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    View from a Tangent…Chapter 6

    Story written on May 25, 2005 by cassandra_b.
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    Bette tries to barrel into Tina’s room

    It was the pounding that woke Tina up, that and the shouting. She got up feeling groggy and glanced at the clock on the wall9:35 at nightwhen did she fall asleep?..and when was the last time she ate?….suddenly another burst of noise started and Tinas thoughts were pushed away, fully awake now Tina walked slowly to the doorit was Bettebut she could barely recognize her voice.
    The phone started ringing but Tina ignored itshe could hardly hear the phone compared to what she heard outside. It was a mixture of pleading of cursing of sobbing of screaming of choking whines all blended in with the sound of fists and shoes banging the door. Tinas jaw almost droppedand concern flooded herOMG was Bette ok?…she didnt sound okshe sound madand angry and desperateTina never thought she would see the day where Bette was desperate. She was always so collected and knew exactly what to doand now look at her.
    ..TTTINNNA!LET ME IN LET ME IN LET ME ***** LET ME IN PLEASETINA TINA TINA TINA PLEASE LET ME ***** LET ME IN DAMMIT!!(choke)please baby honey sweetie let me in I need to talk to youplease
    Tina felt her throat burn as her eyes watered, poor Betteshe reached to open the door when suddenly the brief calm tone changed into somethingdemonic
    .TINA IF U DONT LET ME INTO THIS ***** ***** AS ROOM IM GONNA BREAK THIS GODDAMN FUCKASS DOOR SO OPPPPPEEENNNNN IIIIITTTTTT!!!!!!! OPEN OR ILL GET YOU TOO!!!……
    At this Tina stepped back, suddenly fearful of a desperate Bettesuddenly angry. How dare this pitiful woman speak to her in this way? How dare she? Especially after what she did..and how the ***** did she find out she was here..Aliceangry Tina yelled back..
    .BETTE YOU DO THAT AND ILL CALL THE COPS ON YOU HOW DARE YOU SHUT UP YOU CHEATING *****!….
    As soon as the words came out Tina regretted themin the silence that followed Tina held her breath and her tearsall she wanted to do right then was open the door and take Bette in her arms, God how did things spin so out of control?..Tina felt very tired..suddenly the pounding started again but this Tina could not even make out what Bette was saying..it was a blend of loud sobbing screaming pleadings with the occasional curse. Tina pressed her hands to her ears and sank to the floor wanting everything to disappearto go back in time
    Suddenly a sound cause Tina to let go of her ears and turn white.a sirensomeone at the motel called the cops

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    1. OMG there you go. This is really good. Let the cops get Bette and watch Tina become protective. Well least that’s how it always ended when I was a cop. As soon as I started to arrest the other I had to contend with the lover that called us. Love, what a wonderful thing. LOL.. Other than a disturbance. Bette hasn’t broken any laws yet.. But if it were me. Yea i’d have her taken in for 72 hr hold. Mental. Goody goody goody. I love this… OK next please. :)

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