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    Forever I Promise: Chapter Five

    Forever I Promise: Chapter Five

    Previously

    Bette opened her mouth to speak, but just looked at Dr. Bruch. Take your time. Do you know what year it is? Bette mouthed the sound, T. Ok Bette that good. Now I want you to take my finger and squeeze as hard as you can with both hands. Bettes right arm didnt move.

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    Dr. Bruch finishing her examination of Bette. Tina is lost in her emotions seeing that Bette is unable to move parts of her body and her speech is impaired. Ok Bette everything is looking great. Ill be back later to check on you ok. Tina may I speak to you outside for a moment?

    Tina: Baby, Ill be right outside the door if you need more ok. Bette nods her head with a weak smile. Once outside Tina begins to ask Dr. Bruch what is going on with Bette and is this normal after this type of surgery.

    Dr. Bruch: Tina I see the concern you have. Everything is completely normal. As I explained to her sister we had no way of knowing what type of damage if any Bette would have until she was awake. This doesnt mean it is permanent. She will need several weeks of therapy and at that point we will have a better understanding whether it will be partial or permanent. The upside is that therapy could leave her with no impairment at all. Its just going to take time and patience.

    Tina: Dr. Bruch how long are we looking at for full recovery?

    Dr. Bruch: That all depends on Bette and her impairment if any. Its really hard to say this soon after surgery.

    Tina thanks Dr. Bruch and takes a seat to try and absorb everything the doctor has told her. I cant believe everything that has happened to us in the past several months. Tina begins to reflect back on Bettes personality, emotions and reactions to things these past several months. Most importantly her judgment. Was the difference in Bette because of the tumor? Was the affair also part of it? Oh my god the affair. Tina hadnt even had time since the night of Provocation to even think about what happened to them. Bette having life threatening surgery and surviving was all that mattered. Now Tina was beginning to wonder. Bette promised me forever. Was it the tumor that made her break that promise?

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    Comments

    1. TK – I’ve been with your story from the beginning and you should be dam proud. Your story is excellent. Don’t be ashamed to use you name. Use it and love it. Now…..write some more please. I can’t get enough of this one.. (:P

    2. TK…don´t be a shamed to use your name on this story. It´s simply awesome. I love it. And in a way I know how you feel regarding being a novice in writing. But you are doing a fine damn amazing job. Post soon

    3. Wow I feel for Tina…the affair, Bette’s impairment, Tina’s apparent pregnancy! She has alot on her plate. I know she loves Bette buthow’s she going to handle it all?

    4. “damm fine” of a story you got here, I just got to read all the chapters. Great job so far, it funny because I was just thinking about writing a story with bette having a brain tumor. Just though I would let you know that. Anyways you beat me to it so please go on I would love to read your ideas

    5. So good to see Bette out of the hospital. I was wondering about chemotherapy? A friend of mine had a brain tumor and had to endure lots of chemo for months after the surgery which was necessary to ensure that the tumor didn’t return. It really was the worst part of the treatment because of all the side effects: general pain; exteme pain in swallowing; nausea; loss of appetite and hairloss. Thankfully he has managed to be in remission for over a year now w/no sign of the tumor! Does Bette still have chemo to look forward to? I hope that the outcome will be good. This story is fantastic! I’m really enjoying seeing Bette being so childlike and carefree. Thanks and please post soon!!! =)

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