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Love
Chapter One
Shane and Carmen
Shane waked up and looked at her empty room. She tried to remember something good about her life but there were nothing at all just broken promises, broken home and little scared girl. Shanes life was big mystery to everyone she didnt talk about it or about her parents. Shane got up put on her favourite shirt and blue jeans.
Carmen looked lonely sitting alone in the Planet. She was thinking about Shane and about last night. She had date with Shane and it was the best date ever. Carmen doesnt know why she left she just felled like Shane wasnt ready for relationship. Carmens and Shanes thing were complicated and still full of passion andlove.
Shane walked to the Planet and as soon as she walked in Carmen felt her heart beating faster than usually. Shane walked to the same table where Carmen was. Carmen didnt look at Shane she just stared at the floor. Shane said: hey and sit down. Carmen said: hey still looking at the floor.
Shane looked at Carmen thinking what went wrong. Carmen tried to say something but she just couldnt open her mouth. After couple minutes Shane looked again at Carmen and asked: Do you want to go out with meagain we could watch movie or somethingI mean if you want. Carmen looked at Shane for the first time after the date and softly said yeah I would like it
Alice and Dana
Dana walked down the street. She didnt know what to do. She just thought about Alice and Lara. She didnt know which one she loved. Only yesterday she had date with Lara and thing were just great but still she thought about Alice. Alice had this something that made her forget how to breathe and they could talk about everything. Dana was just so confused, trapped between Lara and Alice.
Alice was in the park watching people and thinking about Dana. She knew that Dana had this thing going on with Lara but she just couldnt forget her. She said to her self never thought that I will end up like thiscrying after woman who has a girlfriend.
Dana walks to the park hoping that Alice will be there. She looks a the people and after seconds she sees Alice. She walks there and sits next to Alice. Alice looks at her and says: hido you want to go the Planet? Dana looks at the Alice and nods. They stand up and walk to the planet in deep silence.
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there is not a lot here to say if I like it or not but it does look like this has A great love story with a happy ending and maybe a sad one as well. So I can’t wait to read the rest of this one please post soon
ya i have to say i need more of the story to tell you if i like it. I do, however, like that you are doing it on Alice and Dana and Shane and Carmen. Its something different than Bette and Tina.