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    No Good Deed Goes Unpunished (Sequel To Can’t Help Falling In Love) Chapter 1

    Story written on July 28, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=55676
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    “I’ve heard it said, that people come into our lives for a reason, bringing something we must learn…”

     

    Bette awoke clinging to her down comforter for warmth. No matter how many times she contacted the landlord the heat never got fixed and it was driving her crazy. She jumped out of the bed and ran to retrieve her robe from the closet. She wrapped it tightly around her slim frame and began toward the kitchen. In the world of Bette Porter, the day did not start with out coffee. She reached for her mug and began pouring. It was only after she added the milk that Bette realized she hadn’t made any coffee. She turned around in a panic to find a beautiful woman lying peacefully on her couch. She approached and placed a gentle kiss on the woman’s forehead.

    Bette: Good morning.

    The woman opened her eyes slowly, rubbing at them to clear her vision.

    Bette: What are you doing here?

    Bette’s heart and body warmed at the sight of her.

    Sara: Happy Birthday.

    Bette: I was hoping no one would remember.

    Sara let out a slight laugh. She was tall and thin much like Bette, with the same dark curls. Her eyes, however, were a piercing green and her skin a creamy white. Her features were more striking then Bette’s subtle beauty but they complimented each other well. She was the dance captain for a touring production of a Broadway show and usually not in town.

    Sara: No such luck.

    Bette: I thought you weren’t coming home until tomorrow.

    Sara: I wanted to make sure I was here to give you your birthday gift.

    Bette: Oh, yeah? And what’s that?

    Sara stood up slowly and wrapped her arms around Bette. She kissed her neck, letting her kisses trail upwards.

    Sara: Me.

    Her voice was ripping with desire.

    Bette: And what have I done to deserve this?

    Sara: Do you remember last spring in Tahiti?

    Bette: Uh huh.

    Sara continued her assault on Bette’s soft skin, alternating between kissing and talking.

    Sara: And remember that night there when we rented the boat?

    Bette: uh huh.

    Sara: And remember what we did on that boat?

    Bette: Uh huh.

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    2. hmm where could this be going? An interesting rekindling to be sure, I look forward to new spins between bette and tina and I’m sure, given your other writings, you will deliver with much FLAIR. Thanks for your great stories you are right on target with our favorite ladies. Can’t wait for the next…

    3. The ending to the other certainly caught me off guard. Didn’t piss me off but it did surprise me. I am really happy with the ending now because without it you wouldn’t have started this story. I really liked this chapter and look forward to more.

    5. Oh you wicked wicked girl this is so rich I love it. The nerve of Tina at least you would have thought she would have changed her name UNLESS Tina is trying to get in touch with Bette through some back handed mind F*** way. Like I said so rich thanks

    7. Hey Flair I really really liked your ending to the last story!!! Don’t let these hater tell you any different. Happy ending are so gay LMAO

      Anyways this was a great start and of course I will be following along as always

    8. I’m glad you stuck to your guns with the ending of the last chapter..i for one liked it…i’m sure we are all in for some major drama, mini heart attacks and all.
      Thank you.

    9. Now Flair, you realize I was just kidding with my ribbing last chpt…Any here yet again you have suceeded in capturing all us avid readers into your web…Another amazing start to what hopefully will be a LONG/HAPPY journey…PLs a request….Lot’ of banter with Alex/Alice and all…Lot’s of NC-17 as you do that so well…and topped off with a bit of whipped cream and cherry…so to speak..pls don’t let us hang too long with the next chpt..we do deserve another quick installment being that we are still trying to forget how you left us last!!! LOVE YOU…

    10. I am totally hooked!!! I thought I’d get a mild heart attack at the end of this chapter….. sheesh what a way to leave us hanging. Boy oh boy I’m gonna be back here every hour on the hour in hopes that you post soon, I am soooooooo anxious about that phone call!!!!!

    11. alrite flair…i totally missed the finale of the other story and was reading this one totally confused like what the hell did i miss..but wow..this looks promising..still addicted post soon! thanks

    12. i’m glad you posted a sequel, although it’s not a bette and tina one, but it will be right? please say yes!! anyway i loved the start so please continue!

    14. Flair,
      Hook, line and sinker; i am cast on your line again.
      Setup was brilliant. Yep this looks like a bumpy ride but a brilliant one to.
      Please post real soon as I feel the need for some Bette and Tina action as only you can do.
      I have a feeling that Tina may have realised what she lost and now be in a better position to deal with everything.
      Time moves on and people change but love remains constant.
      I trust you with everything that you write.
      Awaiting your next post with so much anticipation that I could burst.
      your Loyal Fan.

