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WTF…is goin’ on here ch 9
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(Back at the Planet)
The two un expected guess spotted the girls and walked up to them.
Hello Darlings
The girls looked at her and their jaws dropped as they stared blankly.
Kit: Hummm, dad, Peggy, what are you two doing here?
Melvin: Well, Katie, we like to party too
Peggy: Yes girls I must say Slim Daddy id the man!!!
The girls just kept staring at the very odd pair, jaws still on the floor, until Kit made another attempt to find out just what the ***** was going on.
Kit: Right ok but what are you doing HERE?
Melvin: Dont think only you young folks like to party. Were pretty good too huh Peg?
Peggy: Oh yeah, Check me out.
Peggy bust out into the Harlem Shake (Peggy style). She was going for it, fist tight, eyes shut, and shoulders shakin.
Melvin: Yeah Peg, show em how its done.
The girls couldnt do nothing but double over laughing. Tears streaming down their faces. Alice attempted to speak through her tears.
Alice: Woohoo, go Peggy.
Peggy stopped and straightened out her outfit. And turned her attention back to the girls.
Peggy: We use to do it a lil something like that in my dad. Aint that right Melvin?
Melvin: Oh yeah, but keep that on the DL, you dont want these young cats in here taking out moves.
This caused another round of laughter to come from the girls.
Kit: Well Daddy, why dont you teach us a step or two?
Melvin: Well I hadnt planned on putting my moves out there but what the *****. Peg why dont you join me. You girls take a seat and watch how its done.
Kit: Aww shucks, Im scared of you
Melvin: And you should be.
Melvin took Peggys hand and the two made their way to the middle of the dance floor. Once there, Melvin showed his Crept Walking moves, and Peggy gave them another peek of her Harlem Shake.
The girls stared on wide-eyed.
Shane: You know Kit; your father has some pretty nice move. Maybe he can teach me the C-Walk.
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Love the drama and Bette needs to get her shit together before Tina finds a woman who is going to give her what she needs. Damage control? Screw that run after her and use the Porter charm.
Dayuuuuuuuuum Neq….you brought the Drama…big time. But i liked it. There are problems in all relationships and no relationship is perfect. The girls will stumble and fall along the way so thanks for showing us a stumble. Post soon please =)…You know we are demanding. Once you post we don’t say…”Awww…thanks, I don’t need any more.” Instead it goes…”Thanks…now post more. I need more.” So, I’ll be waiting girlfriend.
Ok I think it’s time to say “What The Fuck…is going on here” lol. Well I think you want us to see the drama between them and hope you not bring a big one. Please post soon, thanks! Good chapter!
Tina standing up tp to bette before things get out of control that new and a great thing
Hi Neq I have been one of your silent readers… just wanted to tell you that your are writing a great story… Thats right Tina you give Bette a wakeup call she needs it.
you go Tina..dont let Bette treat you like this…what am i doing??? no Tina you know Bette loves you and she will try find some time for you…great chapter Neq..as always..post soon
You go Tina….let Bette sweat it out a bit before she comes craling back at Tina´s feet. Wonderful update and do keep going…because we want more. Post soon
WTF! Are you doing LOL! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! WHOA! This going Intense Okay Neq I’m just gonna wait then Please post soon.
you tell her tina… don’t let her get away with it… bette should think about it… someone else could come along and take her right away… hury bette… love this story please continue
K
Great chapter. I like the Tina with a backbone lol. Hope Bette can fix it.
N help me I fallin on my ass laughing so hard at melvin and peggy that I can’t get up. NO melvin was not c-walking OH boy peggy drop it like it’s hot!!! Damm girl I’m dying her. OK let me go back and read the rest of the story “I will be back”. Hmm isn’t that what aronld said, wow now I’m quoting my govneror. WAnt to hear something real funny 2 weekends ago I went and spent time with my grandparents, well after 2 bottles of wine my grandma starts to act like peggy and it some fucking funny ass shit.
TINA: So step off bitch!!! I need sex god dam it and if you aint fucking me then I will find shane!! Cos she will give me some ass.
Bette:SHANE why does everyone want shane?? Fuck!!! UMMM this is some good ass food damm If sex is all she wants I will give her all she needs if she will be cooking like this
Hey str8 girl, now i know wat u mean. U making us readers mad neq! u have to fix this.. but i have trust in you n i know u will get them back together! You just love Bete too much to let her suffer lol.. catch the next one IF the site loves me back! i like this actly.. (Evil laugh) tease the readers a bit ;)