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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 16
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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 16
Tina sat on the roof of the Land Rover, Looking out toward the late evening sun, trying to make sense of the conflicting thoughts racing around in her head.
Tina had asked Bette for a few moments, to clear her head before they talked. And although she knew Bette wasn’t happy to leave her alone, she had agreed.
Tina’s first instinct when Bette asked her to come back to LA with her, was to throw herself into her lovers arms, and declare her undying love and devotion.
Tina still wasn’t sure why she didn’t. She had just stood there, shock paralysing her body.
There were so many questions in her head that she needed to understand, before making any decision.
God where do I start? We have only known each other for a few days. She thought.
The same questions kept running around in her head, Like a stone rolling downhill, gathering speed as it heading inexorably towards the cliffs edge, only to be shattered into a million pieces as it hit the ground so far below.
How can I know that what she is feeling right now is real? How can I know that once we are back in civilisation she will feel the same? What if we are not compatible? What if she gets bored with me? What if she realises she has made a mistake in asking me to follow her? Does she want me to move in with her, or just be in the same area? What if I can’t cope being in a major city again? I have only just found my art again, what if I lose my inspiration once I am trapped in the bricks and mortar of modern life? How will I support myself?
Bette watched Tina from the window of the studio, willing her to hear Bette’s heart calling out to her. In truth she had been as shocked as Tina by her words, which was the only reason she had allowed Tina to leave her side.
The more she thought about it though, the more she realised that she had made the right choice. She had always thought that she was afraid of commitment, that she was just one of those people who was destined to go through life not knowing the ultimate joy of sharing it with someone. Of loving unconditionally, and being loved unconditionally in return.
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i’m loving it, please continue, hope t goes with bette, great work, cant wait till next chapter
Now how fucking cute was that
and sorry but I don’t want to take jabs at you, I have to be on my best behavior. LMAO
Just wait one of these days I might have something funny to say, but you know it takes a while to make a spark that will start the fire. see look at that i can even make fun of myself. And my friends tell me I’m not that funny when I’m sober.
LA..here they come. Can’t wait for Tina to meet everyone and see how they are together in the city. Love your story
OMG what a beautiful story, T. I so needed to come home to this tonight. Leaving V in the hospital to face this surgery was so hard. What you wrote in this chapter was so awesome and touched my heart. Thank you for such a loving story. TK
this made my heart swell with happiness. its about the first time today on this damn board. so much drama, its stiffling sometimes. this is so good. i got the shout outs to seasons 1 & 2. those are always fun. but im not sure about the guilt. is it cuz she really cant do what she says she can. that will so bit her in the butt later. no sex for bette, lol. please, pretty please another one soon. love the details, love the story.
This story is great and I love it. She makes me feel safe and I don’t know why. Thank you
Interesting. You really have a way of keeping my attention. Great work. Till the next chapter.
Love untested, will never know what strength it has. Bette is a planner and she will only want the best for Tina. If nothing else, Tina re-enters that art world and can show her beloved cubs to the world.
I’m usually so behind the curve on reading within a day or two of a story being posted that I don’t always comment, but thanks for a well written chapter. Apropos observation on regret, a lesson we should all learn, me thinks…look forward to what you bring us next!
oh . i love love . this is such a wonderful story . i look forward to all your chapters!
What a beautiful chapter, can’t wait to see what’s next. Post soon, thanks!
It’s soo great that chapters are coming to you easily, tbsaver! Let’s hope that the streak continues! I agree with Bette on the “if only’s.” They’re no way to live life. However, I hope that she’s able to deliver on what she’s promising Tina. Something tells me Bette’s not as confident as she’s trying to be.
Fate has away of dealing you love and sometimes misery. Fate plays a major role in all of our life. Now it playing in Bette and Tinas life Hope that Tina do accept what Bette is trying to give. her. THANKS
nice
Bette should have told her thats why she was there in the first place. I think Tina will find out once they are in LA and think Bette just used her to get her art.
“what if I lose my inspiration once I am trapped in the bricks and mortar of modern life?” – What a great line!! I can relate to this on several different levels.
“Maybe there is something to be said for fate after all she thought. Because whatever else happens in my life, fate has bought me to Tina, and I am not giving her up without a fight.” – Since you have said that you have read my stories, you know how much I believe in fate…and because of that belief, how warm and fuzzy these two sentences made me feel. I had to laugh today, when I was telling a friend how much I love this story. Her response was something like…”Huh, yeah. I could tell by your comments.” Lovin this story, and damn proud of it!!
Well….. I hope you are awake this weekend to write more great chapters….I hope your team knows how lucky they are!!!!
Given this opportunity going to LA should be a no brainer for Miss Tina… Looks like heaven and earth will be moved to have this show in LA … you definately haven’t taken this far enough… go girl go…LOL
Waiting impatiently for the chapters 17 – ????? maybe 100 at least… think you can handle this?
THANK YOU!!!
Go on Tina take a leap of faith…you can’t go through life with “what ifs”..now i have a little inclining that Tina might feel a little claustrophobic in the concrete jungle that is L.A…just a thought, great update, TB.
Thank you.