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    Prodigal Chapter 12

    Story written on July 9, 2005 by jenny8675309.
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    tina’s turn – nuff said

               When Danny covered his ears, Caroline slapped the back of his head, hard.  Ow, Danny complained.  He reached behind himself and grabbed Carolines arm pulling her over his head and onto the floor with a dull thud.

                Huh, was the sound that came from his little sister as the wind was knocked out of her chest.  It didnt help her situation that she was laughing.  She couldnt catch her breath.

                That ought to teach you, Danny said, looming over her.

                Youre Carolines breathless retort was interrupted by the ringing phone.  Lucky, she finished instead, getting up to answer it.  Kennard, she said shortly, mostly because she still couldnt breathe properly.

                Ms. Kennard, we have an Alice Piez, Peea  The poor guy continued to mutilate Alices name.

                Its ok, Caroline said, letting him off the hook with a wide smile.  Ill speak to her.

                Hello? Alice said sounding confused.

                Hi, Alice, its Carrie.  How are you? she asked.

                Im good.  That guy was a moron, she commented with an exasperated sigh.

                Caroline laughed.  What can I do for you, Alice?

                Um, my magazine spoke to your publisher and said you approved an interview with me, Alice said hesitantly, almost unbelieving.

                Of course I did.  When would you like to do this thing?  Is tomorrow afternoon ok with you? she asked.

                Yes, that would be good.  Im almost through your book.  I love it so far, Alice commented.

                Well, thank you, Alice.  I really appreciate that.  I have breakfast with Tina and Bette before Dannys plane leaves so how about a late lunch meeting around 3? 

                Ok, that sounds good.  Do you mind if we meet at your hotel?  I would rather not go to the Planet right now  Alices voice wavered slightly and Carrie could tell something was bothering her.

                Thats fine, Alice.  Actually, its probably better for me.  Ill see you tomorrow at three?

                Ok, great, see you then, Alice said.  Thank you again.

                No, thank you, Carrie said.  Ill see you tomorrow.  She hung up the phone and met her brothers questioning gaze.  Lunch tomorrow with Alice.

                Whats up with her and the hot tennis player? Danny asked, referring very obviously to Dana.

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    4. Damn fuck, damn that was so fucking hot and damn so amazing, love it. I need to drink something cold now after read this chapter. Please post soon, thanks! Great chapter!

    11. OMFG!!! There aren’t words to express the hotness and sexiness of this chapter!!! I’m getting in the very long line for a cold shower…please post soon.

    15. Ok, totally thought I was done commenting but I have a suggestion… wel not a suggestion so much as a request. I’d like to see how you think Bette would deal with her comment that she no longer ‘belongs to her.’ I like that you had bette notice this during their reconnection, that Tina was more confident, more forward, knew what she wanted etc. But I think it would still bother Bette being such a control freak. I think it would bring out her insecurities like wow. And I would love to see how you characterize that. Or I’m full of it, either way I’ll keep reading. Really proud of you, k.
      -b

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