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    No Good Deed Goes Unpunished ( Sequel to Can’t Help Falling In Love) Chapter 2

    Story written on July 28, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    “Friendship is thicker than blood…”

     

    As Bette continued to roam the streets of New York she became more and more grateful that it was Monday. The thoughts of Tina that had invaded her mind were taking their toll. She was grateful to be meeting a friend at the bar because right now all she wanted was a drink. As she entered Therapy she noticed the familiar smile across the room and then the Karaoke machine set up in the corner. It was going to be a long night.

    Bette: When were you planning on telling me about this? I mean I have to assume you knew about it.

    Bette stood poised and waiting for an answer. Although she knew that there would be no answer good enough.

    Bette: Aren’t you going to say anything?

    Alex: not until you have at least one drink!

    Bette: Don’t give me any *****, Alex, I am really not in the mood.

    Alex: Not even a little in the mood?

    Bette: Alex cut it out.

    Alex: Because you look like your in the mood.

    Bette couldn’t help but crack a smile.

    Alex: See, now don’t you feel better?

    Bette: Not especially.

    Alex: Well this will make you happy…

    From behind Bette a huge group of the city’s most notorious ***** men came swarming up to her singing happy birthday at the top of their lungs. Bette’s face blushed with embarrassment and then turned red when she saw Alex laughing.

    Bette: I swear I will have you killed.

    Alex: Oh stop it. It’s your birthday you should be celebrating.

    Bette: How long have you known?

    This comment snapped Alex back to the situation he had been hoping to avoid.

    Alex: Known what?

    Bette: Please don’t make me reach across this table and smack you.

    Alex: Hit me like you love me.

    Bette: Oh, eww.

    Alex let out a loud laugh.

    Alex: Come on, you love it!

    Bette: Maybe a little.

    Bette smiled at her friend.

    Bette: But Alex, please I need to know. I won’t be mad.

    Alex: you swear?

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    1. oh man u r evil!!! my heart can’t take much more of this suspense. I’m enjoying the pace of the story, but my ego is saying “move it along already” Your last story and the last chapter of this new story has me on the verge of breaking down and bawling my eyes and lungs out!!! Be nice and post another chapter for the pitiful ones like me!!! huh PLEASE, PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!

    2. Oh and stop there? No no no. Please get them back togehter…. I’m begging, Oh well, more drama wouldn’t hurt I guess. You’re doing a great job. I can’t wait for the next post, which I hope comes really soon. 5 stars for you ;)

    3. Just read your 2 chapters and really getting onto them thanks for posting so soon have to agree with you in your comments happy endings arnt always real life and atleast no one died! right!so keep it comin and maybe just consider a happy-ish ending when the time comes..lol lovin it tho!

    7. My heart hurts soooo bad. DAMN!!! Well, I am thankful and greatful for two posts in one day. I would love for you to ment my heart the way you know we all want, and I know deep down you want it to, but tell your story girl. I just hope I wont die first.

    10. i am so very SAD right now..how could you do this to us ??? evil briliant mind…tell me this is a nightmare..and they dont were apart for 2 years..Bette still love Tina very much but i am not sure about Tina but i truly hope so… THEY BELONG TO EACH OTHER i will not say great chapter for now..lol.

    13. I am hoping to hear why on earth Tina would do this. Why would she write a PLAY about her relationship with one of Broadway’s biggest stars? I don’t understand how she could possibly think that would be a good thing, for anyone. If she felt such a strong urge to put their relationship down on paper, why not a book instead of a play? Not only will she splay open Bette’s private life, but her own as well, which I don’t think will help her with a future career on Broadway. Why would anyone trust her enough to want to work with her? If Tina is willing to tell all about she and Bette, she would have no qualms at all about writing about them too. Just a confused opinion.

    17. I love this story and thank you for the two chapters already, but I have to agree with hopeful, why would Tina write a play telling the world one of the most private parts of her life with Bette. Does she really think that this would go over well with Bette? Anyway keep them coming Flair!!

    20. Well, unfortunately I wasn’t there quickly enough to leave a comment to your first chapter before the second one appeared ! So… I’ll comment both of them now – and as always, gratefully…

      Ah, clever girl ! I agree : happy endings aren’t always the right thing to do – especially in a beautifully merciless drama story like yours ! And even if hopelessly romantic hearts like mines have a big weakness for happy moments…
      Well, true romantism is also a bit masochistic, I’m afraid, so drama always brings delightful thrills, fears and hopes – and that’s pure 19th century’s French romantism : I adore it.
      If “Can’t stop falling” would have ended in a fairy tale, all your readers would have be affraid now guessing something would happened to spoil the dreamy happiness !
      Instead of that, gifted lady, we rrrrran to the sequel hoping that something happy will happened one day ! That’s what I call a really clever author’s tactics. Cruel, pitiless… but how much temptating – and what an anticipated emotional build up ! Applause !

      Now, about the story here…
      Obviously, even if it’s hard to wait to get keys, Tina and you have something in common : we totally ignore your secret motivations but no doubt they’re serious and well-thought.
      So for me I’ll stay a wise and confident reader, even with such an enormous question mark in mind – and deep impatience in heart !
      Tina and you are two awful secretive girls but… the way to not love you ???
      Cannot stop falling in love with your story, dangerous charmer…

    23. well i think I will stop reading for while, I can’t handle that much suffer, maybe next week I continue because I still hope you going to put than together but I can’t handle more suffer so close from the weekend, it is too much for my heart, serioslly you are killing me chapter after chapter please put then together soon

    25. Is Tina trying to make poor Bette lose her mind? She loves Tina so much,doesn’t Tina know this? Lets see how a meeting goes between them. Tina did rip Bette’s heart out then kicked it like a football.. THANKS

    26. my, my, my, we do have a flair for the dramatic don’t we? this has become my favorite story on fan fic. You have a gift, but I was very sad after the finale of can’t help…..please be good to our favorite couple in this story please!!!!! I don’t think my heart can take another sad ending. keep up the good work, and please post frequently!