    16. Tina is pushing Bette, That silver lining is just a black turn inside out. Bette is smart,so Ms Tina will be in some big trouble. The stubborness in Bette will make TINA wimple and quake in her shoes when Bette get through with her. THANKS

    17. The only good I can see coming out of this is that Bette takes it, stars in it and becomes huge because of it. But I’m sure you have more up your sleeve. I like that you took the story a year and a half in the future. Your story is brilliant. Looking forward to more. Soon pleeeassseee.

    18. i didn’t read it yet… i’m not really used to let comments…but i feel like i should!
      I LOVE this story! i think it’s one of the best we ever had… and this ellipse ( i’m french and i hope we use the same word or you’re not gonna understand what i mean…) is making me feel real weird! Because it’s true that at the end of the last chapter i really didn’t know where you were gonna take next time…but i hoped that would not take this path to make an ellipse!
      Nevertheless…thank you for your Amazing give… you brought tears to my eyes…and a lot of smiles upon my face!
      May the Froce always be with you!
      I’m gonna look forward to seeing those two back together again! Don’t disapoint us! (kidding!)

    19. WOHA! flair Thanks for writing back I’m still NOT recover to read last chapter you really Break My Hart LOL! but Thank you that you still continue this Beautiful Story So you are Forgiven LOL! again Thanks PLEASE CONTINUE.

    20. Flair- I know you took a pummeling so I begged off commenting on the finale for I too felt diappointed and somewhat let down…even though in life there aren’t always happy endings I do perfer it in my literature..speciall when B&T are involved.

      I am calmer and wiser now, so great start. I love that Bette is demanding to see her. I can’t believe Tina would actually use her name…HElloooo.did she never watch Dragnet and knows to “Change the names to protect the innocent?” Don’t know what that girl is thinking. Now get her ass back to NY Flair. Enough with the blazin drama and cliffhangers! Hope you’re holding up well, its just cuz people were invested in your story and that’s always a good thing!

    21. Damn! You’re the best!
      Rachel_Raj is doing the REAL movie version of TLW, and you are doing the REAL play!

      I love this, I love this, I love this!!!!!

      So, is this a trilogy???????? If so, this is afternoon…

    25. I see that Jwet called you a “wicked, wicked girl”…I wonder if she was referencing your writing or your borrowing contents from WICKED…whatever, you caught my attention…I like the story…I might even have to go back and read the other one…thanks…

    27. Used her real name?? Tina’s lost her mind. This story is a kick, man. Forever I felt sympathy for Tina and now I just keep thinking “stay in Arizona. who cares!” A tribute to your writing skills i’m sure. ;)

    29. i didnt wanna read cuz i was still feeling the pain. but it was you and i love the way you write and your mind. so i gave it a go and im glad i did. ill keep an open mind. lol it was great.

    30. please put then together soon… you are killing me… I can’t stop crying please, stop or decrease the suffer put other characters in pain this time… please put more fun and love for us please flair

    31. Very nice start…I was getting really antsy after the last ending, but now I am looking forward to where you are going with this! I know you are a true B/T fan so I trust you will not break our hearts…too bad.

    37. flair, this is awesome!! I’m ecstatic! They obviously still have some feelings for each other. Otherwise Tina wouldn’t have written the script and Bette wouldn’t have read it. You can’t just walk away from love. Keep dishing it out, flair, because I’m just gobbling it all up! ;)

    39. Well, I absolutely detest the fact that there was no Bette and Tina together forever and a happy ending. I hate that they’e not together, but for ome reson I have a soft spot for your writting. I do see progress towards them being together, I see hope, but I also know that dealing with you, you never know. Excellent start. Please post soon.

    40. I feel the same way as pandora- I refuse to think Bette is with Sara. Nope I just imagined that part. Must be lack of sleep or something. Anyway all I’m praying for is B&T to rekindle. Please don’t make it too dramatic because fragile hearts can only take so much lol Post again soon

    41. no no no no no…i refuse to believe that Bette is with somebody else..ok..back to “cant help fall…why the hell Tina made such a big deal to Bette “get out the closet” if she knew she wasnt be with her for a long term?..she knew that sometime she d going to be back to arizona..i dont get it that part and now about that story it better you FIX this i just had lunch and i am not feeling well thanks to you…lol..FIX FIX FIX

    42. Okay gotta admit that after the last ending I was a bit skeptical, but this is looking interesting. Nice start, can’t wait to see where it goes.

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