Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.
Broken Girls with Strange Frames (Ch. 9)
Login to add story to favorites
(28 votes, average: 3.50 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
Chapter 9: The First Thing
Personally, and I think Bette would agree, I owe our eventual falling out to three main events, all stemming from the ridiculous idea of us living together. It’s certainly possible that, had I chosen to not move in with Bette, we still would have had this falling out, but it’s unlikely.
The first thing occurred only the second night of my working for Bette, when my very good friend Kyle decided to fall off the wagon and show up at Bette’s place, drunk. Actually, this was not the immediate point of concern, because we both took it in stride-Bette, as unfeeling as she was about drunks when they were her big sister, seemed to harbor no feelings of resentment toward Kyle for his lapse in judgment.
We were eating dinner and having a really good argument about that urban legend of Walt Disney being frozen in a cryonic chamber when he died, and I was totally winning, when there was this heavy knocking on the door.
“I’ll get it,” Bette said, standing up. As she opened the door, she managed to thrust an arm out and steady Kyle as he stumbled in, reeking of whiskey and looking like *****.
“Kyle?” I cried, standing up.
“
It was a stupid question to ask, but I figured I’d go for it: “Kyle, are you drunk?”
He laughed. “I am so drunk!” He wobbled again and Bette and I both grabbed him and held him steady.
Bette closed the front door, after checking outside for any sign of a car. “How’d you get here?”
“I found the place!” Kyle cried triumphantly. “I found it! I walked. I remembered…”
“Walked from where?” I asked. I lifted his arm around my shoulder and Bette did the same as we walked him to the couch to deposit him in a limp heap.
“I was at this bar on
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
Yay im first. i just got finished reading ur last 3 or 4 chapters when this 1 came up. the story’s coming along really great POST SOON
This story is awsome. You write the part of Alice so well. It’s like her and Bette are really here. Great job. Keep it coming. I can’t wait for the next post!
this is soooo good, its like im actually Alice… man I feel her pain..
Imagine having someone like betty mad at ya and pretending not to be!! Now that is scary, lmao
lookin fwd to the next catastrophy immensly
Just caught up with last few chapters and really enjoyed each one,love the humour in it thanks
I knew the whole “me shagging her” was going to backfire on Alice one day or another lol
Now I want to know what the two other things were.
And once again, spamming is great :D
xxx
Alice’s abandonment issues about her father, how are you able to incorporate all these little details?
You’re channeling her. She’s a real person, a muse ensconced in her West Hollywood salon, providing material for all you writers, IC included!
I got cha!!!!
Now come fucking on! You can’t leave it like that, not even for a limited amount of time! I (and probably a couple of others) wanna know how they finally got it on. =D
Once again simply excellent! Alices quirks and issues are just incorporated so naturally. I agress with with techgal you must be in touch with a muse.
Ahhhh! I wasnt the first to post!! Grrr… ok, post your next instalment so I can be the first to comment :D
I am so hooked on your writing style! I can’t get enough of it!
This exploration of Alice is amazing. You are breathing life into a fictional character with such convincing realism. Is Bette worried about her street cred? Hmmmm….