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Jess — Plan B; pt. 41
My mom hates me! She must! That’s the only explanation!
So, I’m now under house arrest, I’m going to be the laughing stock at school and, get this because it is the ultimate, absolute topper, mom’s got to go on location.
Does that mean that we can leave me, the relatively mature 15-yr-old by herself? Of course not! Not in my momverse!
Instead, mom wants to protract my suffering. She is going to have – get this – Bette Porter stay at the house with me. Bette Porter – can you believe it? That woman’s not good enough for my house!
What next, a scarlet T branded into my forehead, so that everyone around will know that I’m a teenager? As far as I can tell, that’s the only real crime I’ve committed.
As we pulled into the driveway, I ran into the house. Almost. Okay, I forgot my keys.
But as soon as mom opened up the door, I ran into the house.
I think Aunt Shane came in with her; I’m not really sure. I just saved mom the trouble and headed back to my cell.
Plus, I wanted to talk to Jeri, and see if she’s still talking to me after mom showed up at her party. I guess some of the other parents figured out what was going on, and her parents aren’t too pleased with her, either. She told me this yesterday in an email, so I guess she doesn’t totally hate me. So who knows, by Monday, I might have one friend left in the universe.
Why did Bette Porter have to follow me from
I wonder if she has a girlfriend back in
Now I really hate herthe thought that she’d do that to mom!
Ohdrat! I forgot to get something to drink. My cell has no kitchen facilities. I guess I need to go for a visitor’s pass to the main part of the house.
What does Bette Porter do during the day, anyway? Maybe she’s a smuggler. Here mom’s all ready to leave me with a woman that’s probably just using the art stuff as a front, while she really runs some international ring of really illegal stuff of some sort.
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(48 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
How can you feel ignored when so many of us wait with baited breath for every new update? So, Tina asked Bette to leave? This is new information and will perhaps help me understand her motives better. So far, I had wondered why she was so willing to forgive B if B had fled and abandoned the family. Thanks again. Back to waiting.
This line cracked me up… I mean, I don’t really plan to study right now, but I do need to study. Typical teenager. I love the way you write Jess. I love the whole story. Please don’t feel ignored.
Great update…can’t wait to see Bette and Jess together. It’ll be like trying to mix oil and vinegar!!
my fav story…great job
K
Wonderful as always. I hope Bette and Jess get to know and like each other while Tina is away. I hope Jess gives Bette a chance. Love this as always.
I love your story! I don’t always have time to comment but I am always happy to see another chapter from you!
I think you have great insight into the teenager psyche. I love what Jess really things vs what she ends up saying. Love the story.
Bette and Jess without Tia as a buffer will be interesting. Thanks for another chapter.
this is so much like home…only i had teenage boys…but my daughter is getting there (she’s 9)… so i’m learning a lot…love this and please continue
that girl need to grow up i know it must to be hard for her but she dosent even want to try and she dosent know the truth oh and neither do I ..lol..great chapter as always
I’m especially looking forward to hearing more of what kept Bette away all these years…and I actually enjoy your occasional mischief…but I continue to comment regardless.
Jess is such a Drama Queen. I love it!
This is one of the most entertaining stories here. Thanks for sharing your creativity! Looking forward to more…
You are not ignored. You just have lazy readers. Keep up the good work! Bette and Jess together. That’s going to be rich! I’m putting on my body armor in preparation for the next chapter – battle royal at the Kennards’!
Thanks for posting!
You must be one of the most popular writers because it took a while for my page to load!
Bon Bons…bon bons for your.
Great story, I just love Jess point of view, ha, ha, She sees Bette as a criminal who’ll corrupts poor, innocent Jess. Ha, ha.
I love Jess! This is so real and funny!
Wonderful as always. Gotta love Jess.
Pseud, I love this story. So many tymes you read a story and want to know the other characters point of view. You’ve done a great job, telling this story and a even better job of keeping each character individual, with their own voice.
Excellent as usual!
Since attention will garner more posts, keep on posting. Jess’ reactions seem quite realistic. Hoping the next chapter will show some B & J interaction.
Pseud, don’t feel ignored! I love your story. Love it, love it, love it. If I see you’ve posted a new chapter it’s the first thing I read. I think the story is clever, funny, heartbreaking and hopeful all at the same time. Are you feeling better?
OMG P please don’t feel ignored but I can only type so much with one hand before I get pissed and feel like tossing my labtop out the window. I think Jess might have read a little to much fan fic with Bette as the smuggler. I was laughing so hard at the door part, just last night I ran into the front door thinking it unlocked. The funny part was I didn’t have keys, and was locked out, and it gets even better cause I’m house sitting so the neighbors must of love watching me climb over the railing of the back porch. And crawl through the doggy door, I tell you I must of pissed someone off cause karma has hurt.
All Jess needs to do is to throw the back of her hand across her forehead and tip her head back and she would truly be a drama queen. Hmmm, could we have the makings of a WWF like Smackdown between Jess and Bette? I can only imagine what Tina’s cell phone bill is going to be like with the two of them left to each other.
I must be one of the old faithfull ?? lol – This is so fresh and funny, charming really. Thank you
I agree with cabecou very realistic. Because I feel the same way about new mom or dad.
Awesome and yes Excellent as usual!
Great and funny about Jess!