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    No Good Deed Goes Unpunished Chapter 16

    Story written on August 9, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    “I’m not that girl…”

    Bette was lying on her couch trying to get rid of the headache that rehearsal had caused. Melanie was a wonderful actress but the girl didn’t know her left from her right. Tina was forced to work one on with her causing each and every rehearsal to drag out unnecessarily. Bette reached for her cell phone looking for a diversion of any kind. Before she could even begin to dial the phone it started to vibrate.

     

    Bette: Hello?

     

    Tina: Hi.

     

    Bette: What’s going on?

     

    Tina: Nothing really. What are you up to?

     

    Bette: I was trying to pack but you know me.

     

    Tina: Yes I do. Would you like some help?

     

    Bette: Oh , don’t be silly. I’m…

     

    A knock on the door made Bette jump.

     

    Bette: Tina hold on. Someone’s at the door.

     

    Bette walked over to the door and opened it cautiously.

     

    Tina: Hi.

     

    Bette looked at Tina and the cell phone in her hands.

     

    Bette: What are you doing here?

     

    Tina: I thought maybe you could use some help.

     

    Bette: Yeah, of course. Come in.

     

    Tina: I brought reenforcements.

     

    From the side of the doors Alice and Alex appeared. Alex holding 2 bottles of wine and Alice with Chinese take out.

     

    Bette covered the smile on her face.

     

    Bette: You guys are just too much. Come in.

     

    Tina walked right into the bedroom where she spotted three suitcases. Alice and Alex made themselves comfortable in the kitchen.

     

    Tina: Bette?

     

    Bette came walking in from the other room.

     

    Bette: Yeah?

     

    Tina pointed to the luggage.

     

    Tina: When I said we were going to be staying in cabins in some random woods in Jersey did you think I was kidding?

     

    Bette gave Tina a curious look.

     

    Tina reached in the first suitcase and pulled out a bathing  suit.

     

    Bette: Oh, well just in case.

     

    Tina: In case of what? I change my mind and take you all to the Bahamas?

     

    Bette: I don’t know.

     

    Tina continued rummaging through the bags.

     

    Tina: I remember when you tried to pack for Chicago.

     

    Bette: I did a damn fine job, thank you.

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    5. oh my god! now i totally love sara:)ok now i have a complaint to report- i was hooked onto the net without getting work done the entire day yday waiting for ur daily update!! where have u been??! ok ok sorry abt that! glad to know things are ok. and this chapter was great! thanks!!

    7. I’m hurting for Sara. She really does love Bette. Sometimes love does suck…b/c you love someone doesn’t mean that they’ll love you back equally. I feel for her. But still, I wouldn’t want Bette to stay with her out of some sense of obligation of gratitude. If you can, please find some good ending for Sara. She’s been of more help to Bette than Alice and Alex are prepared to admit.

    10. OMG OMG OMG. That was… I think i like Sara :) It was a hard thing for Sara to do, but I think she did the right thing. It is clearly that Bette and Tina belong to each other, we’ve seen it through this series of your. I love it. Great chapter. Please post soon

    11. Ahhh, finally!!! This isn’t going to be as easy as you’re letting on right? The kiss…awsome!! I can’t wait for more!!! thanks and post soon…please, pretty please!!

    12. Mesmerizing! I’m simply spellbound…that, is when I’m not LMAO! This one was a great combination of hilarity and poignance!

      I hope you got the battery charged and the tank filled up, ’cause I need more very soon. Thankya,thankya,thankya.

    13. Well I just sat down and read the whole 70-something chapters of this saga at once… been up since 8 in the morning… I know crazy! But let me tell you I want to read more!! I’ve read for 6 hours straight and you have managed to make it amazing… this story is extremely good… I love the suspense! Now I have to go eat… =)

    14. flair, baby. as i was reading i kept saying over and over, shes gonna break my heart when im done. but you didnt. i think im in love. lol. im so gonna be late for the drs now. i had to read this before i went. thank you thank you thank you. sara is great for alice. nice girl and all. this was fucking great. post again real soon. hope all is well. email me if you need.

    21. Ah, my great Flair, you didn’t have a writer’s block… but only a starting block – and you just prove it magnificently !!
      Well, well, I must confess I was dying of impatience waiting for this new chapter, slowly forgotting how much you deserved a little break ! That’s the sooo typical reader’s selfishness, I know, but… only happy addicted readers feel this way, right ? Right !
      So, yes, I was missing you enormously (Flair – frowning – : “Me or my story ?” / Me (pretty embarrassed) : “…hmm… you, of course !” / Flair (not too mad and winking) : “Liar !”) but it definitly worthed such a painful waiting : this chapter is a new jewel to add to your masterpiece, drama queen mine ! Chapeau bas.

      ******

      This chapter, full of vibrant intensity, was really Sara’s chapter. She simply stole the stage here, for me.
      How brave is Sara, facing this new painful – and final – test with both dignity and honesty. It would be such a hard work to find any defect in this wonderful girl, as Tina herself immediately felt – being honest and lucid too. She is truly heartbreakingly admirable…
      Yes, she’s right, to love someone enough to want this person to be happy is the most beautiful, rare and desinterested love possible. But how many of us would be truly ready to act this way ? Simply admirable.

