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    No Good Deed Goes Unpunished (sequel to Can’t Help Falling In Love) Chapter 7

    Story written on August 1, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    “Kiss me to fiercely, hold me to tight…I need help believing you’re with me tonight.”

    Bette left the party that night feeling an array of emotions. There she was sitting in her bed with Sara right next to her and yet something was missing. Was it love? Bette wasn’t sure. Part of her believed it was the warmth that Tina would bring to her heart just by being near her. It was a sensation like no other. A feeling of security and comfort that Bette felt whenever Tina was lying next to her. Bette shook her head hoping to make the image of Tina disappear. She was here with Sara, Tina was not, could not and would never be an option. Bette couldn’t allow that to ever happen.

    Sara: Hi.

    Sara rolled over to face Bette. She brushed a lock of hair from Bette’s face.

    Bette: Hi.

    Sara: You know I’m lying half naked next to you in bed.

    Bette peered under the cover to find Sara’s body covered only in a pair of Bette’s jogging shorts.

    Bette: Oh my.

    Sara: Uh huh.

    Bette lifted her head from under the sheets and let a grin spread across her face.

    Sara smirked.

    Sara: How about you place those pretty little lips some where useful.

    Bette leaned over and placed a passionate kiss on Sara’s lips.

    Sara: I need to get something off my chest.

    Bette looked up letting her eyes lock on Sara’s.

    Sara: I’m not Tina, Bette. I never will be and I won’t try to be. If you’re hoping that one day I will miraculously turn into her, you are wrong.

    Bette opened her mouth to speak.

    Sara: Don’t. Because whatever you say will be a lie. And I don’t want you to lie to me.

    I am not going to try and win your love. It doesn’t work that way. But I do ask that while I am in this bed with you, you acknowledge me. I think that’s fair.

    Bette couldn’t believe the words that had just come pouring out of Sara’s mouth. She never once raised her voice. She truly wasn’t angry. She just wanted Bette to see her, not Tina, but Sara. That was more than a fair request. And more than anything Bette wanted to love her, she owed Sara that much. She owed her a fair shot to find a way into Bette’s heart.

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    3. Let me just say OMG!!! I felt like crying in this chapter. I love this story, it can be romantic, thrilling, sad which this chapter once let me just say.

      Thanks Alot

    5. I did NOT, want to see Bette having sex with Sara, I hated every part of it, UNTIL THE END!!!! I hope you know I’m kidding as much as want to hate this, its just not happening. It must be Christmas early, 3 in one day. Phew, now you are an artist that loves your craft.

    6. no no no..i love nc-17 but only Bette and Tinas..i got almost blind..lol..oh my please who i have to kill to see B&T together? Bette dosent love Sara and Tina said more than once she only adore Laura..please give me hope..lol..i´m sad and i will sleep sad too thanks :o(

    8. God..we love you. 3 in a day. Your adoring fans appreciate it very much. Of course I have to work tomorrow and will have to catch up at night..: ( thank you again for such a wonderful and beautiful story. Can you do 4 in a day?

    9. OMG Flair I thought Bette would yell out Tina’s name in bed, but that would be so not right. very nice chapter. PLEASE get these two together, soon!

    10. I kinda skimmed over the sex scene and acted all la-di-da as if it wasn’t there lol But I love this story and that’s the price one has to pay lol Boy did we all get lucky with 3 posts in 1 day. You’re amazing!! Please post like 5 tomorrow all filled with happiness between B&T… or not but either way I’ll be reading. :)

    12. bravo! love the direction this story is headed in, but i have a feelin’ there’s much more drama on the way for our dynamic duo…looking forward to see where this ride is headed! oh, by the way, award totally deserved!!

    13. You always break my heart… i have to tell you that i really enjoy Bette having sex with Sara but i beg you to make her back to Tina as soon as you could!
      One more time: you´re amazing and i love that story!!!

    15. i dreaded reading the chapter after i saw the rating.. but i guess it was required to hopefully move towards the reunion. this was beautifully written and i should tell you i’ve been thinking about appropriate background scores for each of these scenes!! love u for sharing this story with us!

    16. I was so desperate for your post in the last 48 hours. Just love the story and it’s so heartbreaking that Bette said no to Tina. Please get them back together!

    19. OMG! Flair you are killing Me here LOL! WHOA! Poor Tina she is Dreaming too Bette really sad WHOA! my heart it’s beat so fast to read this Story LOL! I Love it Thanks for posted again and ONE MORE TIME TO SAY CONGRATULATIONS you really Deserved the Award you are Amazing Writer keep going we here to READ MORE.

