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The Laws of Attraction: Part Twenty Three
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Dana
was someone used to waiting. She spent almost her entire adult life in
a type of perpetual stasis. Waiting to figure out she was *****, waiting
to find the courage to come out, waiting to tell Alice she loved her,
and now she was waiting for Gabby to end this game she was playing.
Waiting for her to forget Alice and waiting for her to stop integrating
herself into the blonde’s life. Each day that passed Gabby’s presence
seemed to be increasing, she called Alice more, showed up at the
apartment to hang out, and phoned into her radio show.
She knew what Shane said to her a month ago during their talk was true
but Dana couldn’t take it anymore. To keep standing idly by and wait
was killing her because it was the same horrible inaction that had
ruled most of her life. For almost her entire adult life Dana had
waited for things to happen rather than make them happen herself and
because of that she nearly lost everything she ever wanted. Her dreams
of being out and accepted by her family, of being loved by Alice and
loving her in return, they almost slipped past her because she waited.
Waiting just wasn’t working anymore for Dana. It was driving her slowly
insane, seeing Alice with Gabby when she knew what the brunette was up
to. That she wanted Alice back, that she wanted to take Alice away from
her.
Though she loathed the mere idea of thinking of Alice as a possession
Dana couldn’t help but feel that way just because she wanted to hang
onto the writer in that manner. She wanted Alice to always be with her
like an object could, she wanted that safety and reassurance to know
that unless someone stole Alice away she would never leave Dana. But
Alice wasn’t an object, the athlete knew that all too well and she
didn’t want her to be an object, not really. At the same time, she was
just so very scared that Gabby would do what she had done so many times
before and suddenly Dana would find Alice gone.
What Dana told Shane had been the absolute truth. She couldn’t survive
without Alice in her life. For years she loved the writer and wanted
nothing more than to be with her in the way she was now. And for years
she sat by and watched Gabby ***** Deveaux come in like she was doing
now. Come in with sweet words, causing Alice to fall into her arms and
forget all the pain she had caused, then she watched as Gabby broke
Alice’s heart yet again.
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I don’t know which story I love more this one or the other one. I’ll read one and wish you would hurry and write another chapter. Then I read the other and wish you would hurry and write another chapter. You’re killing me. Can you write a chapter for each story each week. You don’t need to have a life. LOL. Great as always, as usual looking foward to your next chapter. PS Not too much heatache for poor Dana in this one.
I like the way you explained the heartache in lara’a life in your story. She is still one of my favorite l word characters and i wish I.C. would make her a permanent character in season 3. I DON’ T CARE IF SHE ENDS UP WITH DANA OR NOT BUT AS LONG AS SHE HAS SOMEONE WHO WILL LOVE HER BACK AS MUCH AS SHE LOVES THEM!!!
Wow – great intensity – Gabby’s emotional breakthrough was so well done.
“The others…..they werent you.” Wonderful.
Bad sex metaphors – lmao!!!
Could you have given it a more ominous ending? damn girl!!
All around phenominal – your last post, i said was your best and now im saying i was wrong – this is and next week, i’ll probably repeat this!
oh dreiser–in the danish universe of writing, you rule. I loved this chapter though the last sentence left a lump in my throat–so brilliant. You mix the humor, love, and angst so well…can’t wait for more.
Festival of angst! I loved it, especially Gabby.
Great as usual! This line had me cracking up “You’ve turned me into Danielle Steele.”, somehow I can see Gabby saying it. I feel bad for the peep though, to be chucked aside for the same woman. Great emotional chapter.
Lovely intensity.. and I am as nervous as Dana now. LOL
WOW! This was DEEP! I sincerely hope that Alice doesnt do what she has always done….run back to Gabby fucking Deveaux!!!
NOOOOO…Alice dont do it! You’ve almost made me like Gabby …but before Dana and Alice got together in this fic Dana was willing to give Alice up if it meant she would be happy and Gabby isnt…so still Danish!
You’re a wonderful writer, I can believe you made Lara an interesting character, lol, at least to me in this chapter ;P . Now I’m really worried for the last sentence. Waiting the next post. Thanks.
This is such a good story. Gabby is evil, but I’ve always liked her. If Alice and Dana didn’t get together, I would have loved for Gabby to have come to this realization. Right now I’m torn, but danish is my love. I hope Alice doesn’t hurt Dana.