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    Would you like to dance? Chapter 5

    Story written on May 10, 2005 by Seahurst.
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    What are the magic words?

    God, Tina…thank you. Bettes eyes filled with tears.

    For what? Tina whispered back, mesmerized by the emotions emanating from Bette.

    For giving me this precious gift. She leaned in, feeling her own lips trembling with desire, and gently, softly, slowly, showed Tina just how grateful she was for her offering. Both women were overcome by wave upon wave of passion, undulating through their bodies. The intensity was so immense, that Bette lost the ability to hold her arm up, and dropped her hand from Tinas chin, vaguely feeling it land on her lap. Neither woman could move any part of their body…the only connection between them was their lips, which were moving in a dance that felt so right…so familiar, they couldnt believe it was only their second kiss, ever.

    Finally…only because of the limited air supply, Bette reluctantly released Tinas lips, allowing her lungs to fill. She gently dropped her forehead onto Tinas, both women just sitting there in silence, their quick breaths caressing the others lips. After taking a minute to recover, Bette lifted her head and smiled at Tina.

    I cant tell you how happy I was to hear that you dont like peas. For a second there, I thought we were in trouble!

    Tinas body filled with joy, her lungs expelling a light, soft giggle. Trouble, huh?

    Yeah… Bette smiled at Tina with the most heavenly look on her face, and then sighed. But, then I heard the two magic words, and I knew that all was right in my world.

    Oh, really? The amazing kiss they just shared, helped to jump start Tinas confidence, and she could feel it flowing back through her body. She slowly ran her finger tips up the inside of Bettes arm, producing not only goose bumps, but causing a shiver to run through Bettes body, her spine straightening for a quick second, then settling back down.

    Wow, did I get lucky…not just one magic word, but two? She whispered her question. Surprising both herself, and Bette with her rediscovered confidence, Tina leaned forward, and nuzzled her nose into the spot right behind Bettes ear. With her lips, she lightly grabbed onto the smooth skin of Bettes neck, then took her tongue and slowly made circles, causing another shiver, as well as a light moan to escape from the sultry lips of the beautiful creature, that was her destiny. Tina lifted her lips up just long enough to ask Bette, So…what are the two words? Then, snuggled right back in to the soft warm spot she had just left.

    Bette was trying to respond to Tina, but all she could feel…all she could concentrate on, was the soft, wet, slow moving tongue, hidden beneath the two lips that were attached to her neck, torturously drawing circles on her skin. Combined with Tinas hot breath, she could feel her neck muscles giving out, her eyes rolling back, and the lids closing.

    WelllmmmHuhhmmmmmmAaahhhhmm?

    It was all Tina could do to keep from laughing. She didnt know if that was Bette actually trying to say something, or if it was another moan. Either way, she was astounded by the reaction she was getting, from both Bette, as well as her own body, which was aching with desire. Her thoughts drifting off for a moment, as she tried to figure out why her hands, of all things, hurt…the pleasurable pain had rolled down her arms, and now had all ten fingers, as well as the back of her hands, throbbing. She stilled her tongue, taking a moment to revel in this never before experienced surge of desire, that had traveled to, and settled in this new location. Struggling to come back into the present, Tina couldnt believe how lucky she was…they were…but, was still having just a tiny little bit of trouble comprehending what her tongue was doing, to another woman…and so naturally at that. She lifted her head from Bettes neck, only to lightly nibble her earlobe with her teeth and tongue, wondering why on earth she had never thought to be with a woman before. She knew that she couldn’t compare what she was feeling right now, to anything else that had ever happened to her before. This here, being with Bette, was simply indescribable in its perfection.

    She finally managed to gather her thoughts. Baby?

    Hmmmmm? Bette was still lost in the land of Tinas tongue, a place she never wanted to leave. She knew that her body had never come close to feeling this level of desire, of lust, of need that she was feeling just from Tina kissing her neck. She had no clue as to how she was going to make it through until they could completely come together, connecting with both body and soul. On some level she also knew that if she didnt get some control over her body, she could very easily just melt, and slide right into the pool that her feet were already languishing in.

