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MTSs Version of the Season 2 Finale – Part IV
For What Happened Previously…Read Parts I, II, and III
Shane stepped out of her Jeep and shook off her nervousness as she made her way to Camens door. Before she could ring the bell, the door swung open and Shane found her dates beautiful dark eyes and loving smile standing before her.
Hey there, youre right on time., said Carmen.
Shane smiled. Actually, I was a little early. I just waited in my car for a bit so I would be on time for you. Are you all ready to go?
Yes. And per your instructions Im dressed in sporty casual., said Carmen, turning around in her Khaki Capri pants and white tank.
West Hollywoods most prolific lover was suddenly speechless, her throat dry as her dark eyes roamed over Carmens deliciously sculpted frame. When she found her voice, Shane spoke softly Youre beautiful, Carmen.
Carmen looked down, slightly blushing. This was new for her; Shane acting shy and openly giving compliments. Thanks, she replied.
Well, lets get going., said Shane, extending her hand to the woman of her dreams.
The bronzed Latina accepted and the two made their way over to Shanes jeep. When they reached the vehicle, the thin ladies-woman opened her dates door and gently guided Carmen into her seat before climbing in on the drivers side. Once inside, Shane reached around to the back seat and produced a small, stuff, toy dog with a small red rose pinned to its back and handed it to her Carmen.
The bronzed womans dark eyes peered over at her companion and she smiled. Thank you.
Its a golden retriever. You asked me about my past and I told you before that I had a dog. Well, he sorta looked like this and his name was Randy. I know that most people just do flowers or something, but I wanted to give you something that meant something to me. I wanted to share my past with you. Id like to share a lot more if you let me., said Shane.
Carmen was floored. Shane was going to great lengths to open herself up emotionally and Carmen was beyond impressed. She cupped her dates chin and gently kissed a set of soft pink lips before moving back to her side of the car and smiling into dark brown eyes. Shanes brilliant smile touched her heart as the brunette started the engine and they began their journey.
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mstx says
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Excellent as always. Love your stories.
MLBFAN says
MTS, you really are a beautiful writer! Please continue. Oh, and how interesting that an MD would prescribe sleeping pills to an individual who is so self-destructive??
ut says
Damn Helena is a fucking bitch man I just want to kick her fucking ass. Anyway glad Bette is out off the CAC, and is Jenny gonna be ok, can’t wait to see what’s happen next. Post soon, thanks!
Jackiee1 says
Helena you f$#$&Ng dwarf!
Newcomer1 says
Helena that bitch, well at least Bette knows what’s most important and that should be enough to stick it too her! Post soon
angelak says
more, more, more. Bette can see a positive future even without the CAC – yay!!!
CR00 says
So what tina reaction going to be, I wonder if she knew it was coming. I still really want to know what the deal is?
shades says
Great chapter! Bette’s right. She’s got Tina and her soon to be family, she doesn’t need anything else!
anastasia says
Even in other people’s stories, the very little mentio of Helena makes me sick…. I’ve like soooo got an idea for a short story i just have to write! Let’s just say Helena will be taken care of… (Insert Evil Laugh) Ha Ha Ha Ha! Meanwhile, Great story! Continue your great work!!
SHAZ says
Love the story, what a bitch Helena is and what a slime Franklin is, hopefully Bette and Tina can over come this obstacle together, post your new chapter soon. Hope you enjoy you break.
downlow95 says
This is more detailed and quite a wonderful alternative to the finale
AmandaMG says
i fucking hate that bitch…. and franklyn is a spineless ass…i do like your story much better then the show…please continue
pandora007 says
someone please “kill hell”..lol..i´m glad Bette is no longer in the CAC they dont deserve her…i love it and post soon
shades says
OMG! I’m fully awake now. What the hell happened to the deal Tina made with the devil? It’s gonna come back and bite her in the ass isn’t it??????
slacker says
Still enjoying this. I want to see 9-month pregnant Tina go all medieval on Helena, but that’s just me.
moonshadow says
Hey, MTS, is there anyway you could lure the entire cast away from the set of TLW and reshoot the whole 2nd half of S2 with your kickasscreenplay? Just wondering… This is so much more satisfying! Thanks
rebelzz says
You were great! Simply fabulous!
lenab41 says
Great,simply Great! everything that you write leaves your readers wanting more. AH the power of money, let us remember that “money CAN’T buy you LOVE”. I’m waiting!!!
sportsfreak2987 says
Man poor Jenny, i wish she didn’t have to suffer so much…great writing, great use of words, great everything, pls continue.
marsupial says
Great chapter…I like the ending for Jenny…That Helena Bitch……………..thank you..please post soon