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Accidental Love Chapter 14
Previously
There was a fast paced song she had never heard before, she raised it because she liked the beat. As she listened to the lyrics her mind started racing with a million questions. She turned it up higher so she could understand what the song was saying
I know there’s something in the wake of your smile I get a notion from the look in your eyes, yeah you’ve built a love but that love falls apart your little piece of heaven turns too dark listen to your heart when he’s calling for you listen to your heart there’s nothing else you can do I don’t know where you’re going and I don’t know why but listen to your heart before you tell him goodbye
Tina quickly shut the radio off. That brief little part of the song hit a nerve in her and she turned around, There was absolutely no way she could go through with this. What was she thinking. She pulled over started to cry and pulled out her cell phone to make a phone call which she knew was going to change her life forever.
Bette was frantically running around the house trying to prepare for the evening that loomed around her. She decided they would do an indoor picnic. She had placed a large blanket on the floor of her living room, and had them facing her patio so that they could see outside. She had placed throw pillows all around so that they could lean up against them. All the candles she lit also dimly lighted the living room. There was soft romantic music playing in the background. She was heading into the kitchen when she heard the phone ring. She thought it could be Tina in case she was lost so she ran over to answer it
Bette: Hello
Kit: Hey baby sis
Bette: Oh hey kit how are you?
Kit: I’m doing fine, I was just calling to see what you were doing, I’m, actually surprised to see your home, I thought You would be at the office considering you have that Art show next weekend
Bette: Oh yeah I know but I met someone and we are having a date this evening
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(41 votes, average: 3.85 out of 5)
OMG, OMG, OMFG!!! That was really hot!! I can’t believe am the first to comment!! I can’t think except to say more really, really soon!!! [how am i suppose to work the rest of the day?]
pretty good job I would say for a first time.
Nice….very nice! Post again soon…I want more of them.
K
Wonderful chapter. Very hot. Glad Tina went to Bette’s. HOT.
WOW! Excellent Beautiful very Sexy Really HOT WHOA! Finally Thank you very Much WHOA! that was so F*** Awesome LOL! Hey I’m feel so Hot in here to read this Story LOL! WHOA! It’s about time your doing a Great Job to write this right now I’m just really happy LOL! I think I need to take a Shower LOL! Please continue post soon and THANKS.
Great job, see it wsn’t that hard!!! Post soon.
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! eric who???????? bette is the man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HOLY CRAP!!! I was soo wrong. For a fist time u were fantastic, realy, really HOTT!!! Post more, post more!!!!! I want more B & T NC17 with some of those witty one liners mixed in.
OMG!! AWESOME!!!!!!Post again please
OMFG….I’m already wet. Going to take a cold shower. SHIT.
as a virgin you were stupendious. lol. thank god for small favors. (phone didnt hang up). i love the joking. im glad tina came (hehe) to her senses, right. no more eric, right. oh this was good. and now im going to go take a cold shower. again, real soon, please.
That was HOT. Great job with this chapter i can’t wait to see how Tina feels when she wakes up the next morning.
A very romantic setting, T forgetting her name…awsome…..
Super chapter – your story has been great and you can bring the heat. Never doubt your ability thanks for going for it. super fine.
WOW WOW tHAT WAS SO HOT pOST SOON, tHANKS
First time, I don’t think so. That was AWSOME, I have a feeling trying to work the rest of the day is going to be useless. Damn girl. So glad Tina went to Bette’s, phone off the hook, love it. More please.
Great chapter!!!HOT Post soon please!
it must be really great for your ego when you make someone cry by making them cum…. lol
HOT HOT HOT!! Good thing Bette didn’t hang up the phone. Great chapter can’t wait for more!
Damn, you’re a natural. If this is your first time, I can’t wait to read the next, and the next after that, ad the next after that… Great job. I need a cigarette and I don’t even smoke.
Now how many orgasms was that?
Was anyone counting?lol
Hold on…let’s go count
Ok I’m back
and 8 is the lucky number.
Superb writting.
that was very good and as for it being ur first no sweat u handled it like a pro LOL. very good chapter post soon!
that was so fucking hot! omg, for a first time….shite!
First time??? You are a pro. That was very, very HOT. Great job, nyc
well holy hell that was so hot
Oh damn that was so fucking hot and amazing, love it. Post soon please, thanks!
wow that brought back some old memories that was pretty darn good
Wow! nyc, you did an amazing job for your first NC-17!! You have nothing to worry about! LOL Thanks!
that was HOT!!!!