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Vignettes: Chapter 35
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Shane saw headlights pull into the driveway and peeked out the window. A taxi had just dropped Bette and Tina off. They were slowly walking towards the door, arms linked. Shane ran from the window and jumped over the back of the couch, landing right next to Alice.
What the *****, Shane! Alice pushed her away.
Sorry, but theyre here. Act normal and cool.
Alice rolled her eyes and took another sip of her margarita. Dana shrugged and stared at the door. Finally, Bette and Tinas shadows filled the doorway as they walked into the house. They peered into the living room and saw the three women look up, searching for an explanation as to why they were so late getting back.
Hi guys. Sorry were so late. Guess we lost track of time. Bette smiled sheepishly followed by Tina. They made their way to the floor next to the couch.
Bette, its nine. Dinner was at six. I was starting to get worried. Shane said.
Way to act normal and cool. Alice muttered.
We didnt mean to worry anyone. Tina said. It was just a beautiful night and a great sunset and…. we had a good conversation. Tina glanced at Bette who smiled at her and shot a quick wink in her direction.
I saw that. Alice said as she sat up on the couch. Anything youd like to share?
Nope. Bette and Tina said in unison.
Want some dinner? Shane asked as she made her way to the kitchen.
We actually already ate. Tina said. But… are those margaritas? Her eyes lit up.
Sure are. Bette? Shane handed Tina a drink and acknowledged Bettes nod with a glass full of lime and tequila.
This reminds me of our margarita nights. Bette said, smiling. Lets sit outside on the patio.
They all headed outside and sat around the table but Tina lingered behind. She spotted the box Bette and Shane had dug up and her curiosity was overpowering her. Rummaging through the items, she smiled at some and frowned at others. Tina was lost in her own thoughts for longer than she had anticipated. She glanced up when she heard someone talking to her.
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Love the pace of your story and how memories are mending hearts and connecting them to each other.
love this story
Oh I love it. I don’t think I could take much more of Tina running.
You know, Skipton was right. No disappointment here.
I hope this week drags on for a good long time. Of course, B&T will have to extend things, deciding where they’re going to live and all that.
that was such a sweet chapter! aww i love how bette kept that piece of the blanket
This is so good. Please let it be the real thing this time……
lovelly and kind…please post soon
This is one of those stories you really wish was in book form, so you could snuggle in and read all night. Thank you for this.
AAAHHHH memories… is there nothing better. You bring such a passion to each and every chapter. Thank you for this and all the others you have graced us with.
And 5 huge heart shaped cookies to you!!!
i know that i am repetitive but i can find no new words to let you know how much i enjoy this story. i too wish that it could just go on and on and on…
Good Job.
awww…i love this story.
I want you to know that when I see you have posted I stand there staring at the screen trying to decide “do i read it now, or do i save it for later?” Thats how much I look forward to your chapters. They are each simply brilliant.
I could have sworn I wrote a gushing review last night, but clearly I could have been put in a coma by the stunning prose here! This chapter was beyond excellent!
I’l full of hope for B&T after this chapter. I hope I’m right. I loved this chapter.
i love reading your descriptive chapters, this one made my heart swell :) such a wonderful little stories of the first i love yous. will you share more of the contents/stories of the box with us in a nice long chapter? wink wink! i look forward to more!
Reminiscing can be bittersweet as it drudges up the bad along with good…however, the memory of that tattered old blanket was simply beautiful! I love this story!
How sweet is that – we simply love this story. We don´t want it to end. Please continue.
Thanks again. These are so good. You should go pro!
One of my favorite fan fictions. I particularly like everyone sharing their stories and memories. It’s really quite lovely.
still loving this story. i’m always excited to see that you’ve posted.
great story, you have a knack for great story telling from soul harvest to this…I really enjoy!!!
I just love this story so you have given them both a depth to their past since their break up that is interesting and seems so real. Thanks and I love where they seem to be heading.
That was just so sweet, love it!
Never ever disappointed when i read one of your chapters.
Totally love this.
Thanks.