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Alice and Dana – How to get back the love of their lives? chapter 3
Alice’s place. 2AM. The little less dark bedroom.
“Oh gosh! you’re kidding me! Please tell that you’re just kidding me!” Alice’s laughing. “Its impossible!!”
” Well…
“You’re a ***** *****!” Alice cut off
“***** you ***** Pisky.” Remember the old times they both laugh. After 15 minutes they calm down. ” Seriously… Alice started, “you have to go into all the details, when happened , with who, where? All, I want to know ALL about that.
“You’re gonna have fun! said Joan smiling at Alice. Okay here i go. I went to Chicago for some business, it was mmmmh… five years ago. After an exhaustive work day with others borings managers i was very tired. But back to the hotel I saw a nice bar-night club so i decided to came in. At the first look i saw that there’s no man in the club, only woman, a lot of woman.” ” A ***** bar! Alice’s enjoying the story. ” You’re right” continued Joan. “So i take a seat next to bar and ordered a pinacolada, thinking that i’m gonna be quiet: no man no smooth talk . One minute later very pretty nice woman get a seat next to mine” Joan takes a break , she smiling remembering the woman.
“Oh gosh, you really enjoy that! I’m going to kill you if don’t keep going the story and fast” Alice said with a menacing look in her eyes.
” Okay! She introduce herself ….(back to this night)
_”Hi I’m Cristie, can i seat here?(cristie? nice name… nice woman)
_Of course so I’m Joan.(What does she want?)
_Its the first time i see you here. Are you living in Chicago?(Why she ask me that?)
_No. Not really. I’m here for business.( I’m so boring!)
_Oh, a manager woman. (I love this smile)
_Yeah, kind of that.
_At least you’re a beautiful manger woman. ( ??? She’s flirting, Oh my gosh what i have to say?)
_Thanks.(great First i’m boring and now i’m pretentious, and now i feel i’m blushing. I hope that she don’t see that. Oh no she’s smiling, i’m so ridiculous!)
_Can i ask you something? i mean something personal.( She has the more intensive look eye i never seen.)
_Huhu ( Huhu? I’m the most stupid woman i the word)
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I’ve been reading this story and I’m interested about what you gonna do with it. The only thing it’s sometimes I have problems to understand ’cause there are grammatical and orthographic mistakes, but I’m not complaining I have the same problems, english is not my maternal language, but the dictionary is very helpful :P . Thanks.
i like this story and want to see where it leads. i no writing it in english could be difficult so i appreciate that you take the time to do it. cant wait to next post.