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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 40
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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 40
Previously
So now Tina is back with her Bette and baby makes three. But me thinks theres always other avenues to get people to see the light you want them to see. Oh,yes. And Ms. Tina Kennard is not exempt from taking a walk down an avenue of my choosing
Around 1 pm on Friday, Melvin Porter arrived at the Porter-Kennard home. It was perfect timing as Angelica was just waking up.
Melvin, if youd like to, why dont you hold Angelica while I put lunch together. Would you like that?
Yes, Tina, I would.
She handed Angelica to Melvin and he very gently took her and sat in one of the living room chairs. Tina went to the kitchen to get lunch ready. She was standing at the counter and she heard a low, smooth voice singing. She took a few steps and looked over at Melvin. Oh, my god, hes singing to herMelvin Porter is in our living room singing to Angelica.
Hush, little baby, don’t say a word. Papa’s gonna buy you a mockingbird And if that mockingbird won’t sing, Papa’s gonna buy you a diamond ring And if that diamond ring turns brass, Papa’s gonna buy you a looking glass And if that looking glass gets broke, Papa’s gonna buy you a billy goat And if that billy goat won’t pull, Papa’s gonna buy you a cart and bull And if that cart and bull fall down, You’ll still be the sweetest little baby in town
Okay, any moment now Rod Serling is going to come into the scene and let me know that, yes, you are in the Twilight Zoneso bizarre but so beautiful. I wish Bette were here to see this. She had an idea and went to the bedroom.
She came back out and walked into the living room. Melvin, would it be all right if I took a picture of you and Angelica? Wed love to have a picture of the two of you. Its a digital camera so we can see the picture right away and if you like it, well just print out a copy for you, too.
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Woo-hoo, Tuesday Twofer!! I’m glad Tina summoned up the courage to speak to Melvin. I’m looking forward to his conversation with Bette.
excellant cgapter… i always wanted melvin to have a heart… glad you showed it
excellent. on to the next one.
arceextl, this one gets a 5 star rating from me. It was so moving and so long overdue on Melvin’s part. I hope he does get to talk with Bette and tell her what he just told Tina. You did a wonderful job on this story can hardly wait for more. Thank you.
This acceptance from Melvin will help Bette ebb the fierce desire she has to compete and be the best. Not being able to see has put a spoke in that drive and has also made her feel inadequate not only as a wife but as a daughter to her highly critical father. It will make her realise that she doesn’t need to keep doing things on a grand scale to prove her love anymore…she is loved completely, as is.