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From Afar
Yeah but right now I dont really care. I already compromised we are in the living
room and not the bedroom right now. Tina announced to Bette.
With this declaration Bette turned a little rosy in the
cheeks and just knew that she needed to move forward if she was going to get
any talking done tonight. Well I just
wanted to see what thoughts you may have as to our discussions last night. We had so many different topics we covered
that I just know that you thought of different points today that made you
wonder. I know I did and I just want
everything on the table if at all possible. Bette pleads her case before they
get side tracked as Tina is running her hand up and down Bettes thigh.
At hearing Bette talk, Tina abandons her advances and pulls
back to let Bette talked. Ok, your
right. Tina says while moving to put a little separation between their bodies. OK now what thoughts do you want to
clarify? I am all ears.
With the space Bette immediately missed the warmth and feel
of Tina. Thanks maybe we can compromise
again Bette says as she reaches forward and caresses Tinas cheek with the
back of her hand. Im not trying to do
an inquisition here I just want to make sure you are good and I am open to
anything you want to ask. Bette explains as she sees the light brighten in
Tinas eyes.
With that Tina took Bettes hand and brought it around her
shoulder so Bettes arm was draped across Tina as Tina leaned into Bette. Resting her head on the side of Bettes
breast Tina started to talk I think this is a comfortable position for us to
talk. Are you OK with this?
Bette tugged a little with her arm which resulted in pulling
Tina in close Oh very OK.
Chapter 80 – All About You
As Tina takes great pleasure in the secure feeling of
Bettes embrace, she relaxes and lets her mind go. The prevailing thought was that this is a
great place to be as Bettes scent is playing with Tinas nose.
Tell me about your day. Bette says as she is trying to
coax Tina into talking all the while rubbing her hand up and down Tinas upper
arm in a slow stroking motion.
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That was great!!!!!!!!!! they deserve it!!!!! is hurricane alice coming
GREAT WAY TO START MY LUNCH….I’M GOING HOME TO TAKE A COLD SHOWER…GREAT JOB AS ALWAYS..THANKS
Oh yeah.. this was the way to start my Friday. I love the way you write this with the passion and love forward – it’s not just sex. You can feel them emotionally reconnecting – very intense.
Jwet your are such a sweetie, was not expecting a chapter from you until next week…..THANK YOU…beautifully written as always..have a great weekend Jwet.
thanks for this last chapter :-) I have followed your story even though I didn’t comment all the time. Just know that I really enjoyed reading your story :-) I can’t get enough. Well I’ll also be busy with reading Harry Potter :-) It’s about time they published the book. So happy reading to you :-)
beautiful!!! i so enjoy reading your chapters. i work nights, so it is such a joy to get home in the mornings and see that you have posted a little bit of lovin before heading off to bed. keep up the excellent writing. can’t wait for more. have a great weekend.
Great as usual, I’m bowing down,Just great. post soon
this story has been one hell oa a ride…..phew
Umm – Tasty ! Very lekker, thank you !
uhmmm just one request I dont know if you do requests but can you have Hellno’s ass kicked in one of the chapters…please?
Thanks Jwet… a fantastic way of finishing this wonderful day… too much celebration!!!!
I love coming home from work and finding a story from you. Have friends in for the weekend and may not be on here much at all..so thank you for a great beginning .
What a perfect way to END a day. DOING MY HAPPY DANCE!!!!! DOING MY HAPPY DANCE!!!!! DOING MY HAPPY DANCE!!!!! DOING MY HAPPY DANCE!!!!! DOING MY HAPPY DANCE!!!!! DOING MY HAPPY DANCE!!!!! DOING MY HAPPY DANCE!!!!! DOING MY HAPPY DANCE!!!!!
And the truth shall set you free…
Good to see that good thing do come to those that wait…thank goodness you didn’t keep us waiting long!
Enjoy the book and post again soon. Can’t wait to see how it will go with Alice, or Helena.
I only ask one thing: Bette, you need to take your clothes off, darling. You’re going to get your suit messy…
I can’t wait till Bette tells Tina she was there when the baby was born
Jwet, you never disappoint. I’m so in awe of how seamless this story is; how everything comes together at different points and the reader is let in on aspects of the story, much like the characters make their discoveries. I know this story can’t go on forever, but you make me wish it would. Thanks
Ah, sweet (hot) love. Nicely done.
K
Wonderful chapter. Just can’t get enough of this. Love it.
PERFECT!!!
oh wow…oh wow! This is like a big fat bonus!!! Yipee!, Bette the great is back!! Thank you!!
