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Vignettes: Chapter 53
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Dakota ran from the jeep to the house the minute Tina stopped in the driveway. Alices car was already parked on the street and Dakota wasted no time in racing to her bedroom to pack for her sleepover. Bette and Tina walked slowly to the house, trying to act surprised at Alices presence at the house. The held hands as they walked through the door.
Well, well, well… if it isnt the happy couple. Nice day at the beach? Alice asked as she crossed her arms.
Couldnt have been better. Bette grinned and squeezed Tinas hand.
Well, it could be a little better. Tina confessed. It was exhausting storing up all that nervous energy to tell Dakota about me and Bette. I wish Bette and I could have some time to chill and be alone.
It would be nice to unwind. Bette said without looking at Tina. She didnt dare avert her eyes from Alice or she would burst into laughter at how obvious they were being about the known secret.
Alone time, huh? Alice raised an eyebrow. So it was tough talking to Dakota today?
Not at all. She was great and responsive and understanding. Bette was amazing. She showed her pictures and everything. Tina said.
Pictures? Wow Porter, you still cease to amaze me. And not only can you woe grown women but also children.
Bette laughed and shook her head. Oh how you flatter me, Alice.
Mommy! Wheres my green blanket? Dakota shouted from her room.
Under your bed! Tina shouted back.
Tina glanced at Alice who shrugged.
Why is she packing? Bette asked, suppressing a giggle.
Dont play dumb… you guys know, dont you? Alice asked.
Know what? Tina asked.
Dakota told you. She can keep a secret as well as I can. Alice laughed. I thought you guys could use some time to yourselves to talk and sip wine and… sleep.
Tina blushed at Alices last words and Bette slyly grinned at Alice while winking. She mouthed, thank you so that Tina couldnt see. Alice simply nodded shortly just at the same time as Dakota ran into her from behind.
Im all ready Aunt Alice. Lets go. Dakota said breathlessly grabbing Alices hand.
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Dakota’s unbounded childlike enthusiasm was so engaging. Bette and Tina trying to be coy about the ‘surprise’ was cute.
I liked the way you made their alone time a sweet reconnection of love, sensuality and playfulness that was delightfully understated.
Even sweeter was Tina asking Bette to move back in. Now, they can move forward with bonding as a family. There are sure to be roadblocks, but they have come so far it will only make them stronger.
Excellent chapter. It was so sweet and I’m happy that Bette is going to move in so they can be one family. Can’t wait for the next update
Wow, simply beautiful!
I only can tell the truth – I love this story more and more with each new chapter. Your writing is heartfelt, fun and imaginative. And I so love Tina and Bette with Dakota – such a beautiful family and ALice is a wonderful friend to have and cherish being able to take care of Dakota so Tina and Bette can have some alone time. I certainly know how much that means being a Mom of small children myself.
Please continue and post again as soon as you are able – I will be very happy to see where ever you lead us But I remain very pleased that Bette will join Tina and Dakota in their home.
Excellent ! 5 kajillion stars to you!
great great great… it’s a beautiful Monday!!!!! tks fareast!!!!
ohhh so cuteeee i´m so happy for them..and Tina is lovelly…i would love to see Bette and Dakota interaction Dakota is so cute amazing chapter fareast as always post soon i dont wanna beg..lol
Yes finally the happy dance has begun and I think it will last the whole day. Thanks so much fareast what a great Monday.
Aw, I totally love it. That was completely amazing! Woo!
excellent Fareast, you made me very happy. Great chapter as always. It was good talking to you by the way, and thanks for posting.
This has been such a long sweet, tortured journey. I love the fact that I can finally savor them being together and happy.
*grinning from ear to ear* Sweet…sweet…sweet… Goooodddyyy… :D
happy happy joy joy! Thank you for posting :)
K
That was great. So sweet. Just love it.
perfect- such a good path you have taken them on. i only hope that it continues for an undetermined time…
So sweet.
Thank you.
That was just perfect…so sweet! Bette is just so damn sexy! You’ve made my day! Thanks.
Sweet, as always. Glad to see many positives between the women.
Lovely, wonderful…there is always such a sensual flow to your writing…hmmmmm.
Just a new fan here. I have to be honest it took me a day and a half to read all your stories and its not like I dont have stuff to do and people to see. But I just couldnt stop, I havent quite figured out if this is a good thing or bad thing. But until then, you write wonderfully *best fanfiction ever* Its like you know the characters like the back of your hand. Dont stop but if you must it has truely been a revelation.
Fareast,
That was a truly tender and tremendous chapter. Having Tina and Bette jostle the control of their love making and finally give in and accept each other then add the “Will you move in?†finale gave me shivers.
I will have a goofy grin on my face for the rest of the day at this natural outcome. Bette and Tina under the same roof in a permanent basis. Yippee, just about covers it.
Am sure that there will be misunderstandings then make up sessions as the gals rekindle and renew their relationship. It will be intriguing to see the rest of the gals reactions.
Please post soon as this story always brightens my day.
Thank you for sharing your genius with us.
Your Loyal fan
No begging outside the bedroom. Holy smoky what a line Fareast. Wonderful update as always. Keep them comming – we just love it.
Delicious!
I know it took many, many chapters (excellent and entertaining) to get here, but now you seem to have them on a roll, full steam ahead with no inhibitions!
I love it!
Thank you!
That was wonderful and very special.. they are a family again (sigh..). I love the tender sexy talk between these two – you keep it romantic and sweet. I love it!
Many thankyous, you have just made my day!
I love this story, glad they’re finally getting together. Without having to re-read, did you ever note how Tina conceived Dakota? Who’s the father or does it matter?