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    No Good Deed Goes Unpunished chapter 17

    Story written on August 10, 2005 by flairforthedramatic.
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    “Those who don’t try, never look foolish”

    The kiss remained innocent only to serve as a reminder of the love they had lost. Bette broke the kiss first, unable to make eye contact with the blonde. She watched Tina’s shadow as she stood up and walked to the door.

    Bette: Where are you going?

    Tina: I’m leaving before this gets too hot and we do something we might regret.

    Bette: Regret?

    Tina: I love you Bette, you know that. But I want to know that our future will be secure. I can’t take the risk of losing you again. So, I want to do this right.

    Bette: T…

    Tina: I don’t want us to rush back into something so intense. I’m happy we were making progress as friends. We need to get to know each other again.

    Bette stood up and walked to Tina. She let her arms embrace the blonde.

    Bette: T…

    Tina: This relationship is just too important to make any mistakes.

    Bette: I agree with you.

    Tina: You do?

    Bette: Of course.

    Tina smiled and heaved a sigh of relief.

    Bette: The last thing I want to do is start off on the wrong foot.

    Tina: Thank God.

    Tina placed a gentle kiss on Bette’s cheek.

    Bette blushed.

    Bette: But T, if we are going to try and work this out then there are a few things we need to address.

    Tina: What’s that?

    Bette: Your girlfriend.

    Tina gave a sly smirk.

    Bette: what?

    Tina: I never had one.

    Bette: WHAT?? You lied to me!

    Tina: People always want what they can’t have, Alice told me that.

    Tina gave Bette a wink.

    Tina: Laura and I broke up months ago.

    Bette: People always want what they can’t have huh? Well, remind me to smack Alice upside the head.

    Bette reached into the suitcase and waved the now familiar thong in the air.

    Tina let out a gasp.

    Bette: Well, if we’re gonna take things slow then I better put these back in the drawer.

    Tina’s face went white.

    Tina: You were bringing them because you were planning on us…

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    1. Based on the all-around pleasantries of this chapter, I don’t know how you’re going to generate any drama out of this!

      I’m sure you’ll come up with something – that’s the method of your evil genius.

      Myhuuuu-ha ha…………….

      Great!!!!

    2. Good. Nice and slow. They have alot of stuff to deal with and jumping into the sack right away will prevent them from dealing with their stuff. I love the friendship line….plus it will help to make the eventual physical reunion more special.

    6. flair, there has been so much drama in this story that i couldnt believe there was none in this chapter!! ah well, the lull before the storm…:) great update!

    7. I’ll let you take this nice and slow, with the usual amount of teasing just to drive us crazy, and I’ll even agree to some drama as long as its positive drama and not more interference or problems. I know you can make this interesting and frustrating for us without causing our girls more grief. Always looking for more.

    8. until you do something to break the piece..lol..bring it on that damn weekend i hope Bette use that thong quickly..ok and what happen if Bette dosent wear nothing?..lol..i cant wait any longer pacience is not one of my best my qualities..great flair..

    9. flair. why must you be lke that. ;) just cuz its nice doesnt mean it has to go to hell in a hand basket. there can be drama or there can be DRAMA (you know the hell you had us in for so long). its not suppose to be easy but it doesnt have to be pure hell does it. really loved this chappy. cant get enough of this story. your a genius. thanks.

    10. yeah everythings falling into place. which means u must have some dramatic diobolical plan to make it fall apart again! i know your tricks. alice definitely strikes me as the type that needs babysitting more so than an actual baby. most hyper fun adult ever! i’m so happy that this was a happy chapter! but now i’m all nervous cause i’m not sure what will go wrong. guess i’ll have to wait to find out. post soon!

    12. I dunno Flair, it seems too easy Pimp. I’m thinking alot can happen on this “trust weekend” with Mel and Daphnie. I’m with you babe, lets get it goin.

    15. You’re gettin’ my doctor’s bill for the stitches I’m gonna have to get!! I’ve been laughing so hard I know my sides have split wide open!! Who would ever have thought an undergarment could be so F-ing funny?! This thong thing has me totally whipped!

      Keep goin, Flair. You’re doin’ marvelously!

    17. man I love the pace of ur story, but now I find it’s just wracking my nerves, get them together already!!!! Hmmm… then again u said there’d be drama b4 that happens, so “sigh”, I’ll wait and enjoy the torturous pace of ur story. Lovin it, post soon!!!!

    21. you finally posted :)! ok, sorry it’s just that I’m always waiting for you story, it’s like I’m addicted to it! anyway, great chapter, it was funny and romantic! can’t wait to see what happens next, although I know you have drama coming! please post soon!

    27. hey there- just wanted to let you know that i just caught up on both this story and the one before. quite a lot of fun and wanted to let you know that i am certainly enjoying it. thanks!

    29. ohh, i have a smile from ear to ear! i was afraid bette was going to freak out! Good thing your thinking like i am and knowing that these two are going to have a hard time keeping their hands off each other!!

    30. Thank you Flair, loved this chapter… all seems to go very well…. but to be honest I’d like some more heartwrenching (is that an English word??) drama!! ;-) Can’t wait to read about the weekend, please post soon!

    31. Flair,
      Why does this feel like the calm before the storm.
      Sara’s simple exit was majestically written but did reduce the gut wrenching possibilities for the doomed and desperate couple.
      Perhaps there will be misunderstandings on the retreat.
      Will Daphne and Melanie be the cause of a divison.
      Keep it coming because I can’t wait for all the intrigue to unfold.
      Your Loyal Fan.

