter to see where you are taking us with the evil plan of yours..;)
Get Tina to chase for once!
Looking forward to more Bette & Carmen. Great concept…do pursue Bette & Carmen.Interesting match!
OH WoW.. I loved it. No telling how the show will go but I love stories like this one.
Technically, I believe Bette carried on getting sexed up by Fast-n-Cheap for 2-3 more weeks before “coming to her senses” and beg Tina, publicilly humilitating herself, to forgive and take her back. And, as right as they are about Helena-that was harsh. BUT, MORE PLEASE! :D
Very unexpected turn of events, (a little harsh) I like it though. Please continue.
I totally disagree with the 3 amigos. I hate Helena but it is all Bette’s fault. I think Shane is jealous because she wants Carmen.
Your chapters never cease to amaze me. Each one is better than the last. Tina totally deserved that. I see where you’re going with this,and I kinda like it….hahaha You’re so Porter, like totally.
wow, if i were tina i might forgive bette but not the three amigos. they were way out of line. you were right, this chapter was little hard to take because i’m a tina fan. i just don’t get why everyone thinks bette has to be forgiven already. theres no time limit on betrayal. but i digress, i really like the story and i’m interested to see where you take this next.
I think Shane has a lot of nerve the biggest pussy meister in the city and she has the nerve to throw
accusations around, I don’t like Bette she’s screwing around and expecting everyone to forgive her.
So much drama. I love it. Tina needs to understand that Bette isn’t the only person at wrong…PLEASE PLEASE POST SOON
I don’t think that everyone should be barking at Tina. Bette is the one who broke the relationship with Tina and now she must deal with her actions. I think that Bette shiuld be the outcast with the girls because she is the one who made the situation the way it is. Bette can get another group of friends. Maybe she can try “CHEATERS”.
DAYUM SHANE DID SOMETHING TO HELENA THAT IVE ALWAYS WNTED TA DO YAY!!
finally i get to read something different and that it is not necessary all bette’s fault and making tina the angel :D dont get me wrong i love both of them – but bette hve make the mistake and paid the price. the thing is – does tina realised that everyone makes mistakes and that you either forgive and forget and move on. or dont forgive and forget and move on and let the other party go. Great job! Tks
As much as I love Tina I think she may have deserved that. Helena certainly did!
Way to go Shane. Very nice Reba….but to short. Now please give us some more. Post soon
Come on now, it has been over a year. I am a B&T fan but Tina does not have the right to expect Bette to remain alone and waite on her forever. Either forgive her and take her back or let her go. Both of them deserve some happiness…hopefully they will find it with each other. Helena should not have been knocked on her butt, but she surely deserves to be kicked to the curb. I would like to see Carmen back with Shane. Great update..please continue.
never thought id say it but i like the idea that Bette is moving on alittle shocked ot Shane but Tina cant have it all her in way i love this cause its abit different thanks
Great chapter ! I loved everyone pulling for Bette. They were Bette’s friends first anyway. Please continue…
Okay now I seem to be getting some rather fiesty responses there which is fine but this is just the opinion of Shane and Alice in the heat of the moment. Keep that in mind. I never said Bette expects Tina to forgive her. Keep that in mind as well please. Myself and Tina will be redeemed just be patient folks.
Whoa, woo hoo, and yahoo! I’ve got no sympathy for Tina these days, so I am eating up this story, with relish! Rebakathy1, you are rocking with this story. Ahem, not that I condone physical violence of any sort, but … if there HAD to be some, decking the vampiress is excellent! The problem, of course, is that Tina will see this as a choice between friends and whatever she sees herself as with the Evil Heiress, unless you can finesse it so that she can actually have some introspection. In the meantime, and I really mean TAKE YOUR TIME (heh heh), let’s have Bette and Carmen [and us] have some fun! Rollicking good time. Thanks!
Wow, that’s some chapter! I like it, a lot. I thought Shane was right on the money, with what she said to Tina. I, too, didn’t think it was right that Tina just picked up with Helena. I mean, here we all want the right to marry who we want, and Tina just goes off with Helena. I mean, she started the who legal separation thing, which to me meant that they had a real marriage. Then to just take up with Helena. Yes, Bette, has slept around, but Tina is taking up with someone else, and seems to be flaunting it. If it’s good enough for Tina, it should be opened to Bette, too. Although, secretly, I still want them to get back together. Hey, it’s Bette and Tina, I’m sorry. No matter how much of a hot couple Bette and Carmen make it still can’t replace B/T.