    27. lovin the drama it kicks ass, I think Tina might have had time to brush up on here player skillz lets hope bette doesn’t hate the player but hates the game. LOL

    28. OMG you did it again, to be honest, i really love where you’re taking this story, i even have the feeling that this one will be even better than the 1st one, Not that it was bad or any thing, you know i enjoyed it..
      But really after reading only two chapters, i’m hooked more than ever, and i love DRAMA, be as evil as you want.. i’m totally fed up of all the picture perfect Bette and Tina stories.. not that i don’t like them, cuz many cool writers write some very cool Tibette romantic fics in this site, but we need different and new things, thats why we read different stories..

      OKAY i better stop rambling now.. LOL..

    29. WHOA! That was so Wonderful WoW! OK flair we Love it it’s getting Interesting keep going and I’m hope that Bette and Tina talk to each other WHOA! I’m so excited to read this again Please posted soon Thanks.

    31. Okay,okay, we went along with the sequel. But your killing us. Is Tina in the bar? OMG wait till Bette gets the message. I love Alex. Can’t wait till next post. You just love stringing us along, and we happily follow. Keep going.

    33. geez Flair..you are going to slowly kill us. The heart can’t take too much. I do believe you will out do the first with the sequel. WE LOVE YOU..post really soon

    34. geez Flair..you are going to slowly kill us. The heart can’t take too much. I do believe you will out do the first with the sequel. WE LOVE YOU..post really soon

    39. this story has been on my mind ever since i read the last chapter of ‘can’t help..’! flair, u r the best! these stories are like little treats in the midst of crazy days!! thank you:)

    40. So this is my first time posting on your story. Been reading from the beginning and I just want to tell you that you are a WONDERFUL auther. I love love love love your story, keeps me on the edge of my seat all the time. But I do have one request please please please get B&T back together, but I mean soon. No better yet I mean NOW!!!! :)

      Thanks for writing such a wonderful story

    41. oh yeah…happy birthday my ass! i wouldn’t even want to celebrate my birthday anymore if i were Bette!lol…
      this is so good! please keep it coming…and also longer!!!!

    42. I do love this story but it gets me all choked up. I don’t know how I keep the tears in. It’s just so sad seeing them apart :( They can’t be happy with the people they’re seeing, so please get them back together for their sake and ours lol Post soon

    44. I am dying to know who Tina is dating.This sequel is going to be a rollacoaster and then some.New Yorkers tend to be passionate people but not patient, so you need to get them back together.However take your time doing so.I am loving this whole mini-series.

    45. Oh fuck this is awesome and excellent, love it. Damn this sequel is more more drama and crazy for Bette and Tina, can’t wait to see what’s next. Post soon please, thanks! Good chapter!

    46. you know I love the drama, especially the complex way you weave our two favorite characters lives together, can I start calling myself Flair’sFanForever now?

    47. Ok I love the drama no doubt about it but it sucks to read about them with different partners. So when they do get back together i need alot of make up SEX to repair my broken heart,lol. Post soon I LOVE IT.

    48. i love it! the beginning for the sequel is even better than the beginning for the previous part, and i know you’re not done surprising us yet. i love this

    50. I hate myself for being addicted to your story. I can’t let go, because I hope that someday things will get better. Thank you for the another chance you gave B&T although it doesn’t look too bright right now.

    51. This is great but I have one request at this point. Please god don’t let them get back together!. Echoing what someone said above, not only would no-one ever trust Tina enough to work with her, who the fuck would ever trust her enough to sleep with her or fall in love with her?

    52. Flair that was a great chapter i can feel the drama coming, love it…now wasn’t it Bette who said to Tina when she orginally read the script that Tina wrote that she should change Dean to a female as it would be ground breaking..now she planted a seed in Tina’s head thats all i’m saying…so i hope Bette gives her consent..
      Thanks for the Chapter Flair.

    53. Flair,
      I love the direction that this sequel is taking. Bette and Tina belong together as they as halves of the one soul.
      But life intervenes and makes things difficult for all of us. Having the courage and determination to follow your heart is the rue making of a human being.
      I doubt that Tina or Bette at this point are able to make unbiased decisions about each other.
      Unconscientiously Tina is forcing the issue and meeting Bette head on.
      Time may have passed and heartache softened but some wounds, like fissure cracks appear to be mended but only on the surface. These wounds are easily reopened and take love, trust, understanding, commitment and fortitude of spirit to outcome.
      I adore the way you have kept Alex in the frame and his repartee with Bette is hysterical. The image of a gaggle of gay men singing to Bette is side-splitting.
      Thank you for continuing this marvelous melodrama. Your hard work, effort and immense talent is truly appreciated.
      Your Loyal Fan.

    55. I just caught up on your story! My heart is breaking for Bette!! It is so hard to move on with your life after a breakup like that. I have no sympathy for Tina! I think she is a spoiled brat. Bette came out of the closet for her and then she dumps her because Bette had to go back for her job. I also think Tina is not over Bette and this play is a way to worm her way back into Bette’s life. Sara is looking better and better. I hope Bette rubs her in Tina’s face at every opp. I am an avid B&T fan but I want Tina to deal with the consequences of her actions. This has to be the longest comment I have ever left!LOL

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