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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 34
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Chapter 34
She kneel down in front of Tina, she takes her hand. Tina’s face changes from happy to panicked and then to emotionless.
“Tina will you marry me?” Bette asks and waits eagerly for Tina’s reply. Tina doesn’t answer and she looks like she saw a ghost, then a few tears escape her eyes.
“Tee?” Bette asks.
Tina’s eyes are staring, as if she’s seeing right through Bette. Then she speaks.
“I can’t” Tina is able to say. Bette looks at Tina with a hurt face. Did she hear correctly?
Tina starts to sob more and more. Bette couldn’t believe Tina’s answer. She stands up, looks at Tina one more time, then turns and walks out of the restaurant. She’s in shock, she’s in pain.
Tina snapped out of her thoughts, she then realizes what she has said, she follows Bette outside, but she’s too late. Bette drives off. Tina cries harder, she takes out her cell phone and calls Sarah, and asks if she could pick her up. Sarah arrives 10 minutes later. Tina gets in.
“Tina, what’s wrong?” Sarah asks as she sees the tears. “Why are you crying? Did Bette do something?” Sara continues.
“Yeah… She asked me to marry her” Tina is able to say between her tears.
“What did you say?” Sarah asks.
“I think I said, I can’t.” Tina says.
“I thought you two were solid, why did you say that you can’t?” Sarah asks curiously.
“I panicked, all the emotions from this trip just caught up with me I just sat there. She was so hurt, I could see it in her eyes. I love her. I love her so much. I have to find her. This can’t be the end.” Tina says.
“Where do you think she went?” Sarah asks.
“I think back to the hotel.” Tina replies.
“Well, let’s go there.” Sarah says and drives full speed to the hotel. She stops outside the main entrance.
“I’ll wait here.” She says.
“Okay, thanks.” Tina says as she gets out of the car and rushes inside and up to their room.
She stops outside the door. She could hear Bette’s cry from the inside.
She realized that she didn’t have a key. After a few seconds, she knocks. There’s no answer.
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YOU scared the shit out of me!!! I thought we were gona have real drama… I know we will with the family but please not with Bette they have had enough in all the other stories let them stand strong together…PLEASE!!! Post soon I love this story.
Hey Lauren me too I’m just scared too LOL! WOW! I thought their Breake up again Oh! each really too much enough Broken Harts in Fan Fic my Harts also can’t handle of this LOL! Thanks Please post soon.
This is a very nice chapter, but I am still a little uneasy about them getting married or engaged so soon. I stand by my previous statement that they need a little more passion in thier relationship. I understand Bette wanting to give Tina the world and be near her all the time, but they need to spend more time outside of thier circle of 2. They really do not spend that much time out and amoung friends, in the world.
Not allowed to do that again. great chapter .
OMG what was that??? are you trying to give me a heart attack??? GEEEZZZ can i breathe now?..iam so fucking happy more than Tina..lol..Bette is amazing they are a beautiful couple..ok its time for you make it up with all of us for the scare moment and give us some LOVE..lol..amazing chapter L love it..post real soon thanks :o)
Lauren…my heart dropped then stopped NOT a good thing. LOL. Glad everything worked out, I thought Tina was going to be stuck at the restaurant. This chapter should have a health warning in the beginning ;-)…thanks Lauren, please do continue.
Wonderful chapter. Post soon. Thank you
You scared me there for a minute…WONDERFUL CHAPTER..PLEASE POST SOON
I am so glad you correct everything in time… I was dying here… thanks to put everything in the right place at the end… I couldn’t handle they apart…
Excellent way to use torment and language … you had us going for a bit but i believed your earlier statement that it would all turn out fine . and fine it did … the moment(s) of uncertainity for tina is quite understandable given the current state of her new love life and the reconnecting with her familial history. So much restructuring going on in her life, and in Bette’s too, but tina’s seems to be alittle more intense at this particular point in time. The one good thing these two have, is the ability to communicate which always permits a relationship to survive and possibly flourish – and they are going to flourish! More posts soon – they would be oh so greatly appreciated :-)
K
Well thank God she said yes. Wonderful chap, can’t wait for more.
Hey Lauren, you know you scare the hell of me you know that and glad she said yes, and I’m happy for them, love it. Post soon please, thanks!
Oh yes, emotional overwhelming can make us react oddly sometimes ! But since only the most intense and deep feelings are able to create this sort of “short madness”, it’s finally much more touching than odd – and consequently beautiful.
Like tears of joy…
That’s also a touching reversal of the “official” character’s situations, with Tina being the insecure, fragile and not talkative one here, next to a very “kennardian” understanding Bette…
“You make my life a flower every day” : how lovely… aww !
Thank you, Lauren ! I wish you a great Sunday ! ^_^
i nearly collapsed. LOL~ awwwwww..is juz so sweet…! post soon!!!!
Yes you did add some drama to this chapter!
Just caught up on the last few chapters and it’s great. Yeah, you had me there for a moment. But, it’s good to see that ‘your’ Bette is more secure and persistent. I’m glad we didn’t have to weed through more drama to get back to the proposal. Thanks, Lauren. Another post, please.
Oh thank fuch for that, what the hell are you trying to do to us?!?!?!?!?!?! That kind of writing is the stuuf that will put readers in the local ER but it was ohh soo great to read! Post soon Lauren and lay of the drama for a little while!