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One Night: Part 1
It was a great night at milk. The air was hot and the dance floor was full. Vapour rose from the tens of bodies all moving in time to the rhythm. Women dancing alone and in groups, and women dancing in couples, treading the thin line between dancing and foreplay as their bodies brushed and thrust against each other.
The writer and the tennis player watched the action from the bar. Standing close to one another and commenting on the goings on around them. At the other end of the bar Shane was leaning in close to a dark haired skater girl, shed gotten bored of playing third wheel to the newly loved up pair and split off to find her own piece of action; something Shane never found hard to do.
Look at her, Dana pointed over to Shane and the skater girl as they began to kiss.
Ah, whats wrong, hun? Jealous? Alice laughed as Dana screwed up her nose.
Duh, no, Dana leant into Alice and whispered in her ear, I have you.
Alice slid her arm around Danas back and nuzzled at her neck, You are correct.
They both looked back along the bar for a minute as things between Shane and the skater girl quickly heated up. Alice looked over to Dana, whose brow was furrowed in seemingly deep contemplation. A playful smile flickered across Alices face as she saw an opportunity to bait her new girlfriend in a way that only she knew how.
Dane, Alice squeezed her lovers waist to get her attention.
Huh, Dana realized she was staring at Shane making out and quickly tore herself away from it to look back at Alice, Yeah?
Truth or Dare?
Dana still wasnt quite focused on what Alice was saying to her, What?
Alice saw her opportunity, she fixed a serious look onto her face, all the time trying not to crack up, Have you ever thought about, you know, her eyebrows wiggled and she gestured over to Shane, who was now getting really hot and heavy with her new conquest up against the bar.
Alice had Danas full attention, Whaaaat? she frowned.
Alice sighed, and lowered her head slightly, looking straight into Danas eyes.
Have you ever thought about doing it. with Shane.
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(47 votes, average: 3.32 out of 5)
That was good, i think you captured everybody perfectly. Continue Please
Probably? You’re evil…. ;-)
That was great – please make the probably a definately and post more
hey please do the rest of the story!
great please post soon I love it and can’t wait to see what happens with them
please continue
Please continue! That was great. :D
continue i say!:D
Wonderful, really well written.
great start- loved it – very well written.
OMG!!!! It’s sooooo Hot Danish, I’m even able to ignore the presence of Britney Spears. o_O Do continue!