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MTS’s Version of The Season 2 Finale – Part I
Tina Kennard pulled Bettes precious blue Saab up to the curb at LAXs departures drop-off, shut off the car and eased her pregnant belly out of the vehicle. Bette and Kit slid out of the car and in moments, the sisters had their rolling uprights at their sides as they faced the pregnant blonde.
Kit, sensing that Tina and her sister needed a moment, smiled and hugged the pregnant blonde to her. Thanks for driving us, Tina. Take care of yourself and call us if anything happens with this little one. You got it?, she asked.
Tina nodded, pulling a few stray locks behind her ear. Yeah, Ill call you, I promise. Im sorry I cant be there with you guys.
Dont worry about it. You just worry about the baby. Ill see you in a few days.
Kit tossed a look at Bette. Im going to go get us a place in line., she said, looking back and forth between Tina and her sister.
Okay. Ill see you inside, Kit., said Bette, before her sister smiled and rolled her suitcase inside the sliding glass doors.
Bette smiled weakly and looked into Tinas soft brown eyes, suddenly she didnt know what to say. After 8 years, she didnt know what to say to the woman shed pledged commitment to. In the aftermath of their love making, Tinas desire to date her, and being comforted by her ex her as Melvin Porter lay dying in the living room, Bette had no idea where they really stood and she didnt want to have her hopes dashed yet again by asking. She finally decided to say, Thanks for driving us, T.
You dont have to thank me, Bette. Im.Im your wife., said Tina, staring deeply into Bettes dark brown eyes, hoping the caramel colored woman understood her meaning.
Bettes brow furrowed in confusion. My wife?, she asked.
Tina reached out and held Bettes hands in her own. Yes, Bette. Youre my wife. And I..I want us to try again. Im tired of being away from you. You are all I can think about and I want us to be a family. You, me, and the baby. I want to wake up in our bed with you at my side. I want us, Bette.
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Skipton says
like your take on the ending. i would agree in that there were a lot of questions left unanswered. i for one, would love to see you continue with this. thanks!
luvtoys says
THANK YOU!!!! So much better than what we were subjected to last Sunday.
PLEEEEEASE keep going. Let’s have a proper season finale.
kellygarret says
I will support this show as long as its on. I agree that they were questions left unanswered, I like your version of the finale please continue, and if you have a cliffhanger go easy on us.
Thank you, for your writing it will keep us alive till we see our girls again.
pandora says
really..ometimes i just think that some fanfic is so much better than the show..more intense and deep emotion..but i hope some “light” will shine in IC mind..post real..soooon please
k says
Loved this, too bad it wasn’t what happened on screen.
TiBetteShipper says
The season finale left me bewildered as well. I’m really liking your spin on things, MTS. More please!
downlow95 says
I’m feeling your version of the finale, please continue.
MLBFAN says
Bravo! (or is it Brava?). Anyway, this was excellent. Please continue…for nine months. Or, is that putting a little too much pressure on you?
jaspercat says
Continue please!!! This season finale is so much better than what we were subjected to on TV.
ladichi says
Very nice. Please continue.
rebakathy1 says
This was wonderful MTS. I am with you on how things should’ve been different in the ending. Keep going!
marsupial says
I LOVE THAT STORY..I LIKE HOW BETTE & KIT HAD TO FLY TO PHILADELPHIA,BECAUSE THAT WAS WERE HE WAS FROM..LOVE IT LOVE IT..PLEASE POST MORE………
momo says
WHOA! Hey MTS this is better than that Show I feel that I’m watching the TLW Whoa! you are AMAZING WRITER keep it going Please I’m love it Post soon.
margot says
i really like this spin on the finale, and how kit and bette go to PA, but bette’s gonna make it back in time for the birth, right?
slacker says
Quite enjoying this alternate view.
btownjuli says
Keep it up MTS…this is better than the real thing. IC needs to hire you and fire herself!
stylus says
yes, please continue this story…it’s so good! I enjoyed the finale but this would have been a much better ending…why? Because there is actual meaningful conversations that have depth.
justkeepswimming says
I was thinking of doing this very story because the finale was so disjointed. Thanks for taking it on, and I hope to see you continue. awesome.
alicendana says
i liked it. since i ddnt see the finale, i dont know what actually happens but i liked ur version. i hope alice and dana can work things out
Change says
I guess I’m one of those few (if not the only one) that liked the season finale…I LOVE your ending better though=P
ut says
This is good I like it, keep coming. Thanks!
LWordFanatic says
I really love TLW but the finale does leave a lot to be desired. I have watched it 3x thus far to see if I’ve missed something but I didn’t. The show just leaves so much for its viewers to have to decipher. Anyhoo, I Love your version and hope you contine… I desperately needs the story to continue. I don’t know if I will last until next year/ season.
Kel says
Its definitely better than the original. ;)