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Twisted Triangles ch.7
Previously:
“Hey, Tina you wanna go dance now?” As if I had a choice with the way he had his arm around my shoulder. It wasnt mean, just a little rough is all. When we walked away from the table he gave her this back off look. And she looked on completely hurt. Somethings up with these two big time.
Our First Night in WeHo Part three: Tina Part Two
But he was a great dancer. He knew just where to touch me without being a slimy guy. He held me tight, ok maybe a little too tight when girls would try to cut in. But after he told the story of girls being stuck with him, I cut him some slack. After a few songs I needed some air. He reluctantly let me go on my own. But I felt that his eyes never left me. Or maybe it was that girl. Or that girl. I am not imagining this. These girls are staking a claim on me. Who can make the straight girl leave her boyfriend for her type of thing. Girls can be so disgusting sometimes.
But when I got from the ladies room. Ya know they should really convert that place into a dark back room. Because those stalls are not being used for peeing. Anyway when I got back Eric was being escorted out of the club. The calm guy that held me close and laughed at every dumb thing I said, was replaced with some raving lunatic lunging for a girl that was being kicked out with him. Alice quickly grabbed him when he got outside, I guess so he wouldnt go after her.
“***** that, Alice!! She disrespected me and she disrespected her!! I dont care if she is girl” I dont play that *****. You know that! Let me go! No, let me go. Right now!!”
“Eric, will you shut the ***** up!! Theyre gonna call the cops if you dont shut up!! What even happened in there?” Alice asked. Thats what Id like to know. I was only gone for a minute or two.
“It doesnt matter. Can I have the keys to the car. I need to clear my head.”
“Yeah, sure. Just be careful Boy-Porter. That car costs more than it looks.”
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(21 votes, average: 4.24 out of 5)
Wow, I’m lovin’ it!
That was great! Can’t wait for more!!
Wow, I can’t wait to see what happens next!
Wow this is amazing and can’t wait to see what happen next, post soon. Thanks! Good chapter!
I’m want some body shots alice’s way, glad to see 2 chapps from you can’t wait to see what on bette’s mind
Very nice. I was wondering when you would post again. Writing in POV is a lot of fun, you can explore so many different aspects of a story.
nice post soon
Love the story and the dance was hot.
K
Great chapter. Loving your story. Can’t wait for more.
freakin awesome..let the rollercoaster begin!
This is grrrrrrrreat! I can’t wait to read what happens next!
great story!!!
UM, HOLY SHIT?!?!?!?!?!? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE TELL ME DAT U WILL FINISH DIS STORY AND NOT LEAVE ME UP ALL NIGHT DREAMIN??? PLEASE WRITE/POST SUM MORE!