Fan Fiction
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Love ch. 5
Shane was laying in bed, staring in the dark. She was just thinking of Carmen, and how everything change in one night. She turned on her side and listening to the sounds of her ceiling fan. Shane dosed off until she heard her door opened. She looked up and couldnt see a thing. She laid back down and closed her eyes. She laid there and waited for the person who opened her. She felt the sheets move, and someone laid down. Shane turned around and saw Carmen. She smiled and pulled her close to her. She kissed Carmens lips and pulled away.
What about Jenny? She asked.
Shes ok. She understands everything. She smiled and kissed Carmen. Carmen grabbed Shanes shirt and pulled it over her head. Shane pulled Carmen wife beater off of her and threw it to the floor. Shane sucked on Carmens bottom lip and played with her *****. She rolled them over so she was on top. She slowly sucked on her neck, while Carmen played with her head.
I want you to enjoy this. Shane said. Shane kissed her way down to Carmens *****. She popped her nipple into her mouth and sucked on it. Carmen gasped when she felt the cool breeze from the fan hit her wet nipple. She missed this feeling, she bit her bottom lip and enjoyed. Shane moved her way down and disappeared under the sheets. Carmen sat up on her elbows and waited for pleasure. She gasped when she felt Shanes warm breath on her wet *****.
Dont tease me. Carmen grabbed a hold of the sheet and curled her toes. She moaned in pleasure while Shane fucked her with her tongue. Shane held Carmens hips down while she worked her magic. She roughly sucked and flicked her wet *****. Carmen couldnt stay still, she kept moving her head from side to side. She grind her hips against Shanes mouth while enjoying ecstasy without ecstasy. She bit her lip and her body tremble. She knew she couldnt last longer and exploded all over Shanes mouth. Her juices flowing down her thigh. Shane came from under the sheets and smiled at a flushed Carmen.
You are amazing. She kissed Carmen, letting her taste herself from Shanes lips. Shane laid on her side and pulled Carmen close to her. She put her hand on her waist and kissed her again. They held each other tight and fell asleep.
*****
Shane woke up and looked at Carmen, peacefully a sleep. She smiled and slowly pushed her. Carmen moved around a little and opened up her eyes. She smiled and stretched.
Good morning beautiful. Shane said.
What time is it?
Its 9:30. UmmCarmen can I talk to you?
You can talk to me about anything.
Alright, I wanted to open up to you. Well my life hasnt always been so peachy. My dad ran out on my mom when I was a baby. Then the next thing I knew, I was being bounce from foster home to foster home. When I was 10, my mom came back for me, and she all strung out, and I didnt want to leave my home. And I didnt want to end up like my mom, but I ended up that way. My life has been *****.
Im so sorry. Carmen said.
Its alright. Shanes voice started to crack. She came out to Carmen with her problems. She broke down and told her everything. She felt a lot better about herself.
Everythings going to be alright. You have me now. Shane wrapped herself around Carmen and put her head on her chest. She felt like a little kid, and Carmen was a comfort. She held onto her tight and wouldnt let go.
I love you Carmen. Carmen looked down at Shane.
I love you too. Carmen kissed the top of Shanes head, with a tear rolling down her cheek.
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(38 votes, average: 3.32 out of 5)
thats cool, i like your writing, its really good…please keep going with this :)
Yeah, I love it too .I’m A HUGE shane and Carmen fan .Thank you for the update ,more please:)
Shane was fast to opened up but that’s ok. I love them together. Next fix soon.
shane was really a little fast to opened up, but they story is good.
i love the way you wrote about a beautiful moment between two people who feel for each other; carmen might be just what shane needs, keep up the good writing.poor jenny she really likes carmen too guess it wasn’t meant to be