    21. “There was only so long she could play this game of charades. She wasn’t Tina and she never would be.” – yeah, I’m starting to feel sorry for the poor woman, though we all know she is not in a place she belongs. That place has little “T’s” marked all over it! =P
      Then again, I feel bad for Bette too… I mean, her situation sort of hits home for me, ya know? But I’m still sort of stuck. (love of my life still in Florida while I’m still here in… Brazil! HA! Beat THAT!)

      Although I identify with Bette in this story, I still understand Tina’s position. She’s the one who screwed up so she’s the one who has to live with that weight on her shoulders… humpf… the choices you make…

      Anyway, that is all to say that your story is great. Believable and the characters are well motivated and you are making us all suffer with them.

      So keep on the good work! =D

    22. come on… I stop to read you for 3 days because I hope you had stop breaking my heart by than… so I read all together today and everything just got worst… please put than together soon you have others characters to play… it is just too much for me… they so mean to be together… I used to love your first story but since the last chapter of can’t help falling in love you become really mean… what is happening????? well this time I think I will stop more days… maybe a week to see if you fix their until next monday when I will read all the chapters together once more… I can’t stand scenes of bette or tina making love with other people this just make me sick… just the fact of any of than kiss other persons make me wanna puke I know you need some drama put this is just too much for me, your first story was so good why did you completely change your line of writing in the end of can’t help falling in love until now???? why just why????

    23. Yay, thanks for three awesome chapters in one day! When I saw the NC-17 rating, I was like “OH NO!” I’m glad with the direction you took with it though, but I feel bad for Sara. Again, thanks for the three posts! Any chance we’ll get three more tomorrow or now? Okay sorry, I’ll stop being annoying now, but please don’t make me wait too long…my poor laptop can’t take the hot summer heat staying on 24/7 waiting for your stories. :D

    25. k. im not mad just sad. yes i understand that bette has issues. i understand tina has issues. but dayum this is heart wrenching. you cant live your life hoping against hope that this attraction, this love you know, will disappear if you force yourself to be with that someone else. its so not fair to all parties. i, going to bed sad. its not like its never happened before, just didnt think it would be cuz of this story. lol ;) yes everything was awesome except it wasnt b/t/.

    26. Flair:

      I have had a lump in my throat since I started reading the story leading to this sequel.

      Needless to say I am enjoying this story as much! Please post again soon.

      I am so sorry I will not be able to make the August meet-up at Rubyfruit, as I will be away. Hopefully, I will be able to catch up with you and the others at the next one.

      Keep writing. This story is GREAT.

    27. Thank you for writing so many chapters in one day.I look forward to your story with each and every update.I know that the drama may be upsetting to some but it will make their reunion that much sweeter.

    28. I had a feeling Bette will scream Tina’s name as she climax, but when Sara told her that she’s not Tina i said oh ok, things will go fine, but WOW you just know how to do it, poor Bette.. ENyahahahaaaaa Keep the Drama coming..

    31. Flair, your ability to take us into the very soul of Tina and Bette is both breathtaking and heartbreaking!

      My stomach lurches everytime your roller coaster story dips and swings, but WOW WHAT A RIDE!!!!!

    32. I did not intend to be mean when I said, “Damn You!!!” You just evoke such extreme emotions with your cliffhangers!

      I thought Bette could do this. I was wrong. Poor Sara.

      This story is like catnip. I can’t quit!!!!!

    33. I haven’t left a comment yet, but i absolutley love this story. I made my sister read the whole thing yesterday and she agrees with me that this story is addicting. I look for a post everyday and can’t wait fot the moment when Bette and Tina get back together, or at least I’m hoping. Please post soon and I definately wouldn’t mind another triple post day!!!

    36. *Sigh* So much for going to bed on a good note. It’s alright though flair, I could never be mad at you. ;) I like Sara. She knows that Bette’s still in love with Tina and that she can never be Tina for Bette. I have a lot of respect for her. She’s very understanding. Maybe she should hook up with Alice lol Tina’s sooo upsetting. I would do the same exact thing. Both Bette and Tina are miserable right now. I can’t help but hope for a happy ending for both of them. You rock, flair!! Thank you thank you thank you for three chapters in one day! I can’t wait for tomorrow’s chapter. I’m insatiable for your work!

    38. What a wonderful start to my work day. YOu had posted three new chapters. I couldn’t believe my luck! Thank you! Kiitos! Tack so mycket! Danke! Merci! Gracias!

    39. Flair, your story had me captivated from the first chapter on! You should see the excitement in my face, when am logging in and discover “fresh” chapters of you in my list of favorite authors!…these last three chapters were heartmelting and I could litterally feel every emotion that ran through the protagonists…your writing skills are amazing, please keep it up and take your time to bring them together coz that means that we can enjoy your stories even longer….thanks for the update! five stars as always!

