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    Can’t Help Falling In Love Chapter 52 ( The finale)

    Story written on July 27, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=55653
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    “you’re eyes, the one’s that took my by surprise, the night you came into my life, where there’s moonlight i see your eyes…”

    Bette: Please say yes. Say yes and I swear you will never ever regret that decision.

    Tina took both of Bette’s hands and helped her up from the ground.

    ___________________________________________________
    Alice: What is she saying?

    Alex’s head poked out from
    behind a tall bush and squinted his eyes.

    Alex: I can read lips. Let me
    see. " I wear you never rent…"

    Alice: What? Scoot over.

    Alice pushed in front of
    Alex.

    Alice: Oh they’re walking.
    Walking is good. Tina is holding Bette’s hand. Ok, this is good.

    Alex lit a cigarette and
    listened intently to Alice’s play by play.

    Alice: Bette is smiling!

    Alex: It’s like bird
    watching, only without the binoculars and without the birds.

    Alice:
    Shh! I’m trying to listen!

    ____________________________________________________
    Tina held tightly to Bette’s
    hand as she led her down to the water.

    Tina: Oh god, Bette Porter I
    love you. I have loved you since I was 15 years old. I remember, lying on my
    bedroom floor listening to your first soundtrack. I didn’t even know what you
    looked like. All of a sudden this voice, this powerful, raspy, ***** voice came
    booming out of my speakers. I turned to Alice and said " Who’s that?"I remember looking at the cover of the
    CD. There was a picture of you on it only it was blurry. So I searched the
    Internet high and low for pictures. I found one of you outside the theatre after
    the show. It was a profile shot. You had this cute little black winter hat on.
    Your hair was longer and some of it covered your eyes. You had this smile like
    I had never seen. I printed out the picture and carried it with me in my wallet
    for 3 years.

    Tina shook her head and
    closed her eyes, embarrassed.

    Tina: I have no idea why I
    just told you that. I feel like some kind of stalker.

    Bette laughed.

    Bette: No I think it’s cute.
    And the truth is, in New York, there is no official law against stalking.

    Tina cocked her head to the
    side.

    Tina: Why would you know
    that?

    Bette: Long story.

    Tina: What I’m trying to say
    Bette is that never in my wildest dreams would I have imagined that I would be
    standing here with you right now, that you would have let me into your life.
    It’s all so much to take in.

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    1. Owwwww, this sucks!!! but I knew it from the previous post when Tina kept sayin Bette. Man I sure hope they find each other again in the sequel and it doesn’t take too long. HURRY IT UP WOULD YA!!!! did I forget to say I’m lovin it!!!!

    2. Damm Flair way to go out with a bang LOL
      Very good only cause I know there will be a sequel. I think Bette needs a very big night on the town, where’s shane at when you need to take your mind off something LMAO
      Can’t wait to see what you have cooking for us

    3. i just have one thing to say I WILL KILL YOU!!!!!!!how can you do this to my poor TiBette heart??????it better you FIX this or i will kick your cute little ass i meant it… awful chapter post soon only to FIX this tragedy ok i have to take a valium now :o(

    4. OMFG!!!! HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO THEM, YOUR EVIL!!!!!!!!! Bette without the Tina is like, kool-aid with no sugar, peanutbutter no jelly its like ham with out the burger. They just belong together. I hope this shit gets better in the sequeal. Your gonna make me write today. I havent updated my fanfic in 2 weeks and this shit is making me write, I feelI need to make them better. Man, well it was a great ride, Please put my girls back togther. PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!

    5. K
      Well shit. NOT a happy ending after all. Great story, loved it. Would have loved it more with a happy ending lol. I hope you get them back together in the sequel. Can’t wait.

    6. My god, what kind of shit is that. What have you done. So much fun during the story and just blow at the end. OK, I will give you another chance for another chapter to fix that end. I think Alice and Alex don’t like the end of your story either, maybe if you want to stay friend with them and bring them in your next story, you should make change on this one. It’s just a advice but you should consider it. Thanks anyway.

