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I Need You Here -13
Tina thanked all the gods she knew that she’d managed to keep some semblance of sobriety on her, getting her and Bette safely home, even though their alcohol levels were clearly challenging the legal limit.
She was definitely more sober, having had less to drink and sticking to only one poison of choice, whereas Bette had thrown in some of Tina’s drinks with her own.
Tina glanced behind her as Bette stumbled her way to the front steps of the house. She turned back just in time to avoid hitting the same hanging plant that had attacked her the night she came home. She frowned at her purse, cursing the darkness for her inability to find her keys.
"Whoa!" Bette exclaimed, almost tripping on the front steps. She laughed. "Where’d those come from?"
"Bette, shh." Tina hushed.
Bette straightened, made her way up the steps, and ran right into the suspended plant. "Jesus!"
"Quiet!" Tina hissed.
"Nobody’s home, T. Nobody’s gonna hear us." Bette told her. She knocked furiously on the door. "Hello! Anybody home?"
"Bette, stop it." Tina reprimanded.
"What’cha looking for?" Bette asked, leaning closer to Tina.
"I can’t find my keys." Tina told her. "Where are yours?"
"Inside." Bette pointed to the door. "You told me not to bother, remember?"
Tina would curse herself later.
"Hello," Bette cooed, continuing to knock on the door.
Tina groaned, holding her purse up in disgust. "It’s not in here. I can’t believe this."
"Well, let’s go to your hotel," Bette suggested eagerly.
"I guess we could…" Tina let her voice trail off. She glanced in the direction of Shane and Jenny’s house, then decided against that course of action. Then she paused, and turned to Bette. "Bette Porter, do you have my keys?"
Bette grinned widely. "No."
"Bette."
"Tina." Bette replied, matching Tina’s tone.
"Bette, give me my keys."
"If I do you’ll just leave me alone, and I don’t want you to go."
"I promise I won’t."
"Until you have to go to New York."
Oh boy.
Tina exhaled. "Give me my keys, Bette."
"If I do will you promise to never leave me?"
"I promise to be here for you."
"That’s not what I asked." Bette said.
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“Too far”. LOL! Very nice…make them stop thinking; things go so much better for them that way.
This was really well written from beginning to end!! Oh yeah!!!!
hmmm now this is good : )
YOWZA! … continue please!
that was fab!
Woo! I’m with Bealsfan, go for it! Hot!
“Well, do you promise to love me forever and ever amen?” lol..that was great…lol..you go girls..please post soon
WHOA! It’s getting better for Bette and Tina that was so Awesome Please Post soon.
Great chapter! i loved how it ended “Too Far” hehe but i wonder if they will go all the way or that lil guilty voice will make them stop..
once again- awesome and thanks!
WOW…I must say that was Quite the chapter…totally awesome…what a way to wind down the story!!!
great chapter….it was so realistic…i love the tipsy/drunk side of bette and tina…and their undenying attraction to each other. can’t wait for another chapter.
I love this story, please don’t wind down, I always get excited when I see a new chapter added!!!!!
YEAH!!! Ms ‘Meat-tagged’ is getting herself some ‘Tina-tenderloin’!!! Yeah! (Now that the horny side of me has vented…I think this is just the thing to force Tina off the fence and pick a side…either stay with Bette or move on. PPPPPLLLLEEEAAASSSSEEEE let her stay!!!!!!)
not sure if I ever commented on your story, It is wonderful, love the angles you have taken to get them to this moment
Ah this is awesome and yeah Bette definitely need some love from Tina for so long. Bette and Tina you go girls, love it. Post soon, thanks!
Great chapter and an even better ending to keep us waiting for the moment. Thanks and can’t wait for more.
Hell yeah! Great chapter.
hehehhe…very nice…moreeee…
Too cute and funny! I love reading this chapter…I like the humor you’ve added in your writing. Awesome! More please…..
I know they need to talk before they have sex but damn just thinking about sex with a partially drunken Bette has me thinking outside my element. How could Tina resists. Shit after the NY bar scene I’m convince Bette may do it better drunk (Images from episode 9 flashes across my brain) OK, OK maybe she does her best stuff after a sonogram — but drunk sex with Bette is definitely hot!!
Thats right give your reader what they want. SEX!! Well I hope you write other stories if you are ending this one soon.
great…really well written, pls continue.
Very, very nice.
EXCELLENT!
Outfreakingstanding…excellent read. I want to know what happens on that sofa. Please post soon.
love this, bette’s was so cute hiding tina’s keys, i like drunk bette. great update, let’s hope tina won’t run in the morning.
Your chapters still flow nicely and glad to read that onnce this story finishes, there will be others.
Fantastic chapter!
The gals are getting some finally. And to keep us waiting for the big payoff, whose a tease??
Please post real soon as people are starting to ask why I have a big goofy grin on my face today.
A Fan
Awesome!!! Love it:)))
Well alrighty then! I’ll say it again, you are amazing! That was beautifully written…I think you get better with every chapter! Thanks.
Mmmmmmmm.
Love it.
Thank you.
“Bette.”
“Tina.” Bette replied, matching Tina’s tone.
*LOL! tat’s so cute..really a fantastic chapter!keep it going!
Absolutely breathtaking! This was one of the best chapters so far!
That was frigging amazing! A mesh of lust, intrigue and humour-fab!