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    the misadventures of Evan-Marie:the girl episode part 6(sequel to who holds…)

    Story written on May 1, 2005 by runawaytee.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=53593
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    Bette and Tina’s daughter experiences first love

    I had felt like a drug addict going through a withdrawal. It had been four days since I had seen her. Oh I had seen her, in passing and her ignoring me. And that hurt. A deep down hurt that I had never felt before. And I wanted to talk to her, needed to talk to her but every time I attempted to someone beat me to it. Or she would turn her back on me. And I stood there aching. Not a women (not yet) enough to go to her; to face my fear. My idiotic fear that withheld me form the one thing I really wanted…her.

    Hey chick, where have you been? I havent seen you in days.

    I was sitting in the cafeteria at te usual table when I heard a voice. I turned around.

    Stacey, he. Hi gang, I greeted.
    So, where the ***** heave you been? Maddy repeated.
    Oh, um, here and there, I answered. Watching them surround me.
    Here and there? Okay, Ill accept that, for now, Maddy said.

    For now? Why did she say that. She wanted to know more. I could tell y the way she continued to stare at me. I looked away. Big mistake. I locked eyes with Her.

    She sat a few tables away partially hidden by a couple of boys trying to talk to her. But she wasnt listening. She was staring…at me.

    What about you guys? What have you been up to? I asked the gang still staring at Lindsey.
    Well got into a fight with my brother. A physical fight. He almost broke my arm and I gave him a black eye. So Im grounded for a month. Um, my father is being an *****…

    I tuned out Staceys voice when the guys sitting with Lindsey moved to either side of her. One of them touched hr leg and I became jealous. Jealous of the fact that he was touching her and not me. Without taking her eyes off me, Lindsey removed his hand from her leg. The guy smiled and then whispered something in her er. She smiled and I stared.

    Are you gonna answer me or what?
    Huh?
    Youre spacing out on me, Stacey said.
    Sorry.
    Go talk to her.
    Huh?
    I said go talk to her, Maddie repeated.
    I dont -.
    We all know about you two okay. So dont lie about it. And were okay about it. Arent we? Maddie directed the question to Stacey and India.
    Of course. We love you.
    Yeah, love, India muttered.
    Youre our friend. We love you no matter what, Maddie said putting her arm around my shoulder.

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    7. Just amazing. Can’t wait for more, I’ve noticed you seem to post in twos so I’ll check for another soon and I hope I luck out. Thanks for sharing.

    10. Wow, you have a very good rhythm to your story telling. I like your story, I like how you’re introducing each character.

      This is only a guess: Evan must be about 16 (since she drives but still in high school). I think she is Bette’s biological child; but can’t figure out if Bette had her while she and Tina were seperated and now back together or She had her prior to meeting Tina. Then again, why am I asking questions, when I should just enjoy this wonderful story!

      Thanks for sharing your voice with us.

    14. Aww…that was deep…I’m glad Evan finally got over her fear and got her woman=P…B&T making out in front of their daughter, that’s so cute!…Loving your writing Tee=D

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