    8. God there goes aww’s, laughter, heartbreak, shock and sadness down in that order reading this one chappy from you and the best part is..I knew it was coming..*LMAO* damn now you know you are good when your storyline can still shock someone who knew it wouldnt be conventional….*bows down in admiration*
      Now ride on the rollercoaster of drama lil dramaqueen…god if i just wasnt havin such a fear of rollercoasters I could even enjoy! lol j/k

    12. OH MY GOODNESS, HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO US!!!! TEARS ARE POURING DOWN MY FACE…..NO NO TINA ARE YOU TOTALLY STUPID, WHAT ABOUT THE MENTORING?????…I know there is a point to all this, and you writers are all enjoying this tormenting….the sick lot of you…(just kidding)….we meager readers demand justice…pls FIX IT FIX IT…you wanted comments…boo hoo you’ve ruined my day…love it anyway…you’d better post soon before we all find out where you live!!!

    13. Holy moley! In a way I was expecting that. I hope with the sequel you will let us into Tina’s head and help us understand why she did that. Thanks for the drama!!!!!!!

    15. flair – i knew you were gonna do this to us. i dont even know what to say. this is different and i think you like different. i will be reading even tho im so sad i dont wanrt to do anything. see ya tomorrow.

    16. Of course we all want them together, hopefully so do you! If I remember correctly you warned us this wasn’t going to be easy. Bumpy as it has been it has also been just as wonderful. Help us out here and let them find each other again, before to much turmoil.

    17. “In fact when I wrote the last line, I started to get a little emotional. Call me crazy…everyone else does.”
      … Ah, if feeling so easily emotional is crazy, so I am too ! Welcome to the crazy club, my Flair lady ! ^_^

      Well, well, even you actually cruely broke my heart with this (temporary) ending, the powerful romantic part of me couldn’t deny a masochistic weakness for drama – knowing, of course, that things should be better later.
      I have total confidence on you, naughty emotional-rollercoaster-master ! So, thanks in advance for all the mixed tears and smiles your sequel will bring to me… (GOD, I CANNOT WAIT !!!)

      “Alex: No, sweetie I’m gayer then ruby slippers on Judy Garland”
      HA ! Great ! Was it for me, dear Alex, following my so childish & selfish fan’s request last time ?? If yes, here’s a big hug and kiss for you from across the Ocean !! … and you could pass them to your soooo talented creator from my behalf ! (… as she would say : MWAH !!)

      Now, to paraphrase a legendary drama queen, “I’m ready for my next update, Mr DeMille” !
      Tomorrow the sequel’s beginning : that’s a DATE. Period.

      And for the entire Can’t help falling in love : millions thanks from the very bottom of my fragile heart !!! It was such an unforgettable journey through life’s biggest and greatest emotions ever, so marvelously depicted with artful lights and colours…
      A part of me will always return in dreams to this so magical moonlight-place, at South Street Seaport…

      ***** THANK YOU SO MUCH *****

    18. this was such an amazing story! the only thing that kept me from crying was the hope that in the sequel u would continue where u left off here.
      Thank you so much once again and i look forward to reading ur next story:)

    20. OK true love isnt meant to run smooth BUT good god woman! just as well the sequel starts tomorrow or youd have some broken hearts out there! so im taking it its just going to be a bumpy road then…lol but eventually……great story, love it, so thanks looking forward to the next one!

    21. Geeeeeeeeez. What’s with Arizona girl? That was just cold, man. Sigh. Bette’s gonna take forever now to trust her ass again, even if she comes to her senses. SIGH.

    22. Great story but I reckon Bette’s had a lucky escape and I hope she gets over her heartbreak soon. Tina has been a whiny unreasonable brat pretty much from the start. Bette’s been doing most of the compromising. She completely upended her own life for Tina and she had a lot more to lose. I hope Tina gets to do a lot of grovelling in the sequel ;-)

    25. You go girl……the easy option would have been a nice neat reconciliation…..I like it that you were brave enough to stick to your guns.
      Of course I am saying this safe in the knowledge that there is a sequel…..If not, I would be threatening to tie you to the computer and leave you there until you give us the ending we want!!!!!!

      As ever I can’t wait til the next chapter ;)

    26. what the hell, man?! I’m sad and I feel bad for Bette. I don’t know how the hell you’re going to get them back together but I can’t wait to find out!

    27. You would be so dead right now if I didn’t know that you’d be back with the sequel tomorrow! LOL! Truthfully? I love this ending ’cause otherwise the story would end and it would be “goodbye” to all the drama, laughter and love that you so beautifully and wonderfully produce! So, thanks! I loved this journey and am looking forward to tomorrow!

    28. I know some way you will get these two together,Tina needs to finish school,and then to NY she will go,to find her Bette, Will Bette wait,she has been hurt really bad. Will she every forgive Tina for this. Will she ever Trust Tina with her heart. Will read the new sequel. THANKS

    29. Man flair, you’re lucky you’re planning a sequel because if you were to end it this way I would’ve had to come to New York to find you!!! :oP *Wipes tears from eyes and takes a deep breath* Okay, I think I’m going to be alright. See you at the sequel!

