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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 10
Chapter 10
Tina is home waiting for Shane. Shes nervous, very nervous. She makes herself a sandwich and some coffee. And then she sits and waits for Shane.
There is a knock on the door.
Finally. Tina says out loud and walks over to the door and lets Shane in.
Hey, wow, you look like *****. Shane says and looks at Tina. Are you nervous? She asks.
Yeah, is it that visible? Tina asks with a concerned looks at Shane.
Yes, but well fix that. Shane says and smiles.
Yeah, I hope so, I want tonight to be perfect. Tina says.
So, youre hoping for a little action? Shane says and smiles.
SHANE, no, besides I dont think Bettes ready for that, I dont think IM ready for that. Tina says seriously.
Wow, Tina, this is a new side of you. Shane says surprised.
Im not going to blow this on moving to fast. Tina says.
Thats good I guess. Shane says and smiles.
2 floors up:
Bette is pacing through her walk-in closet looking for something to wear.
Should I wear a dress or a suit? Bette asks herself. A suit, Tina will probably wear a dress. She adds and goes through her collections of suits. She finally sets on a black one with a very light pink shirt. She chooses to have her hair down. She looks at herself in the mirror and smiles. I hope Tina like it. She says to herself. She looks at her watch, only 30 minutes left.
2 floors down:
Tina has found a dress, a light pink spaghetti strap dress, reaching down to her calf.
She sits in her bedroom in front of her mirror in her sweatpants and a tank top. Shane is working her magic on Tinas hair and make-up.
So Tina how do you want your hair? Shane asks as she combs Tinas hair.
I dont know, I want it up, that I know. Tina replies.
Okay, up it is, and maybe a little messy? Shane asks looking at Tina through the mirror.
Tina nods and sits back and watches Shane work.
After about 15 minutes Shane is finished.
I think you will leave Bette speechless. Shane says and smiles, looking at Tina through the mirror.
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(35 votes, average: 4.11 out of 5)
Good chapter. Bette and Tina are so cute and what a sweet evening they have. Post soon, thanks!
Great chapter as usual. *5*
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man i love that story have i said that before?..i love it and Bette is so cute i´m glad Tina have patient it worth even more like that…please i´m begging you to post soon thanks L :-)
Great chapter, Lauren. Hope you get a hole in one!!
Ah, once more, for me I adore this slow way… It makes me feel beautiful stories like yours deeper than ever and that’s priceless. And so the way you depicted this lovely first date made me totally melting… Thank you, Lauren !! ^_^
Sweet and tender! I’m liking this tentative Bette. I’m glad they are taking it slow.
Thanks!
I do love this story, however, taking it slow is so agonizing! Personally, I have never taken anything slow…probably because I have absolutely no will power, especially when it comes to beautiful, sexy women. Ohhh well!
K
Great chapter. What a nice and sweet date. Can’t wait for more.
I’m enjoying how your characters fare unfolding. Vary much look for more……
Bette is so cute in this story. Wonderful update Lauren. Let Bette go to the pocker game and do update soon
I think this is your best story yet! Read all of them and can’t wait for the next post. I love the difference in Tina and Bette. Thanks again..
“Oh my, already?†…. who says that?lol
Good chapter anyway though
Poker night sounds like fun!
hmmmmmmm very nice …i have to lot to read …so moving on
great story, keep it coming…the pace, although slow is true to life and story…waiting next post….tks
cute!!!!!!!!