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    Letting Go – chapter seven

    Story written on August 17, 2005 by smile12345.
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    In art class.

    Chapter seven:

    Tina’s lips were now so close to touching Bette’s, she continued to move forward to close the distance.

    *Ding ding ding ding*

    Damn it, damn that bell for ringing. Sure, it would help Alice escape from her quick witted mouth, but it just wouldn’t help these two women who were falling in love to bring theirs together.

    The sound of the bell stopped the two women in their tracks; their lips were still so close to one another, but none of them dared to get any closer to touch the other. It brought them back into reality, and they just stared into each other’s eyes searching for answers that they didn’t know how to put into words.

    While Bette was gazing into Tina’s orbs, she figured out what Tina wanted to say but was unable to. Bette could tell that Tina wanted to and still does want their lips to touch, to connect, but Tina couldn’t go through with it, because the passion and desire was overshadowed by a sense of guilt and responsibility, both also known as the name “Eric.” Tina’s unable to go through with it, made Bette only respect this woman more, because they were so similar in their beliefs and morals.

    Bette wanted nothing more that second than to kiss Tina, to meet her lips with her own, but in a way, Bette was relieved. She didn’t want to be the reason for someone being unfaithful. From her own experience, she saw the pain it brought to a family, it tore her family apart, and it completed the process to a shattered Bette.

    Bette still wasn’t fully over the death of her beloved grandmother who passed over ten years ago, and to add on to her heartache, she witnessed the struggle her mother went through with her father’s infidelity. Her grandmother already made Bette fear loss and love; and her father’s action was the last straw to make her lose any and all of the trust she had left. This would be why Bette refused to fall in love, why Bette would refuse to become the third person in a relationship.

    After seconds of silence, Tina finally gained the courage to pull herself away from Bette’s gaze. She pushed herself back, and said “I’m…I’m so sorry.”

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    1. I have been reading this from the beginning, your right about a lot of great writers, but your up there with them for sure. Totally love this direction, and pls yess do drag this all out, it’s the essence of a B/T beginning…!!! love it

    3. smiley. you have no reason to smile. you just told me that there is drama coming my way. and your not sure if its drama. what the hell does that mean. ;) you have to know. now if the drama is tina telling eric to take a hike, ok. saved by the bell. pretty funny, girl. post soon please. really liking this story.

    4. hey there! nice to see u had posted. still enjoying the story; the mix of poetry and art reminded me of the time when i used to ask my friends to sing and sketch accordingly…..suffice to say that they ‘ll never sing with me around again!:)

    5. Yippee! I woke up to another awesome chapter. I wont complain that it was too short as I bask in the knowledge another will follow. ;)

      QQg 4frwd 2 the next 1

    7. This was a bit too short. BUt I loved it nevertheless. Can’t wait for your next posting….So TIna needs to talk to Eric and spend time with him so that she can dump him. After that there will be nothing to stop B&T. Right?!? Kiitos!

    8. Oh gosh, I’m doing this at work again. Haha, this time it’s my colleagues that are ‘bothering’ me while I was reading. :P Haha… me?? modest?? Seriously, you’re the one who’ve written this great story :)
      Ooo… haha… Yey, I have more to read ;) off to read it now… Good Luck!!

    9. Smiley, thanks for the short but enticing update. OOOOOOOOOOOH Tina’s in love with Bette. Bye Bye Eric, still on the edge of my seat and looking forward to your next update.

    10. oh Eric, SCHMERIC! He is just a temporary obstacle. these two are made for one another. and yes of course I will continue to read your story. It is a great change of pace for these two. oh yeah I am also looking forward to a couple of nc-17 chapters. but I am very patient. the longer we wait the better. it’s like foreplay! post soon please!

    16. 1 page? That is all we get. The font is huge, the spacing questionable. I’ll say it again. Shameless tease! Shameless!
      Alice is sooooooooooo like me. It is interesting they way you reveal how her mind works. Love it!

    17. Hi smile! I’d vowed that I couldn’t possibly take on yet another FF story (real life starts to get in the way,lol!) but yours kept beckoning…WOW! I’m such an idiot! I just got caught up and WOW!!!…I’m glad for the priviledge to be able to share in such a wonderful story–I love it! Thank you.

    18. Thanks for the wonderful update Smile12345 but it is way to short…you can´t leave us hanging like this….god the torture…now is Tina going to let go off Eric and go forward with Bette…Please post soon

    21. HEY SMILE12345 I WILL NEVER BE TIRED OF YOUR STORY..I KNOW YOU CAN DO SOME NC-17 WHEN ARE WE GOING TO GET SOME OF THAT????(i know i am soooo impatient o.k. i will take the tease hehehehe)THANKS FOR THE SHORT BUT FABULOUS CHAPTER..POST SOON…

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