      God, really you make me feel more than ever guilty being a merciless Betta & Tina’s fan ! It was sooooo easier in the show, when I was able to fully hate with delight both Helena and Candace… but the easy way will certainly never be yours, I guess ! That’s what gives so much power in your drama play in two acts (… more acts later, perhaps ? Who knows !) and that’s why I’m so terribly addicted by it… Quite frightening, I must say ! (I’m so incurable that sometimes, when drama is too heavy to bear, my fragile romantic heart asks me to read again one of your former sweetest chapters… pretty comforting ! My goodness, a bit of moonlight or Seaport and I feel better ! Isn’t it pathetic ?? *wink*)

      However, Sara’s calm, intelligent, lucid and brave reaction to Tina’s come back in Bette’s life and her willing to bring truth in hearts – she isn’t dupe about the so-called friendship, of course – was certainly the worst possible for our dear emotionally confused actress : a yelling, hysterical and rude Sara would have been so easier to act with, giving just the alibi Bette would need to definitly break with her. But facing such deep elegance made things so much more difficult for Bette…

      And, you know, I hate you right now ! Because Bette isn’t the only one the have “a mix of emotions running through her” before to kiss her beloved. I felt the same way, awfully : I waited so long for their first kiss since they lost each other but here I felt so deeply sad and sorry for Sara that I wasn’t able to enjoy the moment… I felt the “electricity” indeed – but a really painful one, as if I was at Sara’s place. And I guess you understand why, don’t you ?

      ******

      Few words more…
      I always admired how beautifully you’re able to mix the genres in one scene, adding a touch of comedy even if the worst tragic moment – thanks to your priceless comic duo, the A&A ! It’s never an easy thing to do and you’re quite a master for that : congratulations, my Flair lady. You’re really great.
      Thanks to these touches of pure comedy in the middle of an intense drama – and this chapter is quite a perfect example – drama never becomes melodrama – but comedy stays behind the story’s main stage, like a light and relieving little chorus…
      (By the way, here’s few words to Alice : sorry, girl, but… don’t dream ! You and Sara ? I simply cannot imagine that, even a second ! Sorry again !)

      To read you always put the famous theater’s symbol in front of me : the two smiling and crying masks of comedy and tragedy…
      You truly have Theater’s spirit and, from the bottom of my heart, I wish you a very successful career. You deserve it.

      *** THANK YOU, LIKE ALWAYS !! ***

      P.S.: “You can never change what your heart feels” Sara is so right and I know that too well… Now the big question is to know if this Big Truth is a fatal curse or something beautiful that worth to be beared ? In Sara’s case like in any other one-way love stories, I really think it’s a curse and a burden with only poor sparks of beauty from time to time…

      “Ever since this world began
      There is nothing sadder than
      A one-man woman
      Looking for the man that got away . . . “

    22. I’m just catching up, because I was at camp. I love the title, I love the captions, I love this story. Wicked is my life, so this title made me go a little crazy. Idina Menzel=my goddess. Anyway enough rambling, great story. Keep up the amazing work.

    23. OMG OMG OMG OMG.. that was AWESOME.. ok i never had a fave chapter, cuz i love every single chapter of this story, but i think NOW I DO..
      I’m so glad Bette did kiss Tina, they needed that.. and i’m really feeling for Sarah, but i guess she did the right thing, she was honest with her self, Bette & Tina.. god she really loved Bette..

      A fragile heart was broken before
      I don’t think it could endure another pain
      But there’s a voice from deep inside of you
      That’s calling out to make you realize

      That this new bond gives inspiration
      To all who feel no love appeal no more
      So how can I break this wall around you
      That’s aiding both our hearts to grow in pain

      So forget your past, and we can dream tomorrow
      Save our hearts for card and lovin too
      It’s hard I know, but oh
      One thing for sure
      Don’t go and break this fragile heart

    24. I have been away forever it seems…but yeh!!! I got to read a whole bunch of chapters at once….too cool…and so fitting to stop at this one. Very touching..now open up that door again so we can find out what they are up to..or down to…he he he…thanks, more pls..We act like such spoiled children, always wanting more!!!!

    25. Your twists and turns never stop coming and they are oh so good. How very noble of Sara. Now will Bette and Tina admit their feelings for one another? Tina has to take Bette back, if only to be able to unzipper that thong off of her!

    26. OMG! Thank you Sara, I know you take every character that you have created seriously, and with much love in your heart for them. That is why I have the utmost love and respect for Sara, at first I thought she was just this demanding bitch in the way of Bette and Tina’s relationship, but she has proven how truly selfish I am, and how Bette doesn’t deserve her. Please heal Sara as soon as possible, my heart aches with hers. Love the stories keep em coming.

