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Vignettes: Chapter 60
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Tina made her way out of the shower and rubbed her head with a towel to dry it off. She looked in the mirror and frowned. Her hair had started to dry and the gray was noticeable. She pinched her cheeks and tugged at her skin, stretching it to remove the wrinkles.
“You don’t look a day past thirty.”
Tina quickly turned around and saw Bette standing in the doorway smiling.
“You have to say things like that. You’re my wife.”
“True.” Bette walked over to Tina and wrapped her arms around her waist. She then kissed her bare shoulder, her deep brown eyes staring into Tina’s through the mirror. “But I’m not a liar, despite my marital status.”
“But you stretch the truth.”
“T, your beauty and youth surpasses definition and age.”
Tina turned around and rested her arms around Bette’s neck before she kissed her. “I’m lucky to have you. After all these years… and I’m still in love.”
“It’s a funny thing, love.” Bette grinned.
“Remember when we were young and in love?”
“How could I forget.”
“Do you ever wish we could go back to those times? We were so young and full of passion.”
Bette shook her head. “I wouldn’t trade today for yesterday. We have a different kind of love now. Age is beautiful and you have become more attractive with every day. I’m settled with you.”
Tina scrunched up her face thinking for a minute. “I love you.”
“I’ll hold you to that.”
“You always have.”
Tina hopped in the shower, winking over her shoulder. Bette went to the kitchen and ate a banana while she waited for Tina to give her some time in the bathroom. When she heard the water turn off, she made her way down the hallway. As she passed Zoe’s room, she stopped and peered inside. She almost knocked out of habit, forgetting that her daughter was away at school. Everything was tidy just as it had been when she was living at home. The shelves were more empty and her favorite blanket was missing, but it still smelled of Zoe. Bette sat on the bed and picked up a photo album that was left behind on the night stand. She recognized some pictures, but others weren’t familiar, as they were Zoe’s own memories. Tina passed the open door then turned around and watched Bette.
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Great update..I love the older Bette she show’s her true self to us more..I always new she had the biggest heart just afraid to show it… Post soon
Fareast,
Another couple of brilliant chapters.
It is a thing of beauty in the way you dip back into the past and balance it against the present.
The relationships between these characters are perfectly realized in this drama. Although they ebb and flow over time; they are constant.
The simple interaction between Bette and Tina demonstrates the ease of their partnership and how comfortable they are with one another.
The Saturday ritual is a flawless example of how you take a straightforward scene and imbue it with wonder.
Again Bette and Dakota bond is laid bare. Bette instinctively knows how best to handle her daughter and how to resolve her daughter’s concerns. This maternal intuition only comes from time and effort.
Keep this fabulous fac fic rolling along forever.
I’ll be here waiting and watching for it.
Your Loyal Fan.
I hope that ‘doctor’s visit’ isn’t an easter egg, waiting to open and drop its contents!
Great story! Keep it up! I wonder why Dakota is so harried?
Thanks!
fareast I really love this story and been following it since the begining, I was just wondering what happened all this time between Alice and Dana… I would love to know that.
Excellent update, Fareast! But I wonder what is going on with Dakota? Is she really in love?
And from the last post – so fun! Sex on the sidewalk, indeed! You are a very clever one. Keep up the wonderful ideas.
Have a great day – looking forward to the next beautiful chapter. Thanks so very much for sharing your time and talent. As you already know… I am a huge fan!
K
They are so cute. Love them as mothers. Can’t wait for more.
This aging Bette and Tina always make me a bit teary eyed, maybe because it’s a nice to think of them as getting older and being happy together and the rest of the gang too :) So why do I think Dakota is going to make them grandparents soon ;) ?
is Dakota pregnant????..love the way she open up with Bette even know Tina is her birth mother and she only knew Bette around 5.. still they really love each hope they talk..and about Alice she still the same never grow..great chapter as always post soon love it :o)
just great Fareast… so what Kody is hiding, huh? and Bette is so wiser…lol
Amazing as ever….I love the relationship Bette has with Dakota…..Ok so how did the girls miss her comment about the doctor’s visit?! I hope Bette can persuade her to talk about it…..Thanks for the update
nice!!!!!!!!!!
There are so many things about your stories that give them depth. The rich texture of friendships that have flourished over the years, definition of family, timeless themes of youth and age, wisdom and experience.
An empty nest is a difficult concept to come to terms with, but they have the luxury of having a daughter that lives in town…and children that truly love them.
Dakota keeps things to herself, much like Bette. Is she afraid of love because of Bette and Tina’s past? Or is just our inate fear of rejection?
The interaction between Bette and Tina in the bathroom was heavenly. They are each other’s best cheerleaders. Time may dull some of our senses, but it only makes love grow deeper. They are a devining rod for each other’s best qualities, pulling them out of the deep recesses of their beings and carefully handing them over like a precious gift.
I too, wonder if Dakota may be pregnant.
Looking forward to coffee with Dakota and Bette…and to the anniversary party!
I need to savor this chapter like a fine wine. Please excuse me while I go sip again!
ah doesn’t age brings out the real you… hopefully. Bette seems to be wiser and calmer… living her life more.
Amazing update fareast. Loving the fact Dekota is being cross examed by her family….now we all went through it. This is excellent, keep up the wonderfull work. post soon
What an awesome update. Yes Bette you have taken your life experiences and are now using them wisely. Her touch with Dakota is perfect and sensitive and insightful. Wonderfully told, thanks
I have to say I really enjoy the dynamics of Bette’s and Dakota’s relationship. Yet Dakota’s relationship seems strained with Tina and I can’t figure out why. great chapter as always! Keep up the wonderful writing.
love this bette – a very special mother energy.
what a delightful way to start the day. this was awesome. the insights into the characters is spot on. the depth of this story is beautiful. thanks for the update.
I love the girls interaction with Dakota, especially between her and Bette. Nice to know that B & T still have their moments, but in the “old” days, Bette would have joined Tina in that shower! :-)
Well, I finally had enough sense to read this fanfic and I’m glad about it. This story is a great idea and written beautifully…and you have found a way to keep it going in the same format without losing a beat. PERFECT!
I just love this story. It always seems that Bette is the one the girls turn to with the personal turmoil, how and when did she become the calm one.
All children goes through the same thing, Parent doesnt meam to pry. thats just parents. All children needs parents sometime. Bette was very smart, Letting Dakota know that she is there for her anytime, thanks
I just caught up with this story ,and wow. It never ceases to amaze me. I never even tried to picture B&T at this age,but you’ve done a beautiful job of aging them. To perfection. Keep up the great work!