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And Then There Were None, Ch. 8
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No! Tina screamed, running toward them, horror written across her face, as she noticed neither one of the women move. She knew one of them was hit, but she didnt know who. She hated herself for doing so, but she found herself silently praying it wasnt Bette, even though that meant that it would be Shane.
Tina let out a sob of relief as she saw Bette stir and sit up. Bette quickly moved to Shanes side, rolling her over onto her back, gasping as she saw the blood bullet hole in the thin womans chest.
Shanes eyelids fluttered, and she looked up at Bette as blood began running out of the side of her mouth. Bette, you messed up. You shot the wrong one. And with a hacking cough, Shane went still.
Oh, good going, Porter, you killed the only one of us who still was able to keep her cool, Helena said sarcastically, her voice wavering a little as she held the gun on Bette.
Ive had enough of you, Helena, Bette said coolly, reaching down and retrieving her gun. Dont think I wont shoot you.
Go ahead, Helena said with a shrug. Ill just try and shoot one or both of you before I go down.
Bette raised the gun at Helena, adding pressure to the trigger, mentally prepping herself for what she was about to do, reminding herself that Helena was most likely a murderer who had killed all of their friends, and was probably about to kill Bette and Tina. Closing her eyes, she pulled the trigger.
Helena jerked back as the bullet struck her, a bloodstain slowly spreading over her abdomen. *****, Helena muttered, glancing down at herself in disbelief. Stumbling a bit, she raised her own gun and quickly pulled the trigger.
Tina screamed and fell to the ground, a huge red stain appearing on her chest near her heart.
Told you Id ***** kill one or both of you if you shot me, Bette, Helena said, swaying to the side a little.
No! Bette screamed in horror and anger, tears blinding her eyes as she rapidly began to fire her gun, filling Helena full of bullets.
With a small croak, Helena pitched forward to the floor, landing face first.
Dropping her empty gun, Bette ran over to Tinas still body and leaned down to her right side. Oh, my God, Tee! No! Sobbing, she held Tinas limp left hand and stroked her cheek. She was so focused on staring at the quiet face of her beloved that she failed to notice the shaky, blood-covered hand holding the gun that rose from somewhere behind her.
There was a bang, and then Bettes lifeless body slumped over on top of Tinas motionless body, and all was quiet.
SO…WHODUNNIT?
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because she doesn’t like all these women including her mother who humiliated her in front of Winnie the kids Bette and Leigh.
Ok still thinking James. LOL but I don’t know so who shot bette? If I read this right bette picked up the gun her and shane were fighting for so I don’t think shane had a gun? or did she? so that would leave helena with a guy. since you said somewhere behind her. other then that all the guns were taken? Anyways loved this story, you should be so happy that jadedrouge/janetMG made a comment I’m happy for you I’m a huge fan of hers and I think she is the only other one to kill off the ladies of the L. I’m waiting for the end
wait what was I thinking shane still has the gun in her waist band I didn’t read anything more about it. So back to square 1.
This fic was great, I have no guesses as to who it was because I’m just…still scared. Hahaha it’s going to give me nightmares (not the idea of the dying, just the idea of our favorite ladies dying.ahhh) So yeah, do tell who did it.
This fic was great, I have no guesses as to who it was because I’m just…still scared. Hahaha it’s going to give me nightmares (not the idea of the dying, just the idea of our favorite ladies dying.ahhh) So yeah, do tell who did it.
Marina. Harrison fags usually hate lezzies. Maaaaan i dunn. tell please.
I’m gonna stick with my first guess. Marina! And maybe her weird husband/dad, he’s got the incentive to kill them all. I say you have Alice’s spirit come back and go exorcist on the killer, but that’s just my wishful thinking.
There hasn’t been an appearance of a Betty band member…you know they are always lurking.
I’ve been saying Marina all this time (too easy to jump on this bandwagon), so I’ll point my finger at TONYA. Chapter 4 – Dana “… looked up at the killer with one eye. “Fuck you. I hope you burn in hell,†Dana told her murderer bitterly, meaning every word of it.” Dana saw the killer and there were no exclamations of surprise… just bitterness. It was TONYA!
Technically speaking, other than the whacko offing the Ladies and One Man of L, Helena is also a murderer. Bette shot Shane by accident, however, HELENA purposefully shot Tina with intent to kill. Murder.
Come on… spill it. It’s the Theory of Everything schmuck (Benjamin) tring out his new Theory of Murder or Veronica Bloom shooting a cheap B horror movie.
Maybe it was…the butler?
Tina did it. She wasn’t shot — it was a squib.
my wild guess would have to be TONYA as well but I am not sure come on please tell us please post soon
I love this story
Hey, Fox, I have a question for you, hon – would you mind terribly giving me your email address? Thanks in advance. :)
BETTY… they’re evil
My guess? TONYA!
This was such wicked fun (even if Shane did die *sniffle*)… like Scream for the TLW set. lol
Great Story…was it Marina?
okay my first guess was Marina..faking…then i went to ALice cuz she was the only one Half alive when found…but now that i think about it..Carmen went to easily. so it can’t be marina…no blood, but she could have helped…woman you are killing me! okay…but what about Mark? okay i got it..it was marina and carmen teamed together cuz jenny broke them both?