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    No Good Deed Goes Unpunished (sequel to Can’t Help Falling In Love) Chapter 4

    Story written on July 30, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=55732
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    “Don’t dream to far, don’t lose sight of who you are, don’t remember that rush of joy…”

    When Bette awoke the next morning she prayed the following evening had been a dream. It wasn’t until she rolled over and practically landed on the floor that she realized it was all real. The play, Tina, the conversation, all of it, her worst nightmare. She sat up on the couch and stretched her sore legs. It was time to beg for Sara’s forgiveness. Bette approached the bedroom quietly, tip toeing so as not to wake her girlfriend. Her jaw dropped when she looked at the bed…empty. She ran to the bathroom, Sara wasn’t there either. Bette spotted a piece of bright pink paper lying on the dresser and ran to retrieve it.

    Bette,

    I had to catch my plane…

     

    Sara.

     

    Bette: *****.

    Bette fell back onto the bed.

    Bette: *****! *****! *****!

    She ran for her cell phone, but it was dead. After finding the house phone she frantically dialed Sara’s number.

    Bette: I’m so sorry.

    Sara: Bette don’t. I’m about to get on the plane and I’m not in the mood.

    Bette: There was an accident and…

    Sara: Bette, save the excuses for someone who will believe them.

    Bette knew she had been wrong. Sara was the best thing to happen to her in a long time and there was no way she was willing to lose her.

    Bette: I’m sorry baby.

    Sara: I know that we have an agreement…an open relationship, which I think is just fine. I’m always away and you’re there alone. But I flew in for one night Bette. One ***** night for your goddamn birthday!

    Bette: I know, I fucked up.

    Sara: Oh you more than fucked up.

    Bette heaved a saddened sigh.

    Sara: Just tell me, with you with someone else last night?

    Bette: No. Absolutely not. I walked home from the bar.

    Sara: Bette, that’s like 20 blocks.

    Bette: I needed to clear my head.

    Sara: That’s a lot of clearing…

    Bette didn’t want to get into all of the gory details, but she owed it to her.

    Bette: There is a new play up for production, about me.

    Sara: What? A play ABOUT you? Who would write a play about you?

    Bette: Tina.

    Sara was silent.

    Bette: It’s about our relationship. She needs my permission to have it produced.

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    2. Bette: Every time my heart beats. Jesus Crist..that is love or what?..oh my..i´m sad..really..Bette dosent deserve such pain..i told you Tina on your knees..but i have to agree with Tina in one point Candance is a awful name ewww..amazing chappy Flair but please my heart just suffered enought can you please FIX this..i beg to you..thanks :o(

    4. Very excellent chapter, but everything you write is nothing less. You broke my heart once with this story, please dont do it again. I see hope and progress towards a reconcilation, but I also know how you like to throw twists in there. So I’ll try and contain my emotions with tis. Just remember with this reconcilaion, IF they have one, remember you gotta crawl brfore you walk. I did have one problem though, now Sara seems like a cool chick, but she lost ALL cool points with me when she called Tina a twit. She dont Tina like that. I will choke the shit outta her, ROFLMAO!!!! Again great job, please post soon???

    6. everytime my heart beats.. omg thats just too freaking cuteee!! Bette still loves Tina and she needs to realize that. The heart always overpowers the mind, and in this case it has every right to.

      “Bette spent the rest of the afternoon drowning her sorrows in pint of chocolate chip ice cream Fritos and Lifetime television.”

      Haha that made me laugh because that’s something I do. I love Golden Girls, and that combined with junk food can really bring up your mood!

      Great update. I can’t wait for more.

    7. Bette: What’s your aversion to Candace?
      Tina: I don’t know something about it makes my skin crawl.That was perfect! Flair, you are amazing. How can you have me so addicted to a story? Of course, once again you leave me crying. Please post soon

    8. Okay you broke my heart with the “everytime my heart beats” comment! But the Candace reference was funny! I agree it is a terrible name! But it is better than Helena!

    9. everytime my heart beats…….WOW. You have such a way with words. We are all blessed that you continue to share your story with us on a daily basis. It is truly amazing. By the way I have never met a man, women, gay, or straight that does not LOVE the Golden Girls. Why is that? I now have the “Maimi” song running through my head!LOL

    11. i now come to your story with trepedation. i get a knot in my stomach. this cant be good for me. but shit, every time my heart beats. give me hope and crush me and i dont know if ill ever recover. ice cream and chips, thats the way to do it. and apologies, very good. soon please. has the crazies slowed down yet. any more music.

    12. At last their talking for each other WOO~Hoo! Hey Flair that’s was so Wonderful Great they really need great conversation even on the phone I Love it Thanks Please post SOON.

    17. I don’t know if it’s the right time for me to post a comment about your fic… I’m still too angry at how things turned out for them (you know, angry enough to keep coming back desperate for an update ~.^)

      Anyway, with this last chapter, at least I think we can all breathe a little, huh? =P

      Oops, my time is almost up here, so let me just say this one thing: you have this amazing – sometimes rather disturbing – talent to.. uh.. hit your reader in the gut, you know, get a strong reaction, which I think is great so congratulations for that.

      And oh, what a cruel joke this “Candance” thing…

    19. i love this fic! the push, the pull.. its gutwrenching but so worth it when you come up with lines like, “everytime my heart beats” wow! can’t wait to find out how this will unfold..but no doubt, i’m sure there’s lots of drama to come for these two..especially when, as you say flair, “no good deed goes unpunished!”