    32. First of all, that last line is THE jinxing line! The “imminent disaster” line! The “impending apocalypse” line! (and now I’m out of expressions for that… where’s my dictionary anyway?)

      However, I think I should just relax now and enjoy the little hope and happiness you’re giving us all here. For however long it lasts, right?

      Well, back to the previous chapter, I think it was kind of easy how it all happened, but not. I mean, for a moment there it made Sara look like that kind of character that only exists to push someone else’s story forward, you know? Not that there’s anything wrong with that, I mean, all in all every character has at least a little bit of that, but it’s just weird when their ONLY reason for existing is that.

      Anyway, in the end I can’t deny that I’m more than happy to see Bette and Tina back together.

      I also have to congratulate you once again for this incredible story. It’s definitely one of the best B/T ever!

      Oh, I don’t know if I mentioned it back then, but I LOVED the way Tina went after Bette when Bette was sick and all that. I love that your Tina is both brave and sweet. Most “strong Tinas” I’ve seen are much like the one on Season 2 of the show, you know, angry and resentful. But yours is different, she’s strong while still very sweet and caring and loveable (is that even a word?)…

      =D

    33. Ah, dangerous charmer, you created a monster of paranoia now : I cannot savour such light and relieving chapter in total quietness, knowing you’re already rubbing your hands with a little sadistic smile, enjoying the next trap ! Pity !! (Ha ! Better to ask a priest of Inquisition for pity, I guess !)
      And now I have to live days and days wondering when our titillating sweethearts will surrender to each other ? If yes or no we’ll see this famous thong appear during the so-called trust weekend ?? If yes or no we’ll have at least a scorching kiss very soon ? God, even Hitchcock never dared to put so much suspense and thrill in a story !! You. are. awful. But…
      … I cannot help but adoring your story !! And feel a big weakness for my merciless torturer too. Poor me… isn’t it truly pathetic ??? Help me, someone !!
      I became so paranoiac that when you wrote “falling back into place”, I hear “falling into pieces” ! My, my…

      Now, I also thought about all the possible consequences of this weekend of retreat… As Tina said during the rehearsal, everybody will have to know the others better. For me, it means that they will talk a lot together about private stuff too, no ? To share tastes, thoughts… and memories. That’s the possible trap, for me : to know each others better will imply that Bette and Tina’s story will be more than ever exposed – and in front of actresses who already understood how much the show reflects reality.
      So consequences of that could be opposites, for me : happily forcing the intimacy between our former-and-future lovers, but also dangerously exposing their story – without any theater’s curtain – with all the possible hurts on their scars…
      Well, perhaps I’m wrong (… and I hope so) ! That was only my thoughts about the possible drama part of this weekend. Now we all know who will be in charge for the comedy part : the fabulous A&A, of course ! And our Miss Flair will be more than ever the powerful deus ex machina…

      God, this time I will beg once more – and yelling, following the New York’s method : PLEAAAASE, dear Flair (…more), sweet Flair (… better !), all-mighty and magnificent Flair (… enough, now !), please give us this weekend soon !!! (I will not kneeling, it’s cold on my floor, sorry !)

      Thanks again and again for your marvellous fresco, Queen of Drama !

      P.S.1 : Question about Alex and Alice’s next mission : how is it possible to keep two magnets “as far from each other as possible” ?? (… Did I hear “mission impossible” ?)

      P.S.2 : “People always want what they can’t have”… My goodness, why is this so true ! Pretty unfair – but true, too often true…

    35. I, of course, LOVE this chapter. Bette and Tina happy together in any fashion is perfect! I LOVE the pre-get-together tension…just be SURE that you DO get them together in the end this time! I KNOW enough to know that you have some serious drama coming….but, all the better for make-up-sex, right?

    37. Flair, I love it, what a smoothe landing, easy on the heart. I have to admit that this time I was bracing myself for a great fall instead, you do this. I love you and it, keep em coming. Thanks!

    38. *grinning mischeviously* did I tell you that you have such a knack of writing the banter and keepin the fleeting intensity somewhat light? I love alex and alice… boy your “No good deed goes unpunished” world would definitely different and less colorful without them! Awsome.. you definitely deserve the title of DRAMA QUEEN as you always find a way to generate drama, in what seems impossible.

    39. Oh my dear Flair, I know the angst and drama is eminent, so I will just say nice job. I am waiting for your next post with baited breath sweetie. I can’t wait to see how your are going get them back together. I am with you through all the trials and tribulations as long as we get that silver lining you alluded to earlier!!

      post soon please.

    44. These are great I love them. I can’t believe Flair has me using the internet for something besides the usual gay male internet activities. I even gave up Queer as Folk gratuitus sex for the L Word. What is wrong with me? Keep writing Alex so well, Flair. I crack my self up! Love ya!

    45. Flair, I kept reading this chapter more than 5 times and press “a f5” to check your new updated chapter for all 2 hours.
      Am I crazy or what??? Please don’t let me wait too long.

    47. Good chapter. So happy now Bette and Tina are going to get back together and can’t wait to see what’s next. Alice and Alex still so fucking funny and love them. Post soon please, thanks!

    48. I really don´t wanna have to read some drama for the next couple of chapters either, Flair! Please, give us all some more beautiful, heart-melting, sigh-causing moments, before you throw us all into the pool of drama!!!! Don´t you think we deserve THAT?? Is that too much to ask for?!! AAAAHHHHH….Anyway, keep it going and thanks for the time you sacrifice to make all of us happy! 5 stars, as always!

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