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    A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 36

    Story written on August 1, 2005 by Lauren25.
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    The proposal again :) The dinner, oh my, who’s at the door???

    Chapter 36

     

    They walk over to the car and get in. They drove back towards the hotel.

    “Are we going back to the hotel already?” Tina asks curiously.

    “No, not yet.” Bette replies. Bette turns off the road and finds a parking space. She get out and runs around to Tina’s side and opens the door. She takes her hand and they walk into the park that they were at last night. Luckily for them, no one was seated at the bench.

    Bette takes a seat and pulls Tina down with her.

    She takes out the velvet box and opens it. Tina gets tears in her eyes just by looking at them. The meaning of them.

    “I wanted to make a little ceremony of some sorts, just the two of us.” Bette starts.

    They both take a ring and hold it tightly.

    “These rings are a symbol of us. The different gold fits perfectly together, just as we do. As I’ve said before, everyday with you is like living in a flowergarden, beautiful and colorful, never boring. “I love you Christina Kennard, will you do me the honor and marry me?” Bette says as tears are starting to form.

    “Yes. I love you too Elizabeth Porter. More than I ever thought possible.” Tina replies. They place the rings on each others fingers.

    And tops it off with a passionate and loving kiss.

    After that they just sit on the bench. Enjoying each others company. Tina resting her head on Bette’s shoulder.

    After 30 minutes, Tina breaks the comforting silence.

    “Babe, I’m hungry.” She says.

    “Yeah, I’m getting hungry too.” Bette replies

    “They stand up. Bette notices a small caf on the other side of the park.

    “Let’s go over there.” Bette suggests.

    “Yeah.” Tina replies.

    Bette again takes Tina’s hand and they walk through the park and into the caf. They get a seat by the window. They both ordered a Caesar salad and a cup of coffee.

    “Bette can I ask you a question?” Tina asks.

    “You can ask me anything you want.” Bette replies.

    “The rings 4300 dollars, that is a lot of money, at least to me. That’s more than I earn in a month” Tina started.

    “We never talked about this did we?” Bette says.

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    2. Lauren,
      Have recently caught up with this story and must say that it is fabulous. So inventive and different.
      This chapter was brilliantly bitter-sweet.
      Blending Tina and Bette’s engagement with the sudden reunion with Tina’s Mom.
      Please post soon as I want to know what will happen next. Are the hands of friendship and love about to hug Tina and bring her back into the family fold or will it be a quick slap across the face?
      Only you know so please put me out my misery soon.
      A Loyal Fan.

    6. That was truly a great chapter.
      Yes, everything possible was on the emotional palette here : the so romantic intimate ceremony at the park, the lovely and precious details of their casual life, Tina’s want to openly act with Bette in front of her family, even a bit of fun through Chris’ cute deception about Dana, lightness and warmth at Kennard’s house, and finally – last but not least – the very intense appearance of Tina’s mother. Amazing mix indeed !
      It began with a sweet smile and ended with a powerful cliffhanger : wonderful job, Lauren, thanks again !!

      … by the way, since neither Chris nor Lauren nor Sarah noticed Tina’s new ring, will Unexpected Mom be the first to see it – and to feel faint ? I wonder ! (lol)

    8. Hey Lauren I’m still catching up WHOA! I Love it I think Tina Mom she have a lot of explaining to do to Tina Come on MOM life it too short to be Bitterness Please post soon Thanks.

    9. Lauren, can’t wait for the next chapter. Kathleen has taken a big step considering her husband is so angry and closed up. It’s great that Bette was willing to tell her to leave for Tina’s sake. Tina is standing tall with Bette by her side…they are definitely functioning as a married couple already. Thanks for the chapter, please continue.

    11. Wow, that would be something to digest….70 million dollars. At least Bette seems to be very down to earth with it. And she knows that Tina loves her regarldless, it has nothing to do with money.

      I hope that Tina will not give into Chris and her mom very easily. She should forgive them, of course, but not after making them realize what they put her through. Thanks for another great addition!

    12. Very nice chapter, Tina will do get thru this with Bette by her side. I think that the money thing will grow on Tina, she will get use to it in time. Please post again soon. Oh yeah, I like the leg massage:).

    17. ok 70 million?..i decided stop been a lawyer and start play golf right now..lol..amazing chapter is good to know Bette wants to have a family with Tina they meant to be togehter they have great chemistry i hope Bettes mom be ok about the wedding and about TInas mom its hard to her but she need to be in her daughter lives..amazing chapter love it..im totally in love with your story thanks :o)

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