    21. I recently started reading Fan Fiction and have become addicted. It is really helping to fill in the long wait for next season.

      I am especially taken with your story Flair. I have to say that I was heartbroken at the end of part one of the story, and pray (along with many other fans) that you will bring our girls back together in the end. It seems that it is going to be a long road. I am certainly enjoying the journey. Please post again SOON!

    22. DAmn! I felt a pang in my chest when I read “Apologies”..You had me laughing so hard with the ice cream & lifetime then the Golden Girls and now I’m holding back tears! You are Fantastic Fanfic Girl!!

    27. “Every time my heart beats.”

      I know everyone else quoted it too, but damn girl, you’re good! I hope Bette doesn’t make Tina wait too long. *Crosses fingers*

    28. As per your Author’s Note…let’s get one thing straight…there is no “maybe” to it…Please?

      “Every time my heart beats”…Where, how do you come up with these knock-your-socks-off type moments?…Your talent is excruciatingly pleasurable…Thank you for sharing your gifts.

    29. WOW FAIR! I love the golden girls stuff, hilarious! I’m so happy that Bette and Alex are good friends, he’s such a fun character. And my heart just broke again when Bette said “every time my heart beats. . .”(sigh) Please post again soon. . .

    35. Another great chapter.I am all hooked up with your pic. Here I am 12- 16 hours ahead of you and first thing every morning is to check for the new chapter. God, just can’t wait for another one!!!

    36. the thing about all the bnt beginings, we know that they will end up together, but oh what a journey you are taking us on. love your story. and about alex, if in the world there were more people like alex it would make it a better place.he has a great heart and i love that he hasnt taken sides. he is a true friend.

    38. Well well, we know that FFD will get tina and bette together (wink) so… the anguish, the pain, the sorrow will eventually wilt away in a few chapters. Am in! thanks for the update, luvin it…

    40. “Every time my heart beats”… GOD !!!
      Is it really fair to make us melt this way, fulling our Sunday with such an insane sweetness in our hearts ? How do you want to begin an other week after that… Your story is such a trap for fragile romantic readers like me ! A tender trap, of course, but a trap all the same. O la la…

      How I loved this “battle between Bette’s heart and her brain” ! We all know these sorts of battles and, well, they’re certainly the ones that need a fast surrender ! Heart being the so expected winner, of course…

      Now, I got a pretty clear feeling about your state of mind right now, teasing author of my heart : you KNOW so well how both thrilled and heartbroken we all are travelling through your dizzily rollercoaster… and you enjoy that a LOT, don’t you ? Yeessss, I can see your amused smile ! Ah, machiavellian girl… we love you and we hate you now !! (lol)

      However… I must confess my endless pleasure following your story’s heartbreaking lows and highs – even if it’s a pretty unbearable low currently ! – simply because it’s a SO wonderful drama story !!
      Well, because of you, naughty girl, I’m no more a wise and patient reader but an awful junkie, burning in advance for any revelation you’ll be kind enough to let escape, now we begin to see the perspective behind Tina’s action…

      God, no doubt you’re an actress ! Now, are you satisfied with your begging and addicted audience, dangerous charmer ???

      Few last words before I drop the curtain down : Alex, you are more than ever wonderful ! What our two lost lovebirds would ever do without you ??
      And you and I have something in common here : I always adored the Golden Girls ! Good bye, dear Alex ! (*wink*)

    41. Can’t wait until they meet face to face……oh the chemistry, the sexual tension, love, and the ultimate undying attraction to each other. They can’t ignore that can they?

    44. I have a feeling “everytime my heart beats” will take on the same popularity as the “OMFG” line from the show!!!

      Wonderful as ever flair….and as much as we try and rush you towards their reconciliation, don’t!

      The agony along the way will make it all the more worthwhile!

    46. Flair, you know you are killing me softly, what a line:-

      Every time my heart beats, pure and simple and straight to the point.
      Each chapter keeps getting better and better.
      Looking forward to next post.
      Thank you.

    50. Candace Joke: Hysterical
      Bette’s confession: adorable
      Bette and Tina apart: agony (in a good way. . .a very good way)
      Title: LOVE it (read the book wicked and meeting Kristen Chenowith was the highlight of my life)
      Having you make a sequal to your first fanfic: Priceless.

      And an idle question – Could Tina be dating Alice?

    51. My favorite GG moment: The girls are planning a party – I don’t remember the event – they’ve hired a planner who’s just effusive and over the top. Blanche says something like, “You’re just about to take off and fly, aren’t you?”

      You said, “As we say in the industry…Break A Leg! :)”
      FFTD – In fanficland, maybe the relevant expression would be, “Break an index finger!”

      P.S.: The makeup sex (if it occurs) should be tremendous!

    53. You’re such a tease. You give us hope and then you seem to take it away. But maybe this time things will be different….that B&T will meet and live happily ever after. I can only dream and continue reading your excellent story.

    54. Congrates on your award it is so well deserved. Wow my heart is breaking for Bette as she really hasn’t worked out Tina yet and it looks like Tina hasn’t either. Why oh why Tina I still don’t get her cutting Bette off. But I hope Tina is more mature now.thanks

    55. OMG!!! That was absolutely the most romantic/heart-breaking thing ever!!! I’m just saying!!! I love you for writing this story–it’s fantastic! And I loved the reference to Candace, hysterical! Please post again really soon–thanks.

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