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Bette, T, and baby make three Ch.16
Previously……………………
Tina looks at Bette suggesting she should say something. Bette takes the hints, “Well, I don’t want to appear hasty, but I think Tina and I would like for you to be our donor. Assuming, you feel comfortable with us.”
Dylan: “I was just thinking the same thing. I can’t imagine finding a better couple than the two of you and I think you will be wonderful mothers.”
They stand to leave while gathering their belongings.
Dylan: “Bette….Tina, just let me know when you are ready for me to donate. Also, if there were any concerns, I am tested reguraly for STD’s and I have my paperwork.”
Bette: “Well, how would Monday be?”
Dylan: “That works for me. You have my number right, Bette?”
Bette: “Yes, it’s at my office. If you want Tina can take you to the cryobank.”
Dylan: “Ok, Tina, just give me a call Monday morning and I’ll give you directions to pick me up.”
Chapter 16……………………….
Dylan is walking down the sidewalk fumbling with his keys. Having just ate dinner with Bette and Tina, he’s extremely happy that the three of them seemed to connect so well. He spots his green Land Rover and hits the unlock button on his keyless remote. Just as he reaches his vehicle a long black limosine drives up beside him. The back window rolls down and a demanding yet feminine voice speaks, “Get in.” Dylan can’t see the face but he knows the cold distinctive voice all too well.
Dylan opens the driver door of his own vehicle then replies, “No, thank you.” As he attempts to climb inside, the voice from within the limo persists, “I’ve reconsidered my offer. Perhaps my previous sum was a bit too low. I thought if I raised the amount you might be more willing to comply.”
Dylan stops what he is doing, hangs his head, and sighs. He looks at his keys, then reluctantly gets into the limo. There she sits; the venemous snake. Her intense physical beauty is a deception, blinding you from her cruel intentions. To Dylan, she is the likeness of the persuasive, forked-tongue serpent. For this reason, he likes to think of her as the temptress. To her side, sits a smug man whose face Dylan has seen, but he cannot seem to place where.
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(38 votes, average: 3.26 out of 5)
I hope Dylan does the right thing. Thanks, cole!
So it’s hella of course but the man I have 2 guesses
Franklin or Melvin not sure why I picked them. But I will let you do your job
I’m still catch up of your Story I Love it Please continue Post soon.
Dylan should tell both Bette & Tina what Helena’s planning. Then they should turn the table on Helena…Dylan can still take the money, but then Helena will go after him…hmmm such drama. Love it, please continue.
i knew it..too good to be true…to easy..i hope Bette feel that something is wrong and dont fall in Helena´s spiderweb..great chapter post soon
Die Helena, die!!
I agree Christy/Maybe Dylan cab be trusted.Please continue.
I knew something was up with Mr Weak Behind Dylan. All he really has to do is tell Bette and Tina and still take Helena’s deal. Helena does not have to know. They can simply switch the sperm without her knowing, especially if the do a home insimination. Dealth would be toooo good for Helena, she needs to suffer in plain view. Come on colenickel, slowly but surly LAY IT ON HER.
Noooo!!!! I can’t take this. I knew it was too good to be true, but, unless Dylan is up front with B/T, I don’t think I can tag along.
Great chapter,post another. I think Dylan will take the deal and add some big time drama to the story,lol.
K
Well crap. Great chapter. I hope he doesn’t back out.
Helena is such a bitch..nice chapter
Helena is such a bitch..nice chapter
This is bad and hope dylan help B&T and kick helenas ass!