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    What’s thy passion?Chapter6

    Shane looked in her mirror. Tonight was major. A proper date, it had been a while and she wasnt prepared to mess this up.
    Flicking though the clothes in her wardrobe she pulled out a shirt and tie.

    Perfect

    She smiled to herself as she buttoned up her white shirt and fixed her black tie. Rummaging around her room she found her black flared trousers. Tugging them on and fixing her belt she looked in the mirror

    Hmm Agent 00Lesbian

    She joked with herself. Running her hands through her hair Shane paid particular attention to its texture, adding gel, water and then wax to keep it sitting perfectly. Slipping on her shoes, she checked herself out one more time before grabbing her blazer and switching of the light.

    Jenny, thats me, I duno when Im gonna be home She waited but got no response

    Um, yeah dont wait up…

    Shane peered her head towards the kitchen and when she saw it was empty she knew that Jenny was probably in her studio. Grinning to herself she nodded

    Hard workin kid.

    As she first felt the cold of the outside air Shane shivered. She stared at the sky and just watched nothing for several minutes before finally lowering herself into her truck.

    She pulled up outside Carmens house and braced herself. Focusing on every step she watched carefully as she neared the front door. She was just about to knock when the door opened. Carmen smiled at her

    I had a feeling

    Karma, Shane grinned.

    Carmen was wearing a black dress. Not too long, not too short. It was flimsy material though, Shane could tell as she couldnt help but notice Carmens ***** move freely without a bra. Even in her heels Carmen was still somewhat shorter than her girlfriend. They both stared at each other before Shane broke the silence.

    “So I figured youd expect me to bring flowers.

    Carmen shook her head
    I dont expect anything.

    Well,
    Shane continued,
    I didnt, I brought you these.

    Carmen smiled as she looked down at the box of chocolates Shane was offering her,

    Karma Sutra ***** position chocolates? If I didnt know any better Id say you were after something.

    Shane smiled You.

    So where are you taking me, you never said.
    Youll see
    Shane, nothing to shocking.
    Trust me C, youll love it.

    And with that Shane took her girlfriends hand and led her to her truck. Opening the door she ushered Carmen inside and placed a kiss on her forehead.

    Did I mention you look incredible tonight?
    Carmen blushed

    Um I dont think you did.
    Well from now on, Im gonna mention it to you every day.

    Shane smiled down at Carmen who was still blushing from this unusual attention that Shane was paying her. Closing the door gently Shane shuffled to the drivers side and got in. Closing the door behind her she looked over at Carmen and smiled. Starting the engine she reversed her truck and headed to somewhere unknown to Carmen.

    It took about 1hr 45minutes but eventually Shane pressed on her breaks and brought the car to a halt.

    Were here!

    She exclaimed. Carmen looked out the window trying to figure out were their date could be but all she could see was a beach. Shane noticed her confusion and pointed her in the direction of an old building.

    Are you trying to be funny Shane?
    Shane frowned

    No, give me a chance already. Carmen shook her head

    I dont see what could possibly shock me more than proposing.

    You see that old building Shane said as she pointed to a falling down, opened roofed disaster.

    Yeah, I can see it, is that our date? Carmen asked slightly concerned.

    When I first came here, to L.A, I spent my first night in there. I never knew what was gonna happen to me, and now look at me. Carmen smiled at Shane

    I want you to know Carmen; I dont want to hide from you anymore. And if you dont mind, I thought we could spend the night here, I thought we could talk.

    Carmen could feel her heart beating faster as she realised that this was Shanes way of showing that she loved her. She could tell Shane was nervous and she knew that before they talked, there was something else that needed to be done.
    Carmen sat on the front of Shanes car

    Come here baby
    she signalled to Shane with her middle finger. She pulled Shane into her and pushed her hair back from her face.

    Are you telling me, that I got all dressed up and wore my most expensive shoes to come to an old building and talk with you?

    Shane stared down at her startled by her reaction Well I th

    Im overdressed Carmen declared

    Carmen stared into Shanes eyes
    And so are you
    She said as she pulled at Shanes tie loosening the knot. Shane could see the hunger in Carmens eyes

    Are you sure she whispered

    Carmen spread her legs over the car bonnet and pulled Shane between them. She looked up at Shane passionately. Shane took this as a yes and leaned in towards Carmen. Placing her hands on either side of Carmens face, she tilted her head slightly and let her lips rub against Carmens. Using her tongue she circled Carmens lips watering them ever so slightly. She could taste the strawberry gloss of Carmens soft lips as she began touching them against her own. Carmen ran her hands over Shanes blazer, finding its opening and pulling it of Shane, causing her hands to leave Carmens face.