What a perfect way to start a day. You deliver!
wonderful.I do love this story. Did you know that? I bet you did
Hey Jwet Good morning WHOA! That was so Beautiful Morning Story to get up Thanks Jwet I love it Please continue.
Well its lunchtime here and now im too flustered to eat lol…that was great! but just to be greedy could you possibly stretch it out to another chapter lol coz you know we just cant get enough of their journey back together! both in and out of the bedroom you understand..lol
JWET!! OMG, I finally caught up!! WOO-HOO! What an spectacular chapter!! AWESOME!! What a way to end my night…hehehe, I’m at a internet cafe here in the Philippines…paid 55 pesos just to use the net, sweet huh! Keep up the kick arse work, don’t worry, I’ll catch up again=D
wow! I have 2 chapters of yours today. You and MTS made my day! :)
WOW..you are sooo mean Jwet..how dare you stop like this???..lol..and i agree with gerrie Bette sex machine is back..lol..great chapter J i cant wait for more soooon thanks
What a way to start my morning!!!! Thank you for this great story. Post soon.
Great chapter, I like the discovery and how Tina really appreciates Bette’s effort for pulling this all together. Her willingness to do this with no guarantee that she would get Tina in the end. I would love for Bette to tell Kit the rest of the story. Please continue.
I must say Jwet, I have waited for Bette and Tina to come to this full circle for so long………..and let me tell you it was definately worth the wait! Hot…hot…hot….thanks for sharing your superb writing skills with us.
Fabulous! What a great way to move into the weekend. Have a great break yourself and looking forward to the next instalment with great anticipation.
hurrah, just got back from holiday to such a nice treat, you are superb, i think you should become a writer on the show!!!
OMG. truly sometimes i don’t even know what to say to you after reading your chappys. they make me happy, but its so much more than that and i don’t know if you want to be embarassed if i wrote all the adjectivesi feel by reading your story. damn girl. you have fun with harry and come back to us soon. you deserve a reward for all your sacrificies to us.
That was just incredible
Oh WWOWWWW!!! THat was so HOT! Bette is back!! More please!
hey, finally got around reading one of your chapters and i have a backlog of your chapters to read. i’ll save it for another day when i really have nothing to do.
That was just…raw…with passion. It’s about time Bette got it together and showed Tina just how much she wants her.
I have to learn the happy dance because that’s what I would want to be doing now! *happy dance* *happy dance*
Thanks….How’s Potter?
Great!
My favorite line…”Screaming out her undying love, Tina’s fervor was all about love, passion and forever as tears were streaming down her face.” You slay us yet again.
Hello Jwet: I hope that you have a great weekend and perhaps you may be going to “Our Dayton Air Show” this “Hot and Steamy Weekend.” What a segway into this Hot and wonderful chapter. I enjoyed it and I’m with all the others who will be waiting for othe next chapter.I’m happy to see both women merging and learing how to accept each other. Relationships is just an extension of how we want to be accepted and how we accept others…Bette and Tina are reaching that point to merge and start their lives together….I will be watching for the next chapter…Excellent job.
You make it awful hard for a girl to stay in a fit of petulant sulkiness… lol, but I have a feeling you know that.
What a totally complete story…Your writing is exceptional, and this chapter evokes so much emotion and passion, you feel like your right there. How fortunate we are that you are writing for us to read….Thank you thank you thank you….It’s only sad the rest of the world is missing your writing!!! Pls more, more more…..tks
EXCELLENT!!! as always sorry I haven’t commented I have been on vaction so I had to go back and catch up.. they were all great.. Please continue I am realy interested in the meaning of MYVF.. waiting to see your answer I hope Tina asked before Alice figures it out… and I also like the fact the Alice might find some good shit on Helena.. Post soon. Please
JWet,
Sorry have been MIA lately. Personal issues have kept me from commenting. Will MSN details later.
As for the story: Bravo!
I am so happy that Bette and Tina are finally rebuilding their relationship as equal partners. Tina has been wonderfully understanding about Bette’s puppet mastering of the whole MYV Foundation and her new career.
At last Bette is beginning to see the majesty of admitting her failing and faults.
Your prose is perfect and sumptuously swallows us all into this splendid story. Like flies in a spider’s web we are enticed and captured by your talent.
Not so much HMS as a long, loving reconnection of body, mind and souls. This part was delightfully tender and emotive. The love, lust and longing is tangible. Having a happy face all day now. Thank you.
Not questions as just to Damn Happy to be curious.
Your Loyal Fan.
I just came back from vacation earlier and even the sun, beach and clubs in South Beach, Fl, weren’t enough to keep me from missing this story.
This is so fucking amazing!