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Cruise on the Big Sea Chapter 1
It is a warm August morning in West Hollywood and the sun is just barely peeking out for a what looks another beautiful day in California. Tina is now stirring out of a deep slumber after a night of packing everything she could find to wear on the 7 day cruise she is going on with Kristin and Alexis. They have been planning this cruise since thier freshman year at California State and now that they have all graduated the time has finally come.
Tina gets out of bed with a smile on her face just knowing that this is going to be the most relaxing week that she has had in years. Her blonde hair is a bit messy so she puts it in a small ponytail and heads to the bathroom for a quick shower. Kristin and Alexis should be at her apartment in about an hour and a half to pick her up for the airport. She allows the warm water to wake up her tired mind and all she can think of is sitting by the pool doing nothing but drinking Pina Coladas.
Tina is in the bedroom getting some last minute things packed when she hears a knock at the door. When she opens it Kristen begins to scream…
Kristin: “Tina, lets go find us some hot chicks in the Carribean. What do think?”
Tina: ” ***** to the yea! Let’s do it!”
Alexis is still a little hung over from the partying she did last night and is now regreting the fact that she went home with that cute red head and didn’t get home until 4:00 in the morning.
Tina: ” Lexie what’s wrong with you?”
Kristin:”She went home with Sarah last night. What do you think is wrong with her?”
Lexie: ” Bite me Kris.”
Kristin: ” Let’s get this show on the road.”
They each grab a bag and head for the car.
Tina: ” So, what is the first thing we should do when we get on the ship?”
Kristin:”Find a drink and check out the ladies.”
Lexie: “I’m taking nap!”
Kristin:” The ***** you are! I’m not letting you get close to the room. It’s your own fault for staying out so late last night. Your not going to be a stick in the mud on our first day! Suck it up!”
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(48 votes, average: 3.60 out of 5)
Great, great, great start!! More really, really soon
very nice B&T Beginning…..on the high seas no less! I can only imagine what fun you have in store for these ladies…OOOOO…I cannot wait for Bette and Tina to meet!!!!
What I enjoy about your story, is the style and language is everyday convo that people can relate to…very good…keep going!
K
Great start, can’t wait for more.
great start cant wait to B&T meet and fall in love..lol..ok post soon
Hello Nipples ;-). Ok, I will behave myself. Wonderful beginning and please continue.
thats right. fun fun fun please. im sure well have drama when they get back into town
Very nice start. Can’t wait for the B&T first meeting. I’m alreadly excited. And with Alice there we know it will be funny. I agree with the others, please no drama just good times, fun, and bit of lovin.
Hey Nipples, your name is hot and like it! Ok this is going to be fun and crazy trip for them, post soon, thanks!
I love it Nips!
Nice beginning Nipples…do continue this one. Looking forward to have some fun with your story or is it drama??? Post soon. Excellent job – keep going
Nipples huh? I have a pair of those! Mines changes colors.
Please Post soon.
great start looking forward to this story please post soon thanx
byeness<339327858913758913759813
i like the start to this,please carry on
Nice start…but puhleze let it be sexy and fun…..no drama on the love boat!
Loving it.. i agree with the rest, let it be fun..
Nice start and please continue. Watch out Olivia B & T are going to start a fire on the ship. ; )
great start so far! can’t wait to read more. i agree with them, no drama on the love boat! haha let them have some hot and sexy fun!
Hahha, I’m blushing at your name… Awesome start, me like! Please continue!
great start, continue please!