    You look so beautiful

    Shane sighed as she licked Carmen from her chin to her lips. When her tongue finally reached Carmens lips she slipped it inside ever so slightly and began swirling it gentle. Carmen moaned in anticipation and inserted her own tongue gently into Shanes mouth, allowing her hands to rest on Shanes *****. Shanes own hands had been good up until now.
    Carmen winced as Shane broke away from their kiss only to begin slowly kissing down to her chin and then her neck. Shane dragged her tongue from the centre of Carmens neck to the left side, where she then slowly removed the strap of Carmens dress, letting it fall freely down by the side of her arm. Dragging her tongue to the opposite side of Carmens neck, Shane repeated this with her other strap. Shane looked up at Carmen

    Remember I love you

    she whispered as she gave Carmens dress a tug at the front revealing her erect nipples to Shanes lingering eyes. Not wanting to waste any time she leaned in and kissed Carmen passionately. Once she had Carmen distracted in her kiss she slowly but steadily lowered her hands to hold Carmens *****. She made her way to the nipples and began slowly rubbing her fingers over them gliding the nipples between her index and middle fingers. Carmen kissed Shane harder feeling the soft touches of her girlfriend as she did. She broke away from the kiss and began kissing down Carmens body. She pushed Carmen gently back so she was lying flat on the car bonnet and mounted herself over Carmen. Smiling down at her, Shane began to slowly slide her hand up Carmens dress. Carmen fought back and grabbed her hands.

    Tonight babe Youre all mine

    It took a lot of strength but Carmen forced herself upright. She sat up and jumped of the bonnet pushing Shane in front of her. She pointed to were she had been sitting

    Sit
    She motioned to Shane. Shane looked to be in disbelief but did as she was told. Carmen looked at Shane longingly as she run her hands though her girlfriends hair. She leaned in and kissed Shane harder than shed ever kissed before. Lifting Shanes Shane hand to her mouth she forced Shanes fingers between their kiss, she licked with her tongue, still kissing Shane until her anticipation could wait no longer. Still kissing Shane passionately she pulled of the already loosened tie and began unbuttoning Shanes shirt. Removing it from her completely, she was not surprised to fins Shane braless, she usually was.

    Breaking their kiss, Carmen licked Shane from her belly button the whole way up to her left nipple. Shane tried not to moan, but stiffened in pleasure. Taking her left nipple into her mouth, Carmen sucked lightly, teasing Shane with her tongue. She bit gently and Shane finally let out a moan. Carmen swirled her tongue around the nipple all the while caressing Shanes left breast with her hand. It was her turn this time.

    She forced Shane back on the bonnet and claimed on top of her, kissing her way from Shanes neck to her stomach. Shane could feel the light strokes of Carmens hair follow her tongue as she lowered herself towards Shanes thighs. She grinned up at Shane as she kissed along were her trousers began and then licked from side to side. Shane breathed heavily as she felt her trousers loosen. Carmen removed Shanes belt and unbuttoned her trousers. Pulling slightly harder than she imagined she lowers them to Shanes ankles.

    Reaching her hand between Shanes legs she rubbed at her inner thighs and then over the crotch of her boxers. She could feel wet her girlfriend was, even through the material. Carmen felt for Shanes ***** and continued to rub it over the boxers. She used the palm of her hand and eventually placed her index finger directly on Shanes *****. Rubbing it gently in circles Carmen felt Shane tense up. Looking up at her girlfriend who was sweating and breathing heavily Carmen spoke softly

    Tonight, I give to you.

    Carmen slowly slid Shanes boxers to meet with her trousers. Lowering herself of the bonnet Carmen ran her tongue up Shanes inner thigh and then again on the other side. She spread Shanes legs further before she ran her tongue over Shane. From her bellybutton to her clitoris and back down again. Shane closed her eyes and moaned in delight. Carmen began licking deeper, pushing her tongue in and out of Shane as she got wetter and wetter.

    Hearing Shanes breathing speed up, she took two fingers and worked them into her girlfriend. Shane moaned in delight as Carmen wriggled her fingers inside her, pushing them further and then thrusting them in and out in a steady pace. Carmen knew Shane was close so she leaned in close, still with her hand in Shane, and began rubbing Shanes ***** with her tongue. She moaned in delight

    Carmen I cant I…

    Shane was speechless, she couldnt think. Shed never experienced this before. Carmen quickened the pace of her thrusting and looked up towards her girlfriend, with one more gentle push Shane screamed her name and came hard. Giving her girlfriend a minute to adjust Carmen slowly removed her fingers. Shane lay breathless not knowing what to say.

    Iloveyou she panted as she felt Carmen draw her in for a hug.

    And what the ***** do we call this?

    Carmens head shot up as soon as she heard the voice
    Shane lay in shock, very aware that her trousers were not were they should be.

    Officer Brady The man offered
    Shane stiffened I never knew they had beach patrol. She stated

    I heard noises, I thought someone was in trouble, I try to identify were the noises are coming from and this is what I find.
    Carmen looked down at Shane who lay topless with her trousers and underwear round her ankles, and then back up at her own naked *****.

    Someone has a lot of explaining to do. The man said showing authority.

    ***** Shane mumbled, Our first date and were gonna end up getting done for indecent exposure.

    Carmen just shook her head in disbelief.

    Comments

    1. Well I read all the chapter in once and I have to say that I LMAO. From Shane proposal, I was surprised, to now all I can say is, I NEED A FIX SOON. Your story is great. I live the humor in it and I want more of it. Can’t believed there first date end up being interupted by a cop. LMAO once again. update soon please.

    2. Okay, I just read them all in one sitting. You almost had me throw my monitor across the room when Shane popped the question, but I had faith and I’m liking the way it turned out. nice job luv. Keep up the good work aye.

    3. i wish this was on tv ilove shane being with carmen. i dont like carmen with jenny. shes not really gay anyway . shes still into guys right. update soon

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