    27. MY GOD!!! Well, Im sure you know that I didnt like Sara, I still dont like that she called my girl a twit, lol, but, now I do respect her. Only a WOMAN can love enought to want someone happy even if its not with them. Only a WOMAN can stand up and say what she did, to put her feelings aside like that. That shocked the shit outta me. I just hope the pain isnt too much for Bette and Tina, shit isnt always that simple, it never is. Excellent chapter. Please post soon, they need a long conversation. Phew!!! Great

    32. okay that was like the happy gentle version of the bette and tina break. sara was so great. she actually gave bette away even though she loved her! i love sara! will she end up with alice? or is alice still with kenzie? i’m still a bit confused on that.

      anyway i think i scared my dog when i burst out laughing at alex going “eww! i’ve been burned!” i’m not kidding my dog yelped and ran away. i feel bad for her now. glad that the writers block went away but hey this chapter was really good so i think the small time it took up was worth it.

      now will bette and tina say that the kiss should be ignored and they go on as friends? plz let them have clear heads and get back together. i’ll start praying at night!! and i’m hoping for much good comedy on the jersey trip. can’t wait to see what alex and alice do. post soon and i think u did a great job with sara’s leaving (or could she come back?) sara came and left as a hero for everyone. it’s impossible not to love her! now i have to go find my dog, but i’ll be back to read the next bit. loving it so much :)

    33. Ahh that was something else! how cool of Sara to be so dignified in letting Bette go, so now hurry up with the next chapter to see how the lovebirds are getting on! before the drama starts again lol

    34. wow that sara is quite a woman! i think her and alice would be good together! so happy that bette and tina are kissing again! looking forward to a lot more!

    36. I’m so happy!!!! Woo-hoo! Sara is one smart girl! Bette was lucky to have known her…I hope she hooks up with someone who’ll appreciate her…Maybe Alice??? Thanks, I love this!!!!!!!

    37. i don’t wanna speak for Flair–how could I??–but you guys better stop dancing. if you cut a rug, she’ll pull it out from under you. i ain’t even kiddin’.

    38. I have to tell you that I have thoroughly enjoyed the fact that the last couple of chapters you have Tina call Bette and she’s just outside the door. Course this time she had the two goof balls with her. Bette in a thong, anytime, or without. But Sara, that was a class act girl. She’s right, if the person you love truly loves someone else there will always be something missing. Now I agree with the others, back to the bedroom cos this has to go at least a little farther till the retreat.As always you are awesome.

    40. ah this is an amazing chapter!! I feel sorry for Sara though, she must really love Bette if she is doing all of this just so Bette can be happy! give us another post soon please!!

    41. sometimes love means to let it go and in this case Sara does the right thing she can fight for someone she never had…now it time for baby steps and try to rebuild the trust cuz the love never left..do i have to say that was absolutely amazing?..your ROCK my world ok thanks FLAIR :o)

    43. Oh my…it seems that you have a very seasoned flair for the dramatic. What a great story…A room temp bottle of Merlot will work many small miracles on blocked minds and DRAMA, have a glass or two and post another chapter soon

    46. Ahhh awesome chapter, flair!!! I knew I loved Sara. She’s an amazing person to be able to let Bette go. I admire her a lot. Alice and Alex are hilarious! Thanks for the update, flair. I’m glad that your writing block’s gone. Let us know if we can help you with anything! ;)

    47. It will take you an hour to read all the comments. You had me at the end of a long dark tunnel,and at the end there was Sara. she must really love Bette To turn her loose on Tina. Alex and Alice are so funny and nosey. Thanks for a wonderful chapter

    49. YAY!!!!! Sara is now officially awesome!! Thank god she had the sense to intervine and show those 2 that they’re meant to be together! I think Tina is going to like that thong even more when she’s taking it off with her teeth and throwing it on the floor in the cabin-or something like that lol Can’t wait for more!! You rock! :)

    50. Now that’s love. When you sincerely loved someone enough, you’d let them go. And one day, though your heart ache, eventually the one that you’ve been waiting for and the one that’s been waiting for you will be on your door step, knocking on your heart’s door.

    51. Hey Flari! OMFG that was an awesome chapter. Sara Rules. I think Alice should go after her. B&T kissing, what a sight to see. cant wait for the next chappy. keep up the drama. love it

    56. IN RE: The red zipper.

      When I mentioned Zip Cord Exercises, I should have known Bette would come up with her own fabulous variation on the theme.

      Outwit, Outplay, Outlast!!!!! Ha!!!!

    61. Damn that was awesome and unbeleiveble and Sara did a excellent job. “If I love you, I have to let you go and free and be happy” that was the old peoples say.It’s time for Bette and Tina be together again and let see what’s next, oh Alice and Alex is so fucking funny and they the best. Post soon, thanks!

    62. Hey Flair, glad to have you back! Hope everything´s fine again?! The story: hmmm, am still waiting for another twist, coz that was too much of a progress and that´s just not YOU to let that happen…not yet! So girl, bring it on! I missed your story and I can´t wait to read the update!Besides, I am still waiting and fearing that the shared kiss between Bette and Alice will come up in a very inappropriate moment…. is this going to happen??!! Please not….or please let it happen??!! hmmm, am not sure! you are the master! Go on and hit us!!!

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