    41. thank you for post! your writing skills are amazing. what a drama. I think this Sara is really great, maybe she could be with Alice someday(?)b/c B&T are meant for each other. I hope you post today a next chapter, can’t wait.

    42. Dear talented writer, what a journey through Dramaland… It’s a sort of summit here, between guilt and regrets.
      Here it’s rainy day outside – and, god, you made it pretty rainy inside too now !

      Sara is quite admirable and heartbreakingly lucid – and following what I wrote yesterday, you’re making more and more difficult to hurt her – you, pitiless creature !
      This theme just recalls me David Lean’s Brief Encounter’s one : one never choices who to fall in love with. When it happens, all you can pray for is to don’t have anybody wonderful near you to hurt… That’s one of life’s most unfair thing, but the way to avoid such dilemmas ?
      Like Bette, who so sincerely – desperately too – tries her best to control her heart, one can deeply want to love someone. Above all the “savior”, as you rightly wrote here.
      But it’s a lost battle : there’s no justice in heart’s stuff… And no real control. Only for the audience, only for a make believe – even unconscious – , but not inside of ourselves. Never.

      You so marvelously depicted all the confusion, vain attempts and finally guilty feelings, when only a word – “babe”, here – is enough to broke the fragile spell. One word, one particular thought or memory at the worst moment, and the house of cards fatally collapses : Bette was doing her very best to make love to her “savior” but climaxed with her lost beloved. That was inevitable – and, yes, even with all my faithful affection for Tina, I’m feeling truly sorry for Sara. That’s life, of course – but, god, life can be so cruel…

      And your last affirmation about Tina is so right too : “having messed that up beyond repair, Tina deemed herself unworthy of any love.” That’s a pretty good example of emotional self-destruction.

      Really, you don’t only have “flair for the dramatic” but you’re also so gifted for human feelings’ analysis.
      It’s an endless privilege to be your reader, as well as a daily joy.
      Thank you and… chapeau !

      P.S.: … you still forgot to update your “author’s bio”, my Flair lady ! Please erase this “Awards : NADA” and put a proud “Awards : an official fanfiction one – and a beautiful unofficial one : my passionate readers’ trust and fidelity !”

    43. Wow when you win you win. THis was an amazing output today and I thank you. Congrate on your win and congrate on the spellbound way you keep all of us involved in you tale.

    44. What is happening to me? I cant seem to get anything done around my house because of that FLAIR woman…LOL!

      I loved all 3 chapters and impatiently await more….post again soon. In the meantime, maybe I just might leave my house today.

      (thinking) wonder if I can check this site from my phone. ;) LOL

    46. I feel for Bette, she’s trying so hard. And as I mentioned b4 u know how 2 pull at someone’s heart strings, ’cause mine at this moment are broken!! u r an excellent writer, u have captured their emotions so well, it’s amazing. Hopefully u’ll post at least a dozen or so chapters 2day 4 us!!! LOL.

    48. Under the threat of getting killed by your plethora of adoring fans please continue with the emotional drama……the build up is almost as good as the ultimate climax.

      Thank you for sharing your gift with us. A fan forever!!

    49. OK that was so sad but i just know youve got plans for our girls!.lol i dont always comment but never miss a chapter its such a great story and you tell it so well looking forward to lots more. thanks

    51. Ohh Flair!! The web you weave!! Im in turmoil..l wanted to cry..But then, right at the end, a glimmer of hope!! A silver lining if you will?! And now l know..l dont ‘think’ l love you..l ‘know’ l do!! x

    52. Wow! I’m so overwhelmed with sadness! I think I’m gonna have to make a trip to the market and get some Ben & Jerry’s…or some Krispy Kremes! LOL! Please remedy this thing quick before I do something really dreadful…like watch a Meg Ryan movie or something! Still loving it, though! You are a fanfic goddess!

    57. Came home from a grueling game of Tennis, and low and behold you stowed upon us another chapter as you promised … YEA!! Excellent writing.. The love scene was done very well tho I know must people (myself included) found hard to read…. Keep up the great work and hope to read more sooner than later!!

    58. Thank you for keeping your promises and more. How so honorific of you! (I love to use words I’m not sure are words.)…Now, why would we be mad? We just didn’t like it, but we kinda saw it coming. I want you to draw this out…No, let me re-phrase…I want you to do what you need to do with this story…As long as you’re behind the wheel, I know I’m in for the ride of my life. The top’s down and when I look into my beautiful country sky, the stars spell BNT forever. This is stupid…but I’m a hopeless romantic. Wine is good…Nel vino la verita. Beautiful writing…You never disappoint. Or fail to deliver.

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