    Uh…magic words? Tina reminded her, whispering the words into Bettes ear, her moist breath causing Bettes body to jerk again, as another shiver shot through her.

    Oh my God…I am never going to make it, Bette thought. It took every ounce of strength she had just to coordinate her neck muscles to work together, allowing her to lift her head back up. And, as she rose, she managed to drag her eyelids back up as well, so she could take in the breathtakingly sensual woman in front of her, who had the most seductive, yet shy smile…and the softest lips to have ever touched her neck…her ear…her lips… Jesus…just admit it…she has the softest lips, period!

    Right, she breathed. Reluctantly, she took both hands and placed them on Tinas upper arms. She slowly straightened her own arms, distancing Tina from her neck.

    Im sorry….but if you want me to talk, you have to stop that. I cant do both at the same time.

    Tina smiled seductively at Bette, her own heart pounding like a jackhammer in her chest. Both?

    Yeah. Bette let out another sigh. I cant talk, and concentrate on that swirly thing… She took her index finger and made small circles. You do with your tongue, both at the same time. She held out her hand in a stop motion in front of Tina. So, if you want me to talk, you have to stay there.

    It was Tinas turn to sigh. Remind me again, how this happened…how I ended up here, in your backyard with you?

    Bette smiled at her. You had to pee, and then you were smart enough to wash your hands…thats how. She looked at Tina, giving her a sheepish grin. That…and because, you are a forgiving woman, who was kind enough to give me a second chance.

    Peeing and second chances, huh…I thought it was fate? Tina teased.

    Bette laughed. Well, fate can only take us so far, then free will takes over. Thats where your act of forgiveness comes in. Both women fell silent…staring at each other with goofy grins on their faces, their feet still dangling in the pool. Finally, Tina was having trouble maintaining eye contact with Bette, and turn to watch the water rippling out from their legs. She had never before seen anyone express so much emotion through their eyes. It was mesmerizing, and intimidating, both at the same time.

    Mangos and chiramoyas. Bette whispered.

    Hmm? Tina looked back at Bette.

    The two magic words…mangos and chiramoyas. Bette smiled at Tina, waiting for her response.

    Tina took a deep breath, smiling. Hmmm…God, I love both of them. Tina smiled at Bette, thinking of the different reasons she loved the two types of fruit. Tell me…why magic?

    Reaching out, Bette slid her hand down Tinas arm, intertwining their fingers together, then closing her eyes. Mangos, because I just love the color…the taste of them. I could eat a mango every day for the rest of my life, and never get tired of their ***** taste and texture. She took a big, slow, deep breath. And chiramoyas, because they are without a doubt, the most sensual fruit in the world. They taste like a woman, with a hint of coconut and pineapple mixed in. And when you are sharing one with someone special…well, it can be absolutely orgasmic!

    Tina watched the gorgeous woman beside her, sitting here with her dark curly locks swaying across her shoulders, as she was slowly moving her head side to side, eyes closed…obviously dreaming about doing just what she had described. Jesus! Tina thought. She wanted this woman more than she had ever wanted another human being in her entire life, but was paralyzed by her overwhelming desire, unable to move. She tried to calm her erratic breathing, inwardly acknowledging how much trouble she was in, if all it took was Bette describing a piece of fruit, to get her feeling this out of control.

    Wow! Tina whispered. Well, I love chiramoyas too, but I can honestly say, that I have never had that kind of experience eating one.

    Bette gave Tina a knowing smile, as her eyes just glimmered at her. Obviously you havent shared one with the right person.

    Tina smiled back, a little envious of Bettes past experiences. Obviously not.

    Bette put her hand on the pool deck and slowly lifted her legs out of the water. Pushing herself up to a standing position, she held out her hand for Tina to take, helping her up, as well.

    Come with me.

    Tina gulped, feeling all her confidence of just minutes ago, slipping away. All she could manage was what sounded like a half whisper, and half croak. Where to?

    Bette turned and winked at her. The kitchen.

    Tina let out a soft gasp…her eyes growing wide. Oh.

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    Comments

    2. Ok that was the sexiest thing I have read in a very long time – elegant, classy, romantic, and very real. The pool must be simmering? Thank you – your writing is quite charming, it’s a privilege to read your pros.

    3. oh yes! i’ll follow her to the kitchen. mmmmm can’t wait to see how Tina enjoys the new wonders of a chiramoya. please continue and soon…..love this story.

    8. You see, I agree with andee. Your kind of talent needs to be appreciated on a larger scale. Not that I’m not grateful for this website, or your generosity to share such talents with us. This is just great Seahurst.

    14. That is truly sexy and sensous.. eating something like that with passion and lust on the brain.. I guess we will find out how truly adventurous Tina is ;)..

    20. Seahurst,

      “Hmmmmm?” Bette was still lost in the land of Tina’s tongue, a place she never wanted to leave.” I’ve tried to find directions to this land on Mapquest to no avail!

      A masterpiece, again. (Does it ever get boring?)

    21. I want to be a cashier at Whole Foods so I can ask everyone that buys a chiramoya and mango just what they’re going to do with them!! Yeah, that was some chapter. Bette being tongue tied was great. Can’t wait for the next one! Now if you’ll excuse me…I do believe that there is a mango out there with my name on it.

    25. Absolutely beautiful. I don’t know what else to say. Your writing is breathtaking. Don’t forget us faithful fans when your book is at the top of the best seller list. Can’t wait for the next chapter. =)

    26. Me! Me! Me! Pick Me! (she says as she is waving her hand up in the air). I want to be the president of the Seahurst Fan Club!

      Very sexy and very well written.

    33. I’ m rather a lurker but this time I have to come out.. PLIZZZ don’ t stop. this story is so touching and amazing. “Obviously you haven’t shared one with the right person.”

      Tina smiled back, a little envious of Bette’s past experiences. “Obviously not.”

      Bette put her hand on the pool deck and slowly lifted her legs out of the water. Pushing herself up to a standing position, she held out her hand for Tina to take, helping her up, as well.

      “Come with me.”

      Tina gulped, feeling all her confidence of just minutes ago, slipping away. All she could manage was what sounded like a half whisper, and half croak. “Where to?”

      Bette turned and winked at her. “The kitchen.”
      it’s my fav part:)
      please, keep writting and post soon.

    34. Seahurst, I’ve finished reading your previous story surrounding B&T. You’ve got the writing knack. I cannot wait to read more of your work! I’ll keep an eye open for your work on the shop shelves in the near future…*winks* Keep up the excellent work. *applaudes*

    35. Seahurst, I’ve finished reading your previous story surrounding B&T. You’ve got the writing knack. I cannot wait to read more of your work! I’ll keep an eye open for your work on the shop shelves in the near future…*winks* Keep up the excellent work. *applaudes*

    36. WOW…just like what temerity said, “elegant, classy, romantic” and I must add SEXY…
      Love love love your writing…. Btw, what are chiramoyas?

    41. Gulp! Give me a sec-OK- OMG!! ican’t even type now… I’ve got to try-what was it?-chiramoyas? Wwell, THants what I need. Yeah, mangos and chirrrrra-whatchmacallits! Seahurst, the way you have with words! *sighs* How you take these words, the same words that I use mind you, somehow you’re able to make something so incredibly beautiful out of them-while I just seem to stutter and stammer along…I’m amazed, that’s all. Thanks.

    42. I wonder if i can buy futures in mangos and chiramoyas because after this chapter the demand is going to go through the roof — so hot — so good — thanks

    46. let’s see, I need to make a grocery list…mango, cherimoya…
      What a great chapter Sea…very sensual and I can’t wait to share the dining experience with B and T!

    50. Hey Sea,
      Love the luxurious and leisurely pacing of this story. As always your narrative shows us how to do it. How to write beautiful prose that ebbs and flows gently like the tide on a moonlit beach; the imagery and emotions gently trickle from the screen.
      I adore you style.
      As for the story, I do want to know where this is going. What ever next for these lovers? What devilish diversions do you have in mind or will this be a tale of true love?
      Awaiting your next chapter with much anticipation.
      A loyal fan.

    54. I love manga and my city in Brazil is
      known as “City of the hoses.”
      Bette and Tina would go crazy to see so many sleeves.
      She have good taste.
      Very sexy chapter.

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