    31. Flair..I wish you could have felt my heart breaking. You are truly a gifted writer. I am looking forward to more laughs, sex and drama. Please don’t make B & T hurt too much. Oh by the way. Alex and Alice are wonderful..you should give each of them someone to love. You are awesome and I will be here with bells on looking for the sequel. hugs and kisses

    32. AWESOME STORY–THIS SHOULD WIN ALL THE AWARDS! But I think Tina is being a little immature and selfish. Bette is a big star and came out for her and risked everything. What else does she want? For Bette to give up her whole career? Maybe Tina needs to start sacrificing alittle. Seems to me, Bette is the only one making changes!!!!!!

    33. Okay, of course were all going to look forward to the sequel cos you’d best be putting our girls back together. I cannot believe you ended it like that. My heart just stopped. That sequel better be comin soon. Love Alex and Alice they are soooooooo alike.

    34. ohhhhhh it’s so sad though. but of course your all about the dramatic (and the funny!) so i suppose that’s the point! i personally loved this as an ending. after everything that happened it wasn’t the happy ending that everyone wanted bette and tina to have. of course they’ll end up happy in the sequel right? guess i’ll have to wait! you’re the best and i love u flair!

    35. “This was not the way she had imagined this ending.” Well that makes two of us! Lol – Just as fantastic as always, love the drama and I can’t wait for the sequel =)

    38. ah, I know I can count on you to have all the Dramas going on… this way you keep us on the edge of our seat. I know you’re coming with the sequel soon. Loved your Alex, he couldn’t be gayer. LOL.

    40. Been following since the begining and will be looking forward to the sequel, I can’t wait for all the drama you have for us and hopefuly some hot loving lol.

    42. I applaud the ending (though I would like them to be together). It makes sense, Tina needs to finish school (show some self respect), before a B&T fairytale ending can happen. Looking forward to the sequel.

    43. Whoa…hold on there? Talk about drama? Wow…no wonder you are making a sequel to this story…..looks like you made sure we were going to have to beg for more. So I am going to beg………….

    44. EVIL EVILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!

      lol at page 2 i was reassuring myself that it would all be ok….that’d we’d have a happy ending, but Noooooooooooooooooo you do that to me.

      You’re not my friend anymore :P

      Narh JK. Great writing. And i have faith that in the end, love will prevail. lol.

    47. I must say that my eyes filled with tears reading that :*( Obsessed much? Yes. Sad? Yes. Angry at you? No because hopefully the sequel will bring them together again, if not I’ll kick your ass jk lol Personally, if I was Tina (and I wish I was) I’d say fuck college in Arizona!! Transfer to NYU or Columbia or better yet Fordham(cuz I’m going there lol) for the last year and be with the woman you love god damnit!!! Argggg! I’ll be waiting for the sequel and I can only pray its full of happiness!

    51. Damn you made me cry and damn what a good way ending the story and let see the sequel and see how they gonna fix their breakup. That’s sad and please post soon, thanks! Good job 5 stars for you!

    52. Oh no you didn’t Flair.You didn’t just go breaking my heart like that!You better fix it in the sequel, or just put me out of my misery right now… :)
      Seriously though, a great story, and funny!Hope you keep Alex and Alice around for the laughs. B and T could use a few laughs themselves.. I mean geez,what’s up with Tina? Pleeease go easy with the drama, though drama is good, and by the looks of things, you may even have a flair for it :) (but for the love of god , let the good times last even for a little while..) thanks for writing and post SOON.

    53. OMG! What I don’t really expected that you this gonna happen WHOA! You BREAKING MY HEART Lord Have Mercy Ouch! It’s really SAD WOW! I don’t NO What to say but Thanks WHOA! OK Please Post SOON.

    55. WHAT! WHAT! WHAT! I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU LEFT IT LIKE THIS!!! YOU KNOW WE’RE ALL GOING TO READ THE SEQUEL ANYWAY! SHEESH! YOU BETTER POST SOON FAIR!

    56. how could you finish like that????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
      Too much drama…

      I hope they don’t take too long to find theirselfs again on your sequel, please decrease the amount of drama and increase the fun and specially the love between then, please I need then together…

      You are going to put some other characters from the show on your sequel or will be just the one’s we already saw?????

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