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Cruise on the Big Sea Chapter 4
Bette: “Tina I have to tell you that Alice and Dana had to drag me on this cruise because I really didn’t want to come but now I am so glad that I did. “
Tina: ” Well Bette, I’m glad that you did too”
They smile at each other and continue to walk not letting go of each others hands until they got to the very front of the ship on the top deck. As they look out at the sea only one thought continued to go through Bette’s head. She has got to kiss this beautiful creature before she explodes. She looks at Tina and then as gentle as she can she turns Tina so that her back is resting on the railing of the ship. Looking deep into Tina’s eyes Bette then runs her index finger across Tina’s cheek and smiles, asking for permission to kiss her without speaking a word. Tina looks at her and…..
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gives permission with her eyes. Bette leans into Tina and gently kisses Tina on the lips. Tina’s lips are so soft and so warm. Bette wants so much to part her lips with her tongue and take so much more but decides that this girl is special. She doesn’t want to rush things. All in good time!
Bette pulls away from Tina and looks deep into her eyes….
Bette: “I hope that was alright.”
Tina: “That was more than alright. It was great actually.”
Bette: “So you wouldn’t mind if I did it again something then?”
Tina: “No I would like that very much.”
With that Bette takes Tina’s hand again and they start walking. Passing many loving couples they make their way to the disco where Bette is sure the gang has gathered after leaving the bar.
They walk into Disco and the place is booming from the bass of the music and the strob lights are flashing to the beat. They scan the room and find the group in a corner drinking martinis. Alice and Kristin are trying to one up each other once again with their stories while Lexie and Dana are laughing at them to the point they are crying. Bette and Tina approach them hand in hand and this does not go unnoticed by Alice.
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(43 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
Wonderful chapter. I am thinking I need to take a cruise.
Love this story. my fav are B&T beginnings and yours is different and so good. thank you for sharing…..please update soon.
k nips. hell yes id pass out if i was in bettes arms. but dayum girl it would be such a surreal experience that i think i would giggle from nervousness. i really love this story. it makes me smile, not stomach doesnt go into knots, dreading the next sentence. but the funny thing is i look forward to your story just as much as the ones that are killing me right now. so to me you dont need to kill me to get me to read. i really need a cruise also. thanks again.
flippen yay!!!!! im so excited hehe hok well post soon thanx! byeness<3389237489713459817489
ok what’s the deal with Kristin and Bette? anyway, I am glad B and T are taking it slow. It is also great to see Tina embracing Bette so easily. I look forward to your next post.
i love your story so much..hope bette behave..lol..and about Alice..chicki made a favor to make me hate Alice in every story..lol..so for now she is dead for me..lol..kidding but i hope Alice dont ever try to make a move on Bette i will kick her ass..great chapter love it post soon
-Nipps-
I AM SO EXCITED ARE YOU EXCITED?
( I’m anticpating the Dana and Alice break-up and the Dana and Lara reunion)
: D
Cruise ship pizzerias are the shizzle just like this chapter.
Twas funny by the way.
oh come on……..why cant i have 8 or more pages??? thats all that i ask for but NOOOOOOO………jk……..ok…….ill deal with this……wildie
Ok i guess now you can stop crying, i like you again and ALOT, for posting another chapter today.. =D
i like how u’re taking things slow.. it makes it feel more special..
good update but longer please…
Another post! that just scored u brownie points!! Dont get me wrong i love Chicki but she kills me whenever she ends the chapter in a cliffhanger …. Hopefully u won’t end too many chapters like the last one lol….. im loving this B&T beginning cant wait for the next chapter!
Wow wonderful chapter. I love what Bette and Tina have and they are so cute together. Ok post soon please, thanks!
lovin ur story, so what’s up with Kristin??? Is she secretly in love with Tina????
I so want to go on cruise. Read all your chapters and am looking forward to more hijinks and romance on the high seas. Thanks for this adventure.
i think I am with the rest of the readers. let’s all go on a cruise. One big L-Word cruise. Your story is wonderful and I look forward to many more chapters.
Me like!! Ahahahaa, I love Kristin, she is hilarious! Yes, I’m kinda shy, but I’ve gotten better at it now. Believe me though, it’s not that great of a quality, I miss out a lot in life because of it.
I LOVE THIS!! Great reference to Justin Taylor in the last one!! Bette and Tina are so polite, I know I wouldn’t be..hehehee..Thanks for the chapters!!!
K
WOnderful as always, and yes sometimes I do like a tease lol. This is too cute, I just love it. Can’t wait for mroe.
YAHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO They kissed…They kissed!!! I love it. Hey…why am I getting slammed over here in this story??? DAYUMMMM…..LMAO….I get a slap here and there in Art & Beauty (not to mention Renewed Trust)….and now this one??? GRRRRRR….I need to hide in the chat room………anyway. GREAT chapter….I so love that you are really making this a slow burn for B&T. YEAHHHHHHHHH…….I’m just loving it. And you know what? Because I don’t have alot of time to read Fan Fic, I would rather there be only a couple of pages…I can keep up better that way…..
Please keep going……….
B&T are just soooooooooooo damn cute, you gotta love them. And Bette ever the smoothie, standing back just enough. Breakfast should be interesting that is if Bette & Tina can get through the night. Can’t wait till your next update.
haha.. poor Kristin. yeah… cruise sounds fun.
Thank you for the wonderful treat of two chapters. Can’t wait for tomorrow! What will B&T do…hopefully they get to spend some time alone without the rest of the gang. Kiitos!
Ohh yes – absolutely…your story here Nipples is so fresh and new. I belive we all should go on this cruise. Thanks alot for the update. Looking forward to more.
you know your story has me wanting to go on a cruise, but I think I would get sea sick, and that’s not good for a person who is drunk all the time
Another great chapter keep them coming!!! I sure didn’t end up to be the first to comment tonight, oh well i will keep trying!!!
Wonderful Chapter. Bette and